
Starting from Scratch, Batman Shattered My Dream of Getting Rich
by Mars Coffee
About This Novel
Generally speaking, if I have to travel to American comics, I hope to avoid the dark world of DC. If I must travel to DC, then at least don't let me travel to those high-risk cities, such as Gotham, which has simple folk customs. If I must be allowed to travel to Gotham - please provide a system so that the child can still live. "The self-made system has been loaded. Please work hard to make money and get rich through hard work. As the saying goes, money can guide you. Before you are penniless, you will always have the opportunity to continue." Ma Zhaodi took a deep breath and geared up. At least he had a cheat in this dangerous world. One month later. The dark bats spread their wings and flew in the night sky, biting down fiercely. The members who used the restaurant as a camouflage base had their bones broken in a few seconds. Ma Zhaodi stared dumbfoundedly at the restaurant where he had just worked for a month, drifting away with the salary he would receive tomorrow. Where is my boss? Where is my job? Where is my monthly salary? Batman, I'll go to school at eight in the morning!
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Official(71)Scraped 2d ago
1. Does this book have a main plot? All plot advancement depends on tasks issued by the system? What will the protagonist do when there are no tasks? Has the author ever thought about it? 2. The writing of the first few chapters is indeed good, and it does not deviate from the introduction. When the protagonist is weak, he tries to avoid intersecting with dangerous plot tasks. The small characters created are also very distinctive (the first person to rob the protagonist, the bus driver, the manager of the Red Dragon Restaurant). 3. However, after the protagonist accumulated capital, he first did not purchase his own industry, and secondly, he did not strengthen himself (all relying on system task rewards). I would like to ask, what about your story of starting from scratch? More than 100 chapters later, the protagonist is still waiting for tasks. The way to obtain assets is for others to hire him as a waiter. This is too poisonous. In addition, you are too kneeling to Batman and Harvey. Author, you have to figure out how many magical recovery items you can provide them with. The protagonist who wants to be a nanny will never be popular. 4. I have to mention Festival Killer, it's too TMSB, it's shaped like shit, there's so much foreshadowing in the early stage, it's like a big boss, but in the end, just..., The author really made a big deal out of it.
Delete the protagonist
It starts out extremely interesting, but it quickly takes a turn for the worse. What idiot would choose a holiday killer as the main storyline? Because of his behavioral characteristics, this character is a time delayer. Batman animations and comics can be described in this way because we know that in the real timeline, Batman can handle many other cases during this period. Where is the protagonist? It was originally a flat character design, because the case of Holiday Killer, which has dragged on for more than a hundred chapters, has not grown at all for so many months. It has almost integrated into Gotham and turned into a local NPC that delivers props and assists to Batman. Author, you love writing about Batman so much, why not delete the protagonist!
So, the protagonist also has a no-kill principle? The protagonist has no character or principles of his own, and relies entirely on system tasks to follow the plot. Those who deserve to die have to be saved, and those who don't deserve to die have become numbers and data. As long as they have names in the original work, they will not die. The persona given to the protagonist for fun has become a pure nanny persona. The author really likes to describe how cruel the villain is, how many people he has killed, and how bottomless he is, but he just can't die. , The protagonist does not kill people. On the contrary, he saves those gangster scum and writes many fictional stories to whitewash the gangster scum. Then the people killed by these gangster scum died in vain. It was quite interesting to watch at first, but after watching it, I realized that this protagonist is actually a tool used to promote the plot. He has no principles and character of his own, and the more he watches, the more uncomfortable he becomes.
Asians can't survive more than three hours in the music industry. Some people read such unrealistic books. It's just like Americans can't be policemen in China.
I can't stand it anymore. It's a bastard setting. The protagonist doesn't want to strengthen himself. You are in the simple Gotham City.
Awesome good book
Is the author a fan of someone else? The plot and writing are of a very high standard. A kind-hearted ordinary person who is troubled is portrayed quite well.
You can watch it, but it's recommended to watch it when it's free. It's too watery. The latest dungeon is actually The Black Robe Picket😰. I originally thought it would go directly to the world where Superman died, but it turned out that I changed the site. I used to write the drama version of The Flash and the dungeon was watery enough😅 But now it's even worse. I put a world where Superman died as a bait and then went to write a long story about the Black Robe Picket Squad. This is it💩
The book is good, a rare breath of fresh air. In this era of decisive killing, the protagonist is a Madonna, a real Madonna. I think the best part is Constantine, a different Constantine, especially the 7-day resurrection episode. It made me laugh to death. However, the black robe is really boring because it brings a Superman. As long as there is Superman, there is no pressure at all. And the protagonist really shouldn't write a battle of wits. It's meaningless and not good-looking. A Madonna like the protagonist should give others redemption and hope when they are about to die. Just like constantine
I read the chapters before they were released. Overall, it's a somewhat crazy, funny, healing and heart-warming story. It's quite good.
