Reviews of Yezhu Zhai

Reading progress: CCCXXXII. Return of the King Total score: 32 points, recommended, but currently only chapters before Poseidon are recommended. Overall evaluation: A great collection of bad ideas, with an abstract style that is hard to match. The group portraits are very distinct. It's currently tending to be unfinished. Writing (7 points): There are so many bad memes on the Internet nowadays, it will be very interesting if you watch them on demand. Plot (6 points): The previous plots of Poseidon were pretty good, but here the outline flow was completely thrown off, and there was no decent explanation. It felt like it was about to end. It's possible that I lost control after the plot unfolded. Characters (7 points): The group portrait description is quite successful, and more than ten main characters can leave a distinct impression. Setting (6 points): The world of ultimate stitching and the background of pseudo-group wear. The power system is quite confusing and there is no clear description. It's quite satisfactory and there are no obvious loopholes. Thoughts (6 points): Mainly a simple fun-loving person, but essentially a vicious pirate and a scheming gangster.

Reading progress: Chapter 249 Reading score: 25 points, not recommended. Overall Rating: A custom-made mash-up of the worlds of American dramas, using the protagonist with Asperger's Syndrome in The Accountant Assassin, who is both civilized and martial, as a time-travel vehicle. It is basically a pure novel routine. The plot is very short and lacks necessary ups and downs. The facial expressions are taken seriously. Although there is nothing wrong with the facial expressions, it is difficult to unify the aesthetics. The existence of yin and yang cheats is very low, but there is still an obvious disconnect every time it is mentioned. The protagonist's moral values ​​are relatively vague, and his senses are like those of a supermodel. Writing style: (6 points) Most of the narrative is straightforward. The author cleverly avoids descriptions of action scenes and big scenes, but the sense of picture and excitement are relatively lacking. It can carry the story relatively smoothly and is enough to guide readers to continue reading. Plot: (5 points) Invincibility, pretentiousness, and crushing are all okay, but the author avoids describing the protagonist's actual combat abilities for the sake of convenience, which leads to many times when the plot ends abruptly when it reaches its climax. The plot is too short. Setting: (5 points) First of all, Asperger syndrome and IQ are not necessarily related! Secondly, the yin and yang system is already very crude, but it is still very abrupt every time it is mentioned and feels uninterested. However, as a mashup of plots, the connection between various American dramas is very smooth, and the appearances of many characters are eye-catching. Character: (5 points) The protagonist himself is a typical tool man, moving wherever he needs to, and he also meets some of the characteristics of Asperger's syndrome. The characters who appeared, especially the highly intelligent characters in the original work, were not very good in order to accommodate the protagonist's performance. Thoughts: (4 points) Although there is no guilt in pretending, and the invincible text is also very good, the plot of the female version of Emperor Moriarte is obviously out of control. Even though the appearance tendency shown in the previous text is obvious, the moral bottom line has shifted, and it has crossed the line.

Reading progress: Chapter 919 Overall rating: 32 points, recommended Overall evaluation: The author's settings and descriptions of the dungeon are very exciting, but the plot and characters of the main world are obviously too much. The writing is clear and the depiction of the fighting scenes is wonderful. The style is obvious and worth reading. Writing style (7 points): The writing style is good and the imagery is strong, especially the fantasy-style fighting scenes, which are very eye-catching. Plot (6 points): There are many shortcomings in the plot, especially the part involving simulators, the difference and switching between mental simulation, physical simulation, etc., And there are some places that are difficult to justify. It greatly affects the understanding of the plot. The multi-female protagonist setting fails to grasp the female characters well. Some regrets. But the copy is so wonderfully written that I can only read it once if I only look at the copy. Setting (7 points): A world where immortal weirdness and personal practice coexist. Frankly speaking, the sense of fragmentation and contradiction is relatively obvious. Basically, the bosses are like plot kills. There is no indescribable and indescribable knot between man and nature. The existence of the simulator becomes more like a burden as the plot develops, and it is often disconnected from the plot. Characters (6 points): The protagonist is positioned more like a pure tool man. Most of the characters tend to be facial-like, and once out of the dungeon, the description of the characters seems to be perfunctory. But the performance in the copy is pretty good. Thoughts (6 points): The main theme of heroism is paired with a weird Cthulhu-like background. It can only be said that subjectively, I really want to create a positive atmosphere. But the performance was quite embarrassing. Especially the expression of the superego in the main world is a bit difficult to understand.

Reading progress: Volume 2, Chapter 4 Reading score: 26 points, not recommended Overall evaluation: The story is told relatively smoothly, the character creation is a bit stiff, and the foreshadowing is rather abrupt. There should still be a distinction between neurosis, psychosis, and true madness. Writing style: (6 points) The story writing process and the description of the horror atmosphere are quite satisfactory. Plot: (5 points) There are still obvious differences in the performance of neurosis, fake madness, insanity, cognitive abnormality and real madness, etc., But the performance in the plot is more of a naughty and inexplicable way, which gives people a really average sense. Setting: (5 points) In the classic infinite flow, the setting of the prop grid is not perfect enough, especially the setting that can be brought into real objects has obvious flaws, which has a greater impact on the plot. Character: (5 points) The setting of the protagonist is vague. Is he really crazy or fake, or is he just a naughty kid? I feel like I haven't thought clearly about it while doing it. The other characters are quite stereotyped, and the transitions are a bit abrupt. Thoughts: (5 points) After reading a story, the biggest feeling is confusion and confusion, and the expression is confusing.

