Hogwarts Madman Diary

Reading progress: 30 chapters, evaluation: Liangcao+ Advantages: 1. A relatively rare non-human protagonist among HP fanfics 2. The writing style is good, and the pace of telling the story is also very good. It does not make the mistake of spending a lot of words to forcefully explain one's second setting. It feels good to let the story unfold slowly with the setting. 3. The time point is also relatively rare for the parent generation. 4. There is no Deng Hei conspiracy theory Disadvantages: 1. Seedlings, the kind that look so bad that people worry they will die. 2. There is an original female character... And her surname is Cobot, so I'm a little worried that something from DC will come in later... In fact, the setting of this book is similar to "Who let this dementor into Hogwarts!" " Are quite similar, but the writing style is completely different. This one is more serious. Although the protagonist is also a fun-loving person, the elements of hell are greater than the jokes.

Reading progress: Chapter 170: Bombardment of the Ministry of Magic Reading score: 34 points, recommended. Review summary: The Hogwarts adventure of the original generation. The protagonist should be of indigenous origin, with a somewhat evil background. The writing is smooth and full of joy. The character creation is consistent with the original work, and the interpretation can be justified. The expanded mythological background is not too obtrusive. The affirmation of "love" is quite positive. Writing style (7): The writing is smooth. The description of the environment is acceptable, but I think it lacks the weirdness of the original work where dreams and evil coexist. However, most fans don't pay attention to the weird atmosphere of children's literature, and they can't force it. There are not many action scenes, basically no big scenes. The language description is very brilliant, especially the inner talk of the protagonist, which is one of the biggest highlights of this article. The details of the writing are well grasped, especially the description of the expressions in the verbal confrontation is very careful. Character (8): It seems that he is not a time-traveling protagonist at the moment. The title says it's about evil thoughts, so naturally it's impossible to expect a lawful good protagonist. But judging from the description of the inner drama, when the protagonist appears on the stage, he has relatively obvious malice towards beings other than his mother. Personally, I think the description of the original characters in the original novel is consistent with the original novel, especially the portrayal of James and his gang is relatively likable. The creation of female characters is also relatively full. Whether it is the mother, Lily or the follower, they all show their own thinking and persistence, rather than just facial makeup. This kind of skill is quite rare in today's online novels. However, it must be pointed out that as 11-year-old children, the students' behavior was a bit too mature. I'm afraid it will be difficult to show the trajectory of growth as the plot progresses. Plot (6): The overall pace of the plot is slow, with more than 400,000 words, only half a year has passed. I'm afraid this is not for 5 million words. There is basically no poisonous point, and there is no plot that is obviously mentally retarded. However, many key plot points seem a bit deliberate and a bit staged. Setting (6): The current plot mainly expands the worldview of Western biblical stories and fantasy novels. The protagonist's djinn ability is actually very powerful. It currently displays limited wishes, 7 times damage back, soul control, etc. In order to prevent the plot from getting out of control, many patches were made and restrictions were made through deliberate plot coincidences. Overall, it can be said to be interesting, but not outstanding. Thought (7): The main character is not a good person. However, the overall tone of the novel is still an affirmation of "love". Whether it is the maternal love of the mother, Lily's fraternity, the friendship between James and Sirius, Dumbledore's love for his relatives, and even the protagonist's "doting" for his mother, there are highlights worthy of appreciation.

Another HP fanfic. It is being serialized and is still in the early stages. The protagonist is an original character, not a time traveler, neither a human being nor an individual (real situation). A great devil who strives to walk on the evil path (subjective) and is committed to killing the two generations of Dark Lords before and after him, but in fact he is still a baby hahahaha😂. Okay, I don't even know what I'm talking about. Anyway, the writing style and plot are quite to my liking, so keep reading. (Actually, I'm not even a fan of original works or movies, but I read HP fanfics one after another... Maybe it's because it's easier to find high-quality HP fanfics than other online articles. And is it true that this world view is easier for authors to develop?)

This is a masterpiece that was delayed by the title of the book. The protagonist is Cain in the Bible and the genie of Aladdin's magic lamp. He lives in the body of Grindelwald's deputy son and Dumbledore's great-nephew. Every day he thinks about how to trick others into making wishes and harvesting souls. The story line breaks away from the scope of students and professors. It has the beauty of a devilish guy, which is highly recommended.