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Official(71)Scraped 2d ago
1. Does this book have a main plot? All plot advancement depends on tasks issued by the system? What will the protagonist do when there are no tasks? Has the author ever thought about it? 2. The writing of the first few chapters is indeed good, and it does not deviate from the introduction. When the protagonist is weak, he tries to avoid intersecting with dangerous plot tasks. The small characters created are also very distinctive (the first person to rob the protagonist, the bus driver, the manager of the Red Dragon Restaurant). 3. However, after the protagonist accumulated capital, he first did not purchase his own industry, and secondly, he did not strengthen himself (all relying on system task rewards). I would like to ask, what about your story of starting from scratch? More than 100 chapters later, the protagonist is still waiting for tasks. The way to obtain assets is for others to hire him as a waiter. This is too poisonous. In addition, you are too kneeling to Batman and Harvey. Author, you have to figure out how many magical recovery items you can provide them with. The protagonist who wants to be a nanny will never be popular. 4. I have to mention Festival Killer, it's too TMSB, it's shaped like shit, there's so much foreshadowing in the early stage, it's like a big boss, but in the end, just..., The author really made a big deal out of it.
Delete the protagonist
It starts out extremely interesting, but it quickly takes a turn for the worse. What idiot would choose a holiday killer as the main storyline? Because of his behavioral characteristics, this character is a time delayer. Batman animations and comics can be described in this way because we know that in the real timeline, Batman can handle many other cases during this period. Where is the protagonist? It was originally a flat character design, because the case of Holiday Killer, which has dragged on for more than a hundred chapters, has not grown at all for so many months. It has almost integrated into Gotham and turned into a local NPC that delivers props and assists to Batman. Author, you love writing about Batman so much, why not delete the protagonist!
So, the protagonist also has a no-kill principle? The protagonist has no character or principles of his own, and relies entirely on system tasks to follow the plot. Those who deserve to die have to be saved, and those who don't deserve to die have become numbers and data. As long as they have names in the original work, they will not die. The persona given to the protagonist for fun has become a pure nanny persona. The author really likes to describe how cruel the villain is, how many people he has killed, and how bottomless he is, but he just can't die. , The protagonist does not kill people. On the contrary, he saves those gangster scum and writes many fictional stories to whitewash the gangster scum. Then the people killed by these gangster scum died in vain. It was quite interesting to watch at first, but after watching it, I realized that this protagonist is actually a tool used to promote the plot. He has no principles and character of his own, and the more he watches, the more uncomfortable he becomes.
Asians can't survive more than three hours in the music industry. Some people read such unrealistic books. It's just like Americans can't be policemen in China.
I can't stand it anymore. It's a bastard setting. The protagonist doesn't want to strengthen himself. You are in the simple Gotham City.
Awesome good book
Is the author a fan of someone else? The plot and writing are of a very high standard. A kind-hearted ordinary person who is troubled is portrayed quite well.
You can watch it, but it's recommended to watch it when it's free. It's too watery. The latest dungeon is actually The Black Robe Picket😰. I originally thought it would go directly to the world where Superman died, but it turned out that I changed the site. I used to write the drama version of The Flash and the dungeon was watery enough😅 But now it's even worse. I put a world where Superman died as a bait and then went to write a long story about the Black Robe Picket Squad. This is it💩
The book is good, a rare breath of fresh air. In this era of decisive killing, the protagonist is a Madonna, a real Madonna. I think the best part is Constantine, a different Constantine, especially the 7-day resurrection episode. It made me laugh to death. However, the black robe is really boring because it brings a Superman. As long as there is Superman, there is no pressure at all. And the protagonist really shouldn't write a battle of wits. It's meaningless and not good-looking. A Madonna like the protagonist should give others redemption and hope when they are about to die. Just like constantine
I read the chapters before they were released. Overall, it's a somewhat crazy, funny, healing and heart-warming story. It's quite good.
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There is no heroine, but she is kind-hearted. The early writing was quite good, even if I don't watch DC, I still enjoyed watching it. It was probably when the protagonist finished solving the problems in this universe and traveled to other parallel universes. After mixing with The Flash in that world, I felt that it was not as interesting as before. Of course, it was not as interesting as before. Maybe it's because I don't read DC and don't know much about superhero stories, but when I got to The Flash, there were indeed a lot of comments about this chapter in the comment area saying it was poorly written. I skipped the chapter and read it. Well, I found that skipping a chapter didn't actually affect the reading...




Rating ⭐⭐⭐⭐ I just want to earn 3,000 yuan a month, and you guys who are mentally ill are targeting me. What a shame!














