Republic of China Film and TV: Starting as the Heir Who Squanders the Family Fortune

The writing is very good, but there is one big flaw: why is it written about Naruto? It doesn't fit in with this novel at all!

A hodgepodge is fine, but the world view should be similar, just like the world view under one person. There are so many aliens. Do you want to set the famous main and supporting characters to be aliens? How to set the skills? If they were not aliens now, some plots will become unreasonable and need to be changed, etc.

In my life, I have only fantasized about three things: not being bullied, immortality, and women.

Lu Mansheng

I have no choice but to wash my hands, so I came here to put out my own garbage. I said yes.

I'm not talking about hating the sun, but if you are based on the theme of the Republic of China, and then use the skills of a Hokage, it doesn't match, it really doesn't match, and it feels weird Even if you use the martial arts or martial arts style in the early stage, you can practice it in the later stage. Or the Eight Wonders, that's not bad either! If you insist on acquiring this skill point of Naruto, what are you doing? Every time I see this skill, I feel weird. To be honest. And this author, I don't know whether you did voice input or polishing, AI polishing. Why are there so many dashes So many dashes, you didn't have that many dashes in a book before me. Why are there so many dashes in this one? There must be a certain level of polish, and you don't have to wait until the end to be beheaded again.

When I saw Lu Mansheng, I felt outrageous. I felt humble and slutty. If you write about this kind of subject matter, you already have superpowers, and you can become a native of the motherland and yet you engage in such a real bargain.

Stop putting illustrations in the middle. . . There is not much in one chapter, and this hassle seriously affects reading. I have to insert illustrations at the end of the chapter. . .

Red Flower—Yuan Ran

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I don't understand why I want to worship this Eight Elements. The Hokage is already strong enough but the Eight Elements can't even practice Qi. The protagonist is stronger than the Eight Elements in any way.

Can you choose some good-looking characters? I don't know any of them and haven't been cast yet.

As for extraordinary dramas, Gulinazha has a street drama called "Twelve Tans"

Damn this thing like Honghua can be used as a second wife. What did you take Xiaofuzi for? Was it a tool that was thrown away at that time? She was obviously the first woman when she came to this world. The protagonist is such a scumbag. Bad review. Definitely leave a negative review. I will not cast another vote in the next month. So infuriating.

I read novels. I always read the comments section first. No matter how many times he recommended it to me. As long as there are few comments. These are all bad books for me. Because it's a really good book. There's no way no one wants to comment. Even if there is entanglement. There will also be people who want to complain. If you don't even have the desire to complain. It's basically impossible to read this novel. So I pick good books. Be sure to pick those with a lot of reviews. . The comments are more mixed. The more. It means the better it looks😜😜😜😜

It's okay, you can take a look, don't force the value in the future.

It's well written, but I have no interest in ninjutsu. It would be great if it were written as traditional Taoist or senjutsu. I'll give it to you with a monthly pass. .

After reading more than fifty chapters, I suddenly felt uncomfortable. The part about the immortals was really bad. It was too cheesy, and I was scolded by the maid. When the master speaks, the maid has the right to interrupt, let alone being scolded. It is not recommended to add the world view of Under One Man. If you add it, the combat power will collapse. Moreover, your style of writing is not right. You should write about Laojiumen and Tomb Raiders. Naruto and Under One Person really don't match up

With such a strong strength, why not just go to Japan and assassinate the Emperor of the Military Department directly?

After the war, go to Hong Kong, where your family can take refuge and write about Hong Kong.

I originally thought the stills of Liu Yifei that the author posted were just okay and pretty, but what the heck, the photos of other people that the author posted were specifically selected for those who were not retouched, even at an old age, or whose hair was not processed well by AI. In comparison, all I could say was, "Oh shit, Liu Yifei is so beautiful as a fairy. I'm afraid the author is not taking advantage of this 😁"

