Tomb Raiding: Marrying into the Huo Family from the Start

Chen Yao is so pretty

Huo Xiangu has revitalized this character by casting her with Chen Yao, and she will become a T1 character.

Becoming a warlord will not affect your eternal life and becoming a god. And the more powerful it is. The easier it is to achieve your goal. He can still wake up and hold the power of the world, and he can lie drunk in the lap of a beautiful woman. Why bother getting married? It is right to take wives and keep concubines. If you have a gun and someone has territory. There is no problem in directly marrying the Huo family's daughter as a concubine. Because tomb robbing organizations like Jiumen are actually considered to be of the lowest rank. Don't even think that they are some kind of patriotic organization. It's all just going with the flow. Not to mention that the protagonist also wants to be a son-in-law. Even if you become a son-in-law, you should find a big and powerful family. And you don't know if you can eat soft food but eat it hard. It's like licking a dog 😅

Do you guys want to add any stories from other worlds, such as "A Deadly Appointment", "Nine Uncles", "Wuxin Master", etc.? I can check the information and historical background, and then write it after reading it

The Seventh Princess. The Seventh Princess sounds so embarrassing. Can it be changed? Isn't it good for Fairy Huo?

I thought I could write something novel, but it turned out to be a big mess? The king of licking at the starting point is none other than you!

I advise the author to go back to the drawing board and rewrite it quickly before he has published too many chapters. The broken sentences make me want to curse people. Let's not talk about the plot and writing. Just the broken sentences can dissuade many people.

I really didn't write the introduction to this book well because I wanted to hear everyone's thoughts and add some worlds later. As for the idea that a son-in-law is a licking dog and a waste, you should check the information. Poet Li Bai married into his wife twice, Zuo Zhongtang, who conquered Xinjiang, also lived in the Yue family, and Wei Qing stayed at Princess Pingyang's house even though he was not married into his wife. There are some others I won't mention. If an ordinary person traveled through time, his literary skills would definitely not be as good as Li Bai's, and his martial arts might not necessarily be able to defeat this poetry swordsman. In terms of military strategy, it is better than Wei Qing and Zuo Zhongtang. Compared with them, the protagonist is really nothing now. Don't let the current fight affect your judgment. The main text is not licking, and it does not mean that all people who step into the door upside down can be said to be licking the dog and getting a son-in-law.

Now I have read the 53 pictures you have written. From the thousand-man gang making betrothal gifts in Chapter 2 to the inner elixir given to the heroine in Nuqing Xiangxi, there is nothing about Huo Xiangu except for licking it twice. Like the third uncle of the Southern School, the Huo family is described as a tool man who sells his face and pretends to be sexy. The rest is the plot of Nine Gates 2, where the protagonist pretends to be a slap in the face and takes care of things for the Huo family. The biggest fear in fan fiction is that it is too similar or too different from the original book, and that there is no new idea of ​​its own. I see that the author wants to write a follow-up plot in which the protagonist joins the Nine Gates to participate in the follow-up Tomb Raider Notes. So you married into the Huo family, but you only described Huo Xiangu's pretty face and the emotional scenes were seriously insufficient. (Huo Xiangu in Nine Gates 2 is indeed beautiful. I feel that the protagonist has joined the author's youthful dream and licked her to the point where she doesn't know what to do.) I suggest the author change it. If the love cannot be written, then change the story to profit. Change the surrogacy to annexation. According to the comments posted by the author, other plots such as dead dates will be added later. It is also convenient for opening a harem. The growth from a loyal dog to a dog king is also very interesting.

It's not much, so don't stop adding oil.

The author's attitude is quite good. The content is at the level of a college student, but the plot logic seems a bit weak. The overall dialogue is not good. The fusion of multiple parts is a bit abrupt. I won't talk about the structure of characters. Wei Guangzheng's fantasy book writing is a common pitfall for novices.

The title is in the style of an old-time author

This writing, this plot. . . Learn slowly, at least your attitude is good

Seeing that many people don't want to join Zongyue World, then I have to change a chapter and change to a different bloodline. The original plan was to have the protagonist go to Hong Kong in 1945. He came back during the Wu Xie era. Then he plans to reduce the red-eye's combat power to the level of the first general, so that he won't destroy the world at every turn. If you don't want the world of deadlock, I will change it again and find another one.

The sentence segmentation is too bad, and the male protagonist's vulgar lines are too awkwardly designed.

Hunan is a platoon gang, not a trough gang.

First of all, I would like to apologize to everyone. I didn't notice the broken sentences in Chapters 1 and 2 when I was writing them. This sentence fragment is indeed my problem and has affected everyone's perception. I would like to say sorry to everyone here. Then I have revised the sentence fragments in Chapters 1 and 2. If there are still problems, I will continue to revise them. Because I typed the typos by hand one by one, I did not notice some places. If you find it, you can mention it. I will modify it as soon as I see it. Regarding getting married, I really didn't think so much about it at the time. In fact, I didn't call this book that name at first. Later, when I was publishing the book, my brain suddenly changed and I changed the name to this. Finally, let's talk about licking, because the chapters I write later actually have nothing to do with getting married and licking. So I haven't read the previous part. I have to thank the book friends who commented on the sentence segmentation problem. Today I re-read Chapters 1 and 2, and the description is indeed a bit excessive. I will continue to study it later and see what needs to be changed in this second chapter. Thank you all again, whether you are supportive or critical, thank you for your encouragement. I will pay attention to it in the future. After this novel is finished, I will also learn lessons from the next one. If you have any thoughts about the follow-up plot, you can leave a comment and I will take it into consideration. Thank you for watching. If there are some bad things, you are welcome to point out and criticize. Then there are some comments that were not deleted by me. If they contain keywords, they will be swallowed up. I basically don't delete many comments.

Based on the reaction of book friends, the second chapter has been slightly adjusted.

Why is this introduction the same as an outline?