I, the Celestial Master, Learned Ghost-Hunting from Supernatural Films

Everyone in the village is an inheritor of the will of the overlord. The only thing they say to the protagonist is, "I'll kill you." I don't know if it will be like this later.

Cut it and get a new book. This one is completely ruined. Didn't you see how long it is? It's not keeping anyone engaged at all. The first five chapters alone are disgusting. Even if the later chapters are better, what's the point if the beginning doesn't keep people interested?

Not good at all. The ghost story was poorly written, and then there's the feng shui—does the author even know what feng shui, wealth, and fortune mean? And to bury someone by the riverbank—that's just ridiculous.

How should I put it? The protagonist looks like an idiot.

To be honest, author, if you can't write about human relationships, then write less of it. Seeing scenes of the protagonist interacting with supporting characters always feels like something out of a nutshell. It's like dealing with the zombies; there are clearly many ways to submit the solution, but you insist on choosing someone who refuses. Even though I know you're trying to pressure the protagonist, don't be so obvious. You might as well not have brought it up at all.

It's not good. First, the main character's design and behavior are not only unlikable, but also rather repulsive. Then there's the author's plot design and word choice, which gave me the feeling of someone who traveled from 10 years ago. The pacing is extremely unpleasant; the author clearly lacks the ability to create imaginative or engaging stories.

The writing is so disgusting, it makes me want to vomit.

Rewrite it... It's disgusting.

The concept of ghosts has existed since the dawn of humanity. They might not have been called ghosts before, but the idea was the same. Death is a phenomenon, so naturally, people will fantasize about what happens after death. Ghosts are essentially based on this phenomenon. So, you're in the modern era and you still don't have a concept of ghosts? Isn't that absurd?

Poor writing skills wasted a good idea.