The Demon King is Unfathomable

Although it is the same routine as the previous book, it cannot be written well after changing the world view. After entering the dungeon, it has been accelerating the pace to create conflicts. The beginning is a confrontation between various forces, and there are not many paragraphs to supplement the image of each local NPC character. Both the monster leader and the human NPC are very thin. The decision-making discussion is like playing chess. If you make this move, I think you are going to ××. I predict you, and I will make this move. It makes sense in terms of gaming, but the writing is the same, like a doppelgänger of the same person. The combination of the Dihua plot and the group portrait plot is also not very good. There are a lot of group portraits, but not much space for the protagonist. In the end, it is just unfathomable and has no feeling. There are other shortcomings too, but I'm too lazy to mention them. Anyway, if I keep writing like this, it's hard to gain popularity.

After seeing 155, I am ready to give up. Che Luan talks a lot, and the writing is simple and smooth. The writing style keeps up with the book one day at a time. You can read it twice and read it a few times before continuing. You will not miss the plot at all. Character facial expression should be called this. The protagonist spends most of his time operating in an environment with demons around him. The demons that are useful to him are written like human beings. The demons that are villains are written in various negative, intellectual, and cruel ways. It's like applying a template. Replacing the devil with a human being is completely suitable, or removing the sentences describing the appearance and body shape. It can be said to be describing the history of struggle in the human kingdom. So here comes the question, why do I want to read human stories in demon skin instead of just reading human stories? You can brag about battle reports, but the battle lines don't lie. The feedback results from the two books before and after show that readers are not easy to fool. The gods are full of ghosts, please end it quickly. This book is confusing, but I am looking forward to the next one.

Compared with the previous book, the quality has not dropped much, but when it comes to life experience and the so-called sister, it is terrible, with childish plots and plot designs that forcefully subdue one's wits. I don't want to say more, bad review.

Stick with my rating. 👿, Use your strengths more and expose your weaknesses less. The advantage of the author's first novel is the grand world view and amazing imagination; the Demon King has too many characters and the world view is not constructed in depth enough. Instead, it abandons the original characteristics and focuses on the harem, but the harem must have its own characteristics. Too many stereotyped characters will make people tired. Of course, if the author wants to relax, have fun, and indulge, it doesn't matter if he tests the waters with one or two books.

One thing to say is that the first few dozen chapters were written in a hurry and the details were not polished well. It feels like they were rushed out. I guess the author didn't even think about the outline yet, so he started the book while thinking about it in order to participate in the Qidian activities. Moreover, in order to replicate the successful experience of the previous book, the author's content and player characters can be said to be very repetitive. But after it was put on the shelves, I felt that the author had figured out the problem. Those who liked the fourth natural disaster novel had basically been attracted by the previous book. If they continue to repeat the routine of the previous book now, it will make a large number of old readers feel disappointed. Therefore, the author has escaped the influence of the previous book. I feel that the author has slowed down and polished the details. He uses idealistic beliefs as the source of power. The world view is successfully developed, the characters have also been innovated, and the logic is polished. The protagonist is the core of the book, not the player. It's pretty cool to see the people behind.

It is estimated that there are not many female readers of this article, so the author is more interested in making jokes that cater to readers' tastes. When I saw the goblin plot for the first time, I didn't understand it. I didn't understand what it meant. It felt baffling. After reading it, I got it through the comments. It's normal. If you watch both male and female channels, some male channels prefer dirty jokes and greasy plots, which are somewhat incompetent. But if the plot is good, ignore it. After all, the female author next door also talks about men in her articles. The article next door, "Conquering the Other World Begins from the Game", which is similar to this article, is also said to be a fistfight by male readers, so they are mutually exclusive. But now more and more authors are playing gender cards in their articles than before. Anyway, no matter what others think, I find it quite boring...

It's a dry food level, with no obvious cool points or poisonous points. It's quite bland. The most important thing is that the characters in it have very weak personalities and no character arcs. It always gives you a sense of déjà vu. The most important thing is that the strength setting in it is too vague and the protagonist will not face much pressure, because the protagonist can explode at will, and the technology (such as the magic crystal cannon) transcends classes, so no matter whether the protagonist is upgraded or not, or how well the player builds it, there is no obvious sense of satisfaction. If you can't defeat it, you can run away and return to the demon world.

Looking at it now, it feels like the background of the world has just been changed and the same template has been applied. There is no essential difference from the previous book. Even the supporting characters are similar...

The more you look at the back, the better it gets. Especially when the Demon King begins to infiltrate the empire, it starts to get more and more over the top. It's not enough to look at at all. At the beginning, like everyone else, I felt that the previous part was like a template and a bit boring, but as the plot progressed to hell and the empire, the demon king played with the sophistication of the world and the human heart. It was really over the top!

It's also a game, so it's hard for this book to surpass the previous one. It feels a bit watery, especially the part where I interact with the vampire sister. It's really awkward.