Reading progress: Chapter 572 Reading score: 31 points, recommended. Overall evaluation: A classic setting for a time-travel game. The writing is more interesting. The character setting is slightly facial-like. The behavioral logic is a bit childish. But the overall plot progress is well grasped. It is still qualified as a cool article. As for the portrayal of the characters' emotions. Well, as long as the author is happy. Writing style: (7 points) It's actually quite good, at least it's quite fun when the system is started. The descriptions of scenes and characters are also spot on. Personally I think it's good. Plot: (6 points) Seriously, some of the plots are too childish. The logic of the characters' actions is also not very reasonable. The description of some abilities is a bit difficult to understand. Setting: (6 points) A classic setting for traveling through the game world. Not very rigorous. But there are no obvious bugs. It plays an auxiliary role in creating cool points. Characters: (6 points) The characters are facially-shaped, but quite cheerful, so if you have the right taste, it's good. If you don't have an appetite, you seem a bit retarded. Thoughts: (6 points) It's not a complete licking of a dog, it's quite clear about right and wrong, and it feels a bit forced to be funny.

Reading progress: Chapter 144. Reading score: 29 points, not recommended Overall evaluation: The beginning is pretty good, a story about a low-level person turning around. Later, after a female ghost who could communicate with people normally appeared, the atmosphere became urban, which was somewhat unacceptable. Writing style: (7 points) The writing style is smooth, the horror atmosphere is well described, and the various scenes are described in sufficient detail. Plot: (5 points) Similar to most horror and supernatural novels, the content of the horror plot itself is very good until the female ghost who can communicate normally appears. The content involving live broadcasts and business wars is a bit childish, but we have never eaten or seen it, so it's hard to say. Maybe the real world is so simple and unpretentious. Setting: (5 points) In fact, the initial setting is very good. A ghost is a ghost, not a person dressed as a female ghost. Having said that, it is indeed difficult to develop a plot with this kind of mechanical heroine, but the sudden appearance of a smooth-talking heroine is still unacceptable. Characters: (7 points) In fact, the descriptions of the heroines are pretty good, especially the cute and cute one. The male protagonist's character is also quite likable. Thoughts: (5 points) There is no problem in punishing the evildoers, but the scale seems to be open to question, and there is even a suspicion of hurting innocent people. This aspect lacks the inner portrayal of the protagonist.

Reading progress: Chapter 605 Sword Lord Sonia Reading score: 40 points, highly recommended. Overall rating: Good review! He insists on writing novels with multiple female protagonists, and is one of the few authors who can persist in completing novels with multiple female protagonists in a non-traditional setting. Although the plot advances too slowly, which makes it a bit boring in the middle and later stages, it is good to read it piece by piece, and the feeling will not be obvious when you read it piece by piece! Writing style: (8 points) I heard that Riji's writing style is more in the style of Japanese light novels. The writing style is delicate, jumping-off, and lively. She is particularly good at character emotions and plot climaxes, and the descriptions of chase battles and arena matches are very good. Plot: (8 points) In addition to Shura Field, which is indispensable for multi-female protagonists, Tingri Ji's imagination has always been good, and the ups and downs and reversals of the plot are carefully designed. Setting: (8 points) A very careful world view setting, the plug-in system is very harmoniously embedded in the plot flow and plays a good role in promoting the game. Characters: (9 points) The "female protagonists" all have good characters, and their depictions range from shallow to deep and are convincing. Thought: (7 points) Heroes and "beauties" save the world.

Reading progress: Horror Bar Chapter 5 Reading score: 29 points, not recommended. Overall evaluation: A typical thriller and unlimited flow work, with excellent writing and the main world of the plot is set directly in reality, which is destined to be difficult to unfold. The character description is good. The portrayal is a bit facialistic and has a strong sense of deliberateness. The setting may not be fully developed yet, but it is said to share the worldview with previous works. Writing style: (7 points) A veteran author with sophisticated writing style, good description of environment and characters, smooth writing and reasonable structure. Plot: (6 points) A high-level protagonist is destined to have a weak thriller atmosphere. But there is a certain sense of curiosity. The deduction part mainly relies on the protagonist to justify himself. Not the true type. But at least there are no flaws so far. Setting: (6 points) The main world is set in reality, and both the plot and the background description are a bit awkward. The other parts are basically endless flow racks. But stick to the original script, 🈚plenty of tributes. Characters: (5 points) The main character has a deliberate facial expression, which seems a bit artificial. The characters in the book seem to lack awe of death. Both his own death and the death of others are very casual, which makes people feel a little surprised. Thoughts: (5 points) At least for now, the description of death in the book is a bit understated, especially the game-like attitude shown by the characters in the book, which makes people feel a little uncomfortable. But the author still insists on making the main characters conform to orthodox values ​​as much as possible, at least the direction is good.

Reading progress: Chapter 16 Overall rating: 24 points, not recommended Summary: It feels like the failure is due to the setting. The previous game One Strike Magician seems to have this problem as well, which is the coordination of strength, mentality, level, etc. With the plot. I don't know if it will be better in the future. Writing style: (6 points) A veteran author who can tell the story completely and well. Plot: (5 points) I had a fight with the character setting. On the one hand, I was looking for opportunities to break through, and on the other hand, I slept in front of the opportunities. I don't know if it was just a joke. In short, there is an obvious sense of contradiction between the description of the strength that needs to be grown and the invincible style. Setting: (3 points) The problem is still fighting with the plot. At first I thought it was an invincible flow, but it turned out to be a limit-breaking setting. How do you explain the carefree performance of the protagonist in the middle? Characters: (5 points) I feel like the setting was changed in the middle. This damn setting screwed up the plot and characters. At first I thought it was the Bald Man with the Caped Man's route, but when I looked back I thought the protagonist was overdoing it. On the contrary, the first supporting role feels very good. Thoughts: (5 points) I don't see anything special about the protagonist, maybe it's just the setting.