Xiao Fuzi, a gentle and kind-hearted girl, has been trampled on, resold, and drained all her life. Even her death was "honorable" and "easy to worry about." It seems that her last tenderness was that she refused to disturb the living even when she was a ghost. But this word "benevolence and righteousness" was the entire price of her life. Xiao Fuzi was originally the person in "Luotuo Xiangzi" who most resembled Bai Yueguang. She is beautiful, gentle, soft-hearted, with light in her eyes, but she was born in the mire. Her alcoholic father, Er Qiangzi, sold her to a passing military officer for the first time for 200 yuan. The officer left, leaving her with only a broken plank and two old chairs. For that officer, two hundred yuan was enough to buy a young girl who would sleep with him at night, wash and cook during the day, and then find another one when he changed defenses. This deal was not a loss at all, but for countless women like Xiao Fuzi, it was "wine" made of blood and tears. They are often pushed out simply because their families can no longer survive. Xiao Fuzi sold the remaining things and barely paid the rent. When he got home, his father was a puddle of drunkenness, and his two brothers were as hungry as mice, huddled in the corner. She stood at the door, tears falling one by one, but she couldn't cry. Tears could not save her father, let alone feed her brother. In the large courtyard, all women could do was mending and washing; girls of sixteen or seventeen did not even have a pair of complete trousers, so they hid in the house wrapped in rags. When going to the latrine, they had to wait until dark before anyone dared to leave. Er Qiangzi drank wine and said: "We pull carts, men sell sweat and women sell meat." When he said this, there was no anger in his eyes, only numbness, and even righteousness. In the end, Xiao Fuzi looked at her brother and father, and her heart softened. She followed her father's advice and started a secret door business, but her house was really dirty. It simply made it impossible for the guests to make a move, but in Huniu's eyes, since Xiao Fuzi had been married to an officer, he had seen the world, so she felt that Xiao Fuzi was blessed, and she was also happy to make friends with Xiao Fuzi. After learning about Xiao Fuzi's plight, instead of comforting the miserable Xiao Fuzi, she was willing to help her. She used some capital to ask him to dress up neatly, earn money and then return it to her, and also lent her a place. But you have to give her two cents. Friends are friends and things are things. But what could Xiao Fuzi say? She could only show some teeth. Tears fell into my stomach. What about Er Qiangzi? Seeing his daughter like this, he felt guilty for a moment. He felt that his daughter's life was miserable, and she had to drag down her two younger brothers at such a young age. But that little bit of guilt was like a spark falling into a wine bowl. Before it could burn my heart, it was doused by a sip of strong wine. More often, he thinks his daughter is embarrassed and she discredits him, and even thinks - since you are a girl, why did you come to me? In his world, he is always right, and the only one who is wrong is Xiao Fuzi, who is "shameless". Until she met Xiangzi. The honest and honest coachman is like a beam of light that accidentally shines in in winter. It is not dazzling, but warm and makes people want to cry. He felt sorry for her, and she tied all her humble hopes to him. However, the poor can never decide whether they love or not. She dragged her two younger brothers and an alcoholic father behind her like a heavy chain. Xiangzi hesitated and flinched. After all, he couldn't shoulder this responsibility. If he accepted Xiao Fuzi, he would have to accept her two younger brothers and an alcoholic father behind her. This was simply a bottomless pit. This burden was too heavy, and Xiangzi simply couldn't bear it. For him at present, being able to support himself is already good. Before leaving, he said that when he became famous, he would come to pick her up. Xiao Fuzi believed this sentence. She waited and waited until her father handed her hand over again. This time it was not sold to the officers, but promoted to the White House. In that place that eats people without spitting out their bones, she suffered so much humiliation that her body ached and her heart ached even more. Late one night. She ran into the woods alone, found a crooked-neck tree, and put her neck into the noose. She didn't wait for Xiangzi, she didn't wait for anything. After reading this, I often wonder: Has Xiao Fuzi ever lived for herself for a day in her life? She has not. She lived to exchange for her father's drinking money, to feed her brother's mouth, and to survive in the mud of the courtyard. All her gentleness and forbearance turned into a knife for others to hurt her. The word "" is like the inscription engraved on the tomb, reminding everyone: sometimes, the name itself is a kind of irony. Huniu is different from her. Huniu is fierce and proactive, dares to challenge her father, dares to choose a man by herself, and dares to fight with face - she holds her destiny in her hands, even if her hands are full of blood. But the result? Dystocia, hemorrhagic collapse, death on a broken bed, unable to even afford a doctor. One hangs himself, the other suffers from bleeding; one is extremely docile, and the other is extremely aggressive. Two roads, but leading to the same end. This can only show that: no matter whether you resist or endure, the lower-class women of that era cannot get out of the cannibalistic net. Personal will, in the face of such a system and environment, is as light as a straw. Before Xiao Fuzi died, he stood in the woods. I wonder if he remembered Xiangzi's words. I think she thought about it. Perhaps at the moment when the noose was tightened, she vaguely saw Xiangzi running towards him pulling a cart, sweating profusely, smiling naively, and stretching out his hand towards her - but that hand could never reach her. How desperate does a person have to be before he feels that death is better than life? Xiao Fuzi answered this question with a rope. When we read this story today, if we only feel "poor" in our hearts, we have failed Mr. Lao She's painstaking efforts in writing these words. I

Generally speaking, it's okay, but there are two problems. 1. Choosing Naruto as the golden finger does not match the overall atmosphere, and the background is the Republic of China. You can kill everyone with your animation skills... 2. There is no need to divorce the original wife, just raise them without meeting.

Stop engaging in disgusting practices like chatting with avatars.

Never write about how one person's combat effectiveness immediately collapsed, and it is not compatible with the Republic of China.

This book is unexpectedly good, but I have a few suggestions: You must not do too many traces, otherwise it will be too complicated. Secondly, there must be a basic main line, otherwise the plot will not be gripping. Thirdly, it should be humorous, but it should be serious when it needs to be serious, so that it will not be too out of the ordinary. The fourth is that the protagonist cannot be too violent.

Most of the people who wrote about the Republic of China were killed later on.

Personally, I think Xiao Fuzi looks average!

The writing is fluent, the content is average, the plot is a bit toxic (it's still bearable), and the information is incomplete and cannot withstand scrutiny.

Why should I write about Naruto Jutsu? This kind of era adds ghosts and strange stories. What should be matched is thunder magic and various Taoist techniques. Moreover, the world view of the film and television series must roughly match before they can be written at the same time. If it doesn't fit in at all, writing a piece of it would be like stitching a monster.