I, the Celestial Master, Learned Ghost-Hunting from Supernatural Films

The whole village is the heir to the will of Hegemony. He always says to the protagonist, "I'll kill you" I don't know if this will be the case later.

Cut it off and replace it with a new book. Your book is completely useless. Didn't you see that you can't retain people at all if you wash it for so long? The first five chapters alone are disgusting to people. No matter how good you write in the later chapters, if you don't retain people in the early chapters, what's the point?

It's not that good. It's not good at writing about ghosts. It also writes about Feng Shui. Does the author know what wind, wealth and water luck are? It's also awesome to bury people by the river.

How to say it? The main character looks like a fool.

There is a saying: If you don't know how to write about human nature and sophistication, then write less. When I see scenes where the protagonist interacts with the supporting characters, I always feel like I've eaten a big meal. Just like dealing with zombies, there are obviously many ways to hand it in, but you have to choose an uncooperative person to refuse. Although you know that you want to suppress the protagonist, don't make it too obvious. You might as well not mention it.

The writing is a bit disgusting and makes me want to vomit.

Rewrite it

The first ghost thing has been around since the appearance of human beings. It may not have been called ghost before, but the concept is the same. Death is a phenomenon, so there are bound to be people who imagine what will happen after death. And ghosts basically appear based on this situation. As a result, you are now in modern times and you don't even have the concept of ghosts? Isn't this nonsense? Unless there are immortals in the world you live in? Or jump directly from primitive society to modern society? Only then can there be no concept of ghosts

Poor writing, a good idea wasted

It's a mess I want to write a little bit, but I don't dare to write too awesome I want to get familiar with the supporting characters first, but the writing is too verbose.

To be honest, the idea is really good, but how about the novel? It's so messy. To be honest, the story written by the author is quite good, but in one sentence, it was so confusing that I didn't know where to start. The whole novel was full of ramblings, which gave me a headache. Here we are still catching ghosts and fighting with them, and over there we are talking about irrelevant things. The most important thing is that these irrelevant things have no effect in the future. The entire novel is a mess of words.

The author can't find the key point, the center, and the writing is rather messy, like a headless fly, scurrying here and there. I don't know what will happen next.

Not pretty. First of all, the protagonist's character and various performances are not only unlikable, but also disgusting. Then the author's design of the storyline, as well as the choice of words and sentences, gave me the feeling of traveling through time 10 years ago. The pacing is very unpleasant. I want to be imaginative or the writing is attractive, but the author obviously doesn't have that ability. Overall, this book needs some time to settle, but I still want to say that I hope the author will not stop updating it, just practice writing, and keep learning by the way.

I think this is quite creative. It won't be full of specific operation steps, and it won't focus on describing scary female ghosts. It's just that the appearance of zombies is a bit abrupt. I still hope the author will continue writing and don't cheat or have cp. Other books are too boring and having a harem is very annoying.

The Ring is a science fiction worldview. Sadako and the characters are all data in the computer. Do you know how to uninstall the software? The ghost baby's resurrected spirit is Voodoo voodoo, which is not from the same divine system. Lin Zhengying's talismans in the movie are ineffective against Western ghosts such as vampires.

In Chapters 4 and 5, I felt that the protagonist was a bit funny. Would the protagonist die without that ghost weapon? Still making it so mysterious,

Indeed, the creativity is good, but the writing is not good. I want to write well but unfortunately my ability is not good. At present, the behavior, thinking and logic of the protagonist are written in a mess. How do you want to arrange the protagonist? I can't understand the performance of one moment and the other.

It's too messy, write something here and something there. It's not coherent at all, and it just jumps around the plot.

Customs and Spirits asked, what should I write about opening a factory and doing business? What is the purpose of the produced things, who buys them, and what are the uses of the produced things. No one likes to read supernatural stories about commercial capital. Too taken for granted

I feel like this idea is still feasible. Not new, but interesting. It just feels like the overall rhythm is so loose. This mouth and that mouth make people uncomfortable. The main line is not clear enough. The plot is piece by piece. I think it can be a little more refined, and don't think that each one comes out one at a time. The simplest example, when writing about zombies, they are obviously still talking about the antidote to corpse poison, and then inexplicably move on to other plots. If you want to contact the authorities, you always run away. It was very uncomfortable to watch. It's just my personal opinion. I hope it can be of some help. If you think what I said is wrong, just think I'm farting.

It looks okay, the world view is quite novel, but someone like Sadako is a bit weak, and it would be wrong to be fucked by a zombie.

It can be very nice and will be updated more often.

Keep updating≽^⚈⩊⚈^≼looking forward to it

I think your writing is really good. If you update more and think more about your sentences, you will be able to stand out in no time. Your book is quite good and interesting in the supernatural world. Just pay attention to the smoothness of the sentences at certain times.

Two chapters are not enough👀゜（λಡ_ಡﾞ）

I know where the author is from, Qiyang City or Qidong County, Baoqing Prefecture😁😁😁

It's really good. The author keeps his own pace and perseveres. In the past, there were indeed many people who looked down upon you and liked to compare.

I'm a new author. Your writing is pretty good. Keep up the good work.

It's a good idea. The ringtone at the beginning is weird and well-interpreted. He pulls his hips after dawn and goes to help inexplicably. There are a lot of characters who appear and their characters are not established. The reactions and behaviors of each character are also inexplicable. The plot is quite stiff and incoherent.

Hijikata, magic, and dharma. The protagonist now only has Hijikata and the unique ghost weapon system of this world. It's too big, can you add some more?