I Loaded the Kaitan Game

Originally, the focus of the soul-walking series was on difficult monsters, but in this book, the monsters were not difficult, and the main character was too weak, which made me laugh. Especially when a self-destruction was developed later. Logically speaking, the perspective immediately returns after the self-destruction is activated, which means it should be an instant explosion. However, the author forcibly added a 15s setting, which left me speechless. The Apollo next door lasted a long time because of its great power and wide range. Your self-destruction is not as strong as Apollo, but how long does it take to explode? You were setting off fireworks, and you even created a debuff to attract monsters throughout the map. Byd laughed in anger.

Tired of seeing it! A single female protagonist is a single female protagonist! Without a heroine, there would be no heroine! If you open a harem, open a harem! Can you speak well? ! Do a good job? ! Ordinary, spiritual, weird, shikigami! Throughout the entire article, there is no mention of love! The entire article is full of ambiguity! If you refuse, don't get involved! After a few chapters, he pulls it out again, tugging, tugging, tugging! Procrastinate! What's the point? ! Oh, it has to be written about a girl forcing herself on the protagonist, and then the protagonist says he was forced and had no choice but to accept it? In what era is it still written this way? ! Isn't it disgusting? Chapter 300! Can you come on right away? If I were Miss Mary! I would have killed you long ago! Ha, ugh! Pooh! Slipping away.

The author's basic setting is good because he copied a bunch of classic games and myths. This is why this book has been ordered thousands of times, but the rest of the book is just a piece of cake and has many shortcomings. 1 First of all, the most serious problem that countless readers have complained about is that the combat power is severely suppressed and the combat power is unbalanced. The author tried hard to write a soul-based game feeling, but when implemented in the novel, it was so frustrating that it exploded. Moreover, it was because the author was afraid that the combat power would increase and he would not be able to control the plot. In essence, it reflected the author's ability. The protagonist, Miss Mary, is at the same level as the opposite ghost talk, but with the protagonist group being unable to defeat it, it can only be said that the author has cut it. 2. The author is really insensitive to data. Whether it is the protagonist's attributes, money or even combat power, the protagonist defeated an A-level Fuso wood. The official task reward was 40 million yen or 2 million yuan, which seems like a lot. But the problem is that according to the setting, only Japan's official department can independently There are only two people who have established a B-level ghost talk. This monster has no protagonist and the official mailed it directly. It is a supernatural department supported by the government of a country. You are so demanding and searching, and you still expect a group of supernatural beings to work for you. The salary of an official supernatural being is only 20,000 yuan, which is not even comparable to that of an office clerk. You are just sending a beggar. 3 The author has really mastered the Japanese-style Western male protagonist. It can be said that this male protagonist has no charisma and is indecisive. You can either have a harem or concentrate on becoming stronger. The author is not interested. I am just pulling and playing, simply playing on the audience's patience. 4 The author really doesn't have an outline. He just writes about where he is. The monsters in the early stage all rely on deus ex machina. The protagonist is lucky enough to meet Miss Mary, and also lucky enough to meet the medicine buyer. The medicine buyer's magic sword is also lucky enough to have a special attack for people like the park owners who write diaries, and even the missing protagonist has been sent. 5 The official organization written by the author is also the lowest quality among the many novels I have read. In the early stage, I thought there was a big boss hiding to support the official. Later I found out that this organization is a real one. It can last for so many years without being destroyed. It is purely the author's setting. 6 The author's updates are more unstable than a woman's mood. He updated two chapters in more than a month. No, it's still the same sentence. Either be a eunuch or update it quickly. You are just updating like a child.

Quick update, write quickly. Otherwise the coins are gone.

When I saw the first four ghost stories in the introduction, I thought of a certain monk who physically exorcises demons...

Tested by a bookworm of twenty years; the author is a seasoned veteran; I guess someone jumped on the street and changed his vest to try the waters again.

I've read almost 400 chapters, and I think I'm qualified to evaluate it. To be honest, it got a bit boring in the middle, too boring... I have no interest in reading anymore, let's not talk about how stretched your combat power system is (the protagonist's body is too rubbish, just a few attributes, to put it bluntly, he is stronger) How can a young man beat the ghost story? Does it all rely on equipment? ), The plot is mediocre, and the setting is constantly added. I can see that the author is a little lack of inspiration in the middle. I have read similar novels (Demonstration starts in Tamamo-mae), the author can learn from others.

So far, it looks pretty good. Although it has some flaws, it looks pretty good overall. A few flaws are still acceptable. After all, the flaws don't cover up the good! Come on, author

Looking forward to Miss Mary! Come out quickly, this is my wife

I can't stand it. The male protagonist chooses one of the three options at the beginning and only considers the later development. He chooses a scrap that is useless in the early stage, and then dies immediately without any surprise. After resurrecting, he blames the game for setting the start to such a powerful monster or something. He doesn't consider his own problems at all and just curses. When choosing props, he says that this prop is good or so for various reasons. If he dies, blame the game, haha.