Tomb Raiding: A Thousand Eyes on My Back, Hu Bayi's Comrade-in-Arms

The main character is just a carbon copy of Fatty, and the plot is always unpredictable; his presence is even less noticeable than Hu Bayi's.

There's really no need to open that Jin Dynasty general's tomb to the public. There's just a mask and a pair of jade pendants inside! Don't touch the mechanisms. Just get the porcelain out of the side chamber. It's not worth the risk!

The story feels very disjointed. The protagonist is supposed to be reborn and know the plot, yet he acts like a complete novice, constantly jumping around in surprise. The plot is almost identical to the book, so what's the point of the rebirth? It creates a strong sense of disconnect for the reader, making it increasingly uninteresting because the entire story remains largely unchanged.

First of all, the beginning is illogical. While time travel itself is illogical, how can your protagonist, who has been in a coma for over ten years, wake up and be able to move normally within days? My uncle was in a car accident that hit his brain, leaving him in a vegetative state. He could open his eyes and blink but couldn't speak, move, or even swallow properly.

Instead of writing about Yingzi, the female lead should have transmigrated to Yingzi's village, become her childhood sweetheart, and initially thought about how to get rich. Then one day, Hu Bayi and Fatty (who had just recovered from an illness and therefore did not go to Niuxin Mountain) came to the village and naturally joined the main characters' group.

The introduction mentions "Nine Netherworlds," which means the Bai family is involved. Getting the tomb register and the tomb-hunting seal from Blind Old Yi beforehand is no less impressive than the Sixteen-Character Feng Shui Secret Technique.

The book is copied from the original, so you don't need to use your brain at all. The main character is useless; it's unclear what his purpose is. It's supposed to be a time-travel story, but it's actually a fake time-travel story; the characters have no idea what the plot is about. Minor plot points were altered, but it was all inexplicable.

I only read the title before even reading the book. I was reminded of the barnacles of the sea turtle. The turtle's shell is covered with countless eyes. It really lowers sanity.

My first thought upon seeing the thousand eyes on the back of the eye was to sell or donate the corneas.

The female lead doesn't seem as good as Shirley Yang 😁