Mystery Revival: I Came from the Republic of China

After reading the early 200th chapter, Yang Jian has changed from an amateur to an alien. The protagonist has not got any of the seven puzzle pieces, and he keeps hiding and wandering. It seems to be pretty cool, but in fact it's not good enough and I haven't made any progress at all. I don't know what the author is thinking. Is it because he doesn't know how to deal with the memory and ability of puzzles? Or do you have any other arrangements? All in all, it was a bit disturbing to watch. . .

😥 Author, I don't believe that you don't read online articles and you don't know the poisonous points of online articles! I traveled through time at the beginning, lost my memory, and traveled through time in vain! After struggling for a hundred years, I was dismembered, and my struggle was in vain! This way of writing about pouring pesticides at the beginning, author, what are you trying to do?

It's not very interesting. The first three golden chapters are about Tuo Da. He loses his memory and gets weakened to regain his strength. It's too cliche.

They are not at all like the people who were killed in the Republic of China. They are not at all cunning and calculating. They are all ready to be resurrected without preparing a few thugs. It is unreasonable to force a dramatic conflict.

The protagonist is Cotton. He can be pinched by anyone. It is very poisonous. Run away quickly. There is no twist in the story. The protagonist is Cotton. There is no revenge plot in the story. Fang Shiming is not dead yet.

. . . . Republic of China. . . . As a result, I pulled a big one

Does the author need inspiration? If so, just let me know

As a reader who loves to read fan fiction, sometimes I really don't understand why fan fiction about mysterious resurgence is so awkward and twisted. The word fear is used throughout the fan fiction circle, fearing Old Qin, fearing Yang Jian, fearing Qin Lao, fearing Wang Xiaoming, fear of human skin, fear of changing the direction of the plot, fear of cutting off the opportunity between Populus euphratica, fear of the combat power being too high, and fear that I will not continue the fight, use the rules and mechanisms of the ghost as a skill, use the risk of the ghost's resurrection as a blue bar, and use the general It is used as an item store, and the confrontation between ghosts is written as a turn-based game. You hit me, and I hit you, to see who has better equipment and who is stronger. I am afraid that too many ghosts will cause resuscitation, but I also covet the powerful mechanism of ghosts, especially those who use ghosts as equipment. They must have defensive physics, defensive awareness, long-range attacks, and melee. They must be able to control and teleport. This may be because they have played too many games! The plot is all kinds of matryoshka dolls. The protagonist is like a human-shaped white candle. He encounters ghosts, encounters supernatural events, and conflicts with ghost controllers one after another. There is rarely a break. Brother, you have traveled to the world of the novel. Aren't you playing a level-breaking game? Aren't you tired? I finally got some rest and went to look for ghosts by myself. What I couldn't understand the most was that most of the protagonists had no goals, or were headless flies. They didn't know which direction they should move in. They were just immersed in the cycle of finding ghosts, controlling ghosts, fighting against ghosts, and sealing ghosts away. The original novel was a complete story line! The ghosts are just embellishments, not the theme! From Yang Jian's ignorance to his exposure to the truth, and then to protecting himself and finally saving the world, the protagonist you wrote is like a character who has entered a copy of the game. He only knows how to buy equipment, compete with others, and pass the plot. Finally, it suddenly ends unfinished. To sum up, you have entered a world of mysterious resurrection, but you have no understanding of this world. No influence is the same as yours. You are unimportant, not special, just like worthless food, tasteless, and a pity to discard. You have no merit except for your imagination. Take a look at the Naruto and Pirates fanfics, or worse, the Mortals of the Shroud. Not to mention changing the world, at least you have to influence the world. Isn't there an author who can write a complete story?

I don't know about the rest. I only saw Chapter 4 and then stopped reading. The poison started to go away.

I really want to read this novel, but if you need to pay, then this book is still not worth the price. Unfortunately, too few people have read this book, and there is no crack.

I was immediately persuaded to quit from Chapter 6. Where is the ghost controller of the Republic of China that we agreed on? Why don't you have any corresponding mentality? You don't resist when others take action, and you don't have to pay any price. You are still reasonable, and even after you have been reasonable, you still expose your abilities. This is simply outrageous. Too poisonous, identity is just a setting

Either write about the indigenous people and imitate the original work, or travel through time and find ghosts, 😅

The protagonist lost his memory and regained his strength, but he is very weak now and has no trump cards. Then he let the official guidance in Mysterious Recovery show that he has great abilities and great harm. I feel that this situation will kill him instead of letting him act like a monster here.

Trash, don't go anywhere, your own puzzle pieces are always in the water

The creative writing is very good, but there are a lot of bad points in the plot arrangement, especially in the first few chapters. The protagonist makes a series of ill actions, letting the authorities know that his danger is far greater than that of ghost paintings, but I don't know where the benefits are?

Other fan fiction writers just write plainly, with a running account, or the setting is a little cloudy, and the characters are OOC, but the plot will still be in a more enjoyable direction. After all, that's what writing fan fiction is for But it's the Mysterious Resurrection fan fiction. Writers like to torture the protagonist, like to overwhelm the combat power, and like to disgust the readers Those few high-quality books are barely normal, not high-quality ones, one by one, they are simply less human than the human beings in Buddha's works

The more I write, the more it develops in the direction of a nanny. The protagonist does not have any subjective initiative. The whole person looks like a teenager. You are in your decades, not your age.

After reading more than 50 chapters, I traveled through time, lost my memory, and used to be a big boss who needed to find his strength, and then some so-called show-offs came in to improve his own status. He talked about how powerful he was, and then showed such useless abilities.

After reading the latest chapter, overall it was quite frustrating and I had no idea what he was talking about. From the first chapter to the present, there was no climax, and no one made us feel happy. He always made us feel that the protagonist was just a nanny, and anyone could threaten him. I also understand that the current protagonist is in the recovery stage. Isn't this too frustrating? When can you write that they will get the jigsaw puzzle that belongs to him in Zhongshan City? If you write like this, I think you may not be able to write that after the New Year.

After watching it, I didn't feel the feeling of horror and supernatural confrontation at all. To describe the emotional journey along the way, I can only describe it in two words: "It's frustrating."

It has been more than a year and a half since I wrote this achievement. It seems that the author did it based on his own interests. It is purely addictive. It doesn't matter whether the readers think it is poisonous or not.

Tell Tong Qian about her abilities in a hostile situation. I don't know what kind of brain can write such garbage.

With this achievement, the author can write more than 600 chapters. Doesn't the author need to eat? He still has love to bear the burden for you.

There are so many fanfics, and I feel like Sadako could read them, but later gave up on them.

Books with unlimited combat power are not for old bookworms at all.

It's so poisonous that I highly recommend you not to read it. It's watery, and the protagonist is easy to bully. There are only one or two people who can cause trouble for the protagonist. There is no reversal and no follow-up.

I might as well use AI to write these kinds of ones.

It's obviously well written, but I don't know what you think, but there are so many flaws.

The first 4 chapters, I really can't stand it any longer

Two contradictions were discovered. One was the ghost scissors. After Shi Ming sent the starving ghost to the protagonist, the ghost scissors were returned to Shi Ming as a reward. Later, when he solved the music box curse for Yang Jian, he said they were still in the protagonist's hand. Contradiction. The second is Zhang Xianguang. When the protagonist first came into contact with Sun Rui, he told the headquarters about the Peach Blossom Spring Project and Zhang Xianguang. At least two chapters were written about this. However, when he later solved the wishing ghost, he said that the headquarters knew nothing about it. It was a contradiction.