Tomb Raiding: A Thousand Eyes on My Back, Hu Bayi's Comrade-in-Arms

Isn't the protagonist just a replica of Fatty? The plot is sometimes known and sometimes not known, and his sense of presence is not as good as Hu Bayi's.

There is really no need to open the tomb of the General of the Kingdom of Jin. There is only a mask and a pair of jade pendants inside! Don't touch the mechanism, just remove the porcelain from the ear chamber. It's not worth taking the risk!

The whole story has a very strong sense of tearing. It is said that the rebirth knows the plot but always behaves like a newbie in the plot. The storyline is almost the same as in the book, so why is it reborn? The viewer feels a strong sense of tearing apart, and it becomes increasingly boring, because there are no major changes in the entire story.

First of all, the beginning is unreasonable. Although the time-travel itself is unreasonable, your protagonist has been in a coma for more than ten years and can go to the ground and move normally after waking up in a few days? My uncle hit his brain in a car accident, and then he turned into a vegetative state. He could open his eyes and blink but could not speak or move, and his swallowing was not normal. He survived this situation for less than a year and went from a big man to a skinny and skinny man. In the end, he probably died due to lack of nutrition. It happened more than 20 years ago. Now you are telling me that a comatose vegetative person would normally hang himself in the hospital for more than ten years in that era? Do you think that he is the emperor and use all the manpower and financial resources of the country to support him? Even a fantasy world is not normal Then in the subsequent plot, the protagonist is set to know what kind of punches he has and has a high force value, but later he describes various kinds of crotch pulls, sometimes very strong and sometimes very severe, which belong to Schrödinger's force. Then the protagonist is integrated into the rewritten plot. I don't know where this is if I don't mention this in the first tomb. Yes, in the second original novel, the one in Savage Valley, the author added a black python outside Yingzi's village. It's inexplicable here. If you want to add it, you can add it before and after the first tomb, but you shouldn't add it here. With such a snake in its mouth, many people have died in your village, and you didn't encounter it until you came here? There is also that inexplicable ability to recover. The snake was chopped hard and deeply by you with the engineer shovel, and then it escaped for a few days. After ten days, the protagonist and the others came back and encountered the wound that was almost healed. Are they cultivating immortals? And what role does this snake play? Just a snake gallbladder? Then there is Yingzi, an ordinary rural hunter in the original work became a girl more beautiful and good-looking than Shirley Yang in your writing, this... Then to the plot in the desert, first of all, Ye Yixin was strangely written to sleepwalk, as if she was possessed by A Piao, - and then the tomb of Prince Gumo in the well changed an inexplicable plot, Some unknown people took advantage of going down the well to cut the rope, and there was also a specially added plot of encountering a gang of tomb robbers, and an inexplicable plot of entering the ancient city. In order to write Hao Aiguo to death, he was written as a stupid and stupid person. The two sides were still exchanging fire.

It says Jiuyou in the introduction, which means there is the Bai family. Finding the mausoleum genealogy and Faqiu seal in advance is no better than the secret technique of sixteen-character Feng Shui.

The book is copied from the original work and there is no need to think about it. The protagonist is useless, I don't know what he is used for. It is said to be a time travel, but in fact it is a pseudo time travel, and the plot is not clear at all. The sub-plot has been changed but inexplicably. The protagonist's force value is determined by a leather swallow, just like a piece of toilet paper. It is necessary to see but disgusting. Without the main character, wouldn't I just read the original work again?

When the heroine writes about Yingzi, it would be better to travel through Yingzi's village and meet Yingzi's childhood sweetheart. At first, she was thinking about how to get rich. Suddenly one day, Hu Bayi and a fat man came to the village (they happened to be sick, so they didn't go to Niuxin Mountain), and then they naturally joined the protagonist group. The world background can appropriately strengthen the weird attributes. At the beginning, it is written that the protagonist works for the archaeological team in Niuxin Mountain and encounters an evil spirit. This evil can find a way to serve as an introduction for the protagonist to understand the supernatural world. Then I rested in the village and had a delicious meal. I met Yingzi and said that the old party secretary asked her to lead people, and then led out Hu Bayi, and then I was sure that it was really a ghost-blowing world. After that, two more people are added to the protagonist group. Since the original three protagonists have their own ecological niches, the protagonist's setting has to be changed. It can start from the setting of dealing with various supernatural ghosts or strange rules. Yingzi's childhood sweetheart, an Oroqen tribesman, was afraid of dead people in the early days, a bit contrasting with cuteness, but has excellent intuition. Although he doesn't know much, it is often the key to breaking the game in the end. His character design is close to the lucky star of the team. In this way, everyone has their own position.

I just read the title before I read the book I thought of the barnacles of the big turtle The back of the turtle is densely covered with eyes It really lowers the sanity value

The heroine feels better than Shirley Yang 😁

Finally someone writes about the underground world, Sima Hui is so miserable

It's well written, but the logical flaw is whether the protagonist's martial arts is good or not. Are there many at this level or higher in the world? In addition, are martial arts useful for weirdness?

If you find any logical flaws, character conflicts, or unreasonable plot points, you can leave a message. You can also leave a supporting role. There are not many characters in this book, but there will be a few original characters. I will refer to your reasonable opinions and take the time to make modifications. I may delete any random writing. This book has been signed and the outline has been written. It will be completed until it is completed, so please feel free to follow up.

Well written, give me a reward 🙂

The first thought when seeing thousands of eyes on the back is to sell or donate the corneas.

Room Zero was given by the master of the protagonist. This connection is okay, but the timeline of the underground world is earlier than that of Ghost Blowing Lantern. How can the events be integrated into it?

Is it okay to just write a book? Still not starting at the starting point.

Brother! Don't look back! Let brother touch your eyes well ദ്ദി(˵ •̀ᴗ - ˵ ) ✧

Good looking, Chen Shang Sword Journey, a great read!

I read the book Jiuyou General at the end with the beginning of the King of Death. Later I found out that Tian Xia Ba Sing was sued by Tencent for copyright and was not allowed to use Hu Bayi anymore?

Breaking a sense of presence in "Pleiades Star Official's Story of Catching Monsters", "The Hidden Treasures of Ten Thousand Ghosts" and "Chen Shang Sword Journey"

Let's review the manuscript again. It feels like there are many things that are connected together.

Is there a mountain-moving hammer written by you that has been taken off the shelves?