A Ghost in the House

It's not interesting. The only thing left in the whole story is the subject matter and smooth writing. It's purely based on the word "supernatural" that attracts me, and it has nothing to do with the plot. You'll secretly collect one today and you'll secretly collect another tomorrow. Do you want your book friends to memorize the text with you in class? The setting of the dozens of chapters is difficult to pull out, and the hook is written with no conflict or suspense, it is too bland. It's not a popular subject in the first place, and the plot is written so slowly. You'd think you were still reading paper books more than ten years ago.

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It is also the setting of "ghosts are scary, but people are more poisonous". It is obviously easier to write about ghosts, but it has to rely on the most difficult to write about "people". Do you all think you are so powerful?…

From the first chapter to more than a hundred chapters, it is a routine. The protagonist loses his life and catches ghosts, and the supporting character cousin Di disguises himself. Let's tell a joke. The heroine cannot remember the name of the protagonist, so in order to please her cousin, she comes to the protagonist to get close to her. There are two heroines who like the cousin.

I have read more than 40 chapters and found it quite interesting, but I feel that you have almost run out of protagonists. The Zhou family and his son, who do not understand the story, are trying to get on the bed with their wives and children by using the protagonist's abilities. What kind of association are they going to join? On the contrary, there is not much space for the protagonist. Or maybe I understood it wrong. The protagonist is Zhou Keke, not the previous season or something.

If it doesn't work, just let the supporting character Zhou Keke be the protagonist. Tiantian misunderstands that this ghost was also killed by the supporting character, and misunderstands that the ghost was also caught by the supporting character. Anyway, the main character wants to hide.

Brother, you have to write carefully. When Sanjiang is here, you must prove that you are indeed qualified in Sanjiang.

The protagonist does things and the supporting characters act cool. The writing and setting are okay. The plot is old-fashioned. Even if it is old-fashioned, it still makes people feel uncomfortable. This kind of plot has been eliminated at the beginning. The reason why it is popular is entirely due to the writing and setting. Originally, there might be a half-pure little dragon, but now it's hard to say.

After reading Chapter 50, it seems that the protagonist is trying to save himself and his sister, but in fact, everything he does is to help his cousin show off. The author wouldn't know how to write otherwise, so why not just point the protagonist to Zhou Keke. When predicting the finale or the bad ending, he gave everything he could, helping his cousin to pretend to be a big one, and then the protagonist had nothing, Meimei became an invisible man, and finally said: It is finally over, this is good 😄

The protagonist Zhishou works hard, the supporting character makes money and acts cool, and there is a girl who likes him. The supporting character can be promoted at home. He is really talented to write such a plot. And the free period is all about this kind of plot, with more than seventy chapters. A man of gods writes a sacred book.

The supporting characters are always showing off to others, and misunderstandings about this and that are serious. The protagonist has been hiding. How old is it? It's not fun to still play this game.

I really like this kind of story, supernatural + folklore, not too much pretentiousness, and gradually progressing in the ordinary. However, the cousin of the main protagonist in the front has a slightly more role, especially considering the current update speed, it is recommended to improve it. Well, more is a better way to deal with it()

This kind of book can also be published in Sanjiang. What is the editor of Qidian doing? Just look at the template?

This protagonist wants to kill his cousin's family. I don't know what the meaning of his hiding is. He has to forcefully explain so many things. He is afraid that his mother will be sad. It's such a lame reason. And he has this ability and inheritance. Why should he go to college in secret and rely on his classmates to dress up? Why not spend all your energy on learning inheritance and exchanging experiences with others? If you are angry, it is better to explain it to your family and talk it out than to hide it and regret it later if something happens later.

Who is the protagonist in this book? Why is it that all the writing is devoted to Zhou Keke?🤔

Not to mention, the first few chapters are well written and have potential. The starting point finally has a supernatural revival, and the supernatural area has a normal title. 🙂

Weird, the protagonist, you don't get much money from hiding behind, you work hard to give it, the biggest profit is not you, and you have no reputation, you get some materials and ask for charity, and give all the benefits to others, is there something wrong with your brain, and the incident of burying things is not all in one place, then if you let your cousin pretend like this, if you want to cause trouble again, if your cousin comes today, he will die directly, and it feels like it is harming others but not benefiting himself.

Many book friends have scolded me. I really don't know why the male protagonist wants to hide himself completely. Wouldn't it be more promising to follow the group of demon slayers? If no one knows about your merits, then why are you doing this? This kind of pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger in ancient times has long been out of fashion. Someone pointed it out from the beginning of this book, but the author of these chapters is still writing this way recently. If it is to be written in the long run, there is definitely no way to do it. It will kill you.

It's pretty cool, the main character is a bit witty...

After reading the latest chapter, I can basically predict the follow-up direction, and it will only become more and more boring. The quality of the first thirty chapters was online. I thought it was a dark horse, but I didn't expect that it would fall apart as the writing went on. It's a pity.

Rubbish book. In what age are you still trying to suppress the protagonist?

After looking at it, the setting is quite attractive and the style is good, but. Even if you want to write a group portrait, you should shape the protagonist first. Group portraits should be written about major events in the middle and later stages, not the primary and secondary parts. It's uncomfortable to watch.

Although the Sanjiang list is a mess now, I have never seen this book on the new book list. Why is Sanjiang on the list? Those books in the past are still on the new book list.

With less than 100 reads in 4 hours and only 1,000 collections, is it possible to reach Sanjiang from such a volume of new books list? So strong

The previous book is actually written very fluently, not bad, but this kind of writing basically requires a million words to be read. Because the progress is relatively slow, there are fewer people reading it, but it is indeed a good book.

This is a good book. I haven't read a novel in one sitting for a long time. Come on, author, and ignore some self-righteous readers. For those of you who can't even write an 800-word essay, you're stuck here, write it well, come on.

Write less about your cousin. He is more like the protagonist than the male protagonist. Even if he is a female, he likes his cousin. If you replace your cousin with an old man, it won't be so shocking

It is one of the few folklore books that I can keep reading. The plot is not trivial, the characters are not stereotyped, and the wisdom is not forced. The story is smooth and the pace is neither fast nor slow. It is a good book. Come on, the author. I will give it to you if you have a monthly ticket.

This is one of the best supernatural novels I have read recently. The author is talented in writing. What is the name of the person in the comment section?

The first owner of the magic weapon warned him not to tell anyone about his abilities, nor to tell evil spirits. Now the eldest cousin knows about the existence of magic weapons, and Li Qingyu knows that the protagonist can control evil spirits! It is obvious that these two loopholes will be exploited by opponents later! The protagonist is so smart in this regard! Others are very meticulous, but these two are not in line with the protagonist's cautious style.