Who Let This Dementor into Hogwarts!

Keywords: time traveler, fan fiction, interesting Brief comment: The writing is good and the rhythm is good, but I don't know why it is not popular.

Reading progress: Chapter 51, evaluation: Liangcao+ Advantages: 1. A relatively rare fun article in the HP fan series 2. The setting is quite interesting. The protagonist is the experimental product of a dark wizard. This setting is quite rare (I have seen similar ones in my memory, but they are not very good). 3. The semi-invincible flow of half-human + mechanical monster is very suitable for fun people. You can do everything as a decent villain, and you will be happy. 4. The protagonist's pet owl can talk. This second setting will make the original author frown at first, but it turns out that this character is well written. Disadvantages: 1. Seedlings 2. There are slightly too many secondary settings and some plots/settings are not reasonable (not serious) Conclusion: The writing is okay, the setting is good, there are some small flaws, but the high concentration of fun can cover up all the shortcomings.

Reading progress: Chapter 403 Order of the Phoenix Reading score: 32 points, recommended Review summary: The main fun lies in the protagonist's words. Some of the original characters are well developed. Other aspects are hard to describe. Writing style (7 points): The writing style is very funny, especially the frequent ethnic jokes mainly about dementors in the early stage are very interesting. The dialogue involving the protagonist is full of humor while being funny. As for the descriptions of various environments, characters, scenes, actions, etc., They are all okay. They do not reflect the weird children's literature flavor of the original work, but there is nothing out of the ordinary. Characters (7 points): The descriptions of the protagonist and the original characters around him are quite good. The character's image is based more on interaction than direct description. Of course, there are some deliberately funny parts, but overall it's quite likable. However, the characters in the original work are very briefly portrayed, and they are basically just tools for the plot. Plot (6 points): Although it seems that a lot of work has been done, the main plot still follows the original work or the main line of the original protagonist group. As a fan work, it's not a shortcoming. However, the original plots are mixed, and some of the plots involving family relationships are remarkable, allowing people to feel the warmth of family affection and the beauty of humanity. However, there are also some parts of the plot that are very average, and can even be said to be perfunctory. It feels like it is simply a waste of words. Setting (6 points): Overall, the good and evil value system does not have a high sense of existence. It can only be said to give the protagonist some motivation to jump left and right. To be honest, apart from the dementors, the main character's own bloodline seems to be useless. It is simply a tool to create parental status and drag out the plot. The rest of the story doesn't interpret or expand much on the original setting. The core is still the dementors in the title. Thoughts (6 points): The admiration for family and friendship deserves recognition. Cruelty to strangers is open to question.

It's a very special entry point, and it's also a work of good quality. More details will be added later!