I Can Load Settings from the Old Days

Come on, author

The protagonist seems to have lost his wits. The plot that should have been smooth is forced to hold back. In the Silver Spirit, it is so obvious that it is related to Silver Moon, and the protagonist is still there without any expression. Then he immediately chooses a low-level mirror devil among a bunch of professions... You stole Silver Moon's power. , You can choose Moonlight Knight, twisted hypnotist master, night painter, low-level mirror devil, young sea monster, ordinary people: these professions clearly show the different authority routes of God, moonlight, mind, art, mirror, sea surface. According to the authority of God's name, choose a Moonlight Knight who is powerful at first sight. Troublemaker: Moonlight Knight has obvious characteristics upon hearing it. He is a reckless man. Now his ability to protect himself is too weak, so he still needs to be clumsy and develop. He chooses a hypnotic master to hide behind the scenes and find someone to fight for him. Gou Taoist: Is there a backdoor to the power of God? Will I be marked if I use it? The information obtained now is too little to take risks. The first two have very strong abilities, and the stronger they are, the more dangerous they are. The latter two will be banned by the official for their villain attributes. Let's develop a painter and solve the funding problem first Second protagonist: This low-level mirror devil should be able to hide in the mirror, it is very powerful! Choose!

The author's cheats and settings really fascinated me, as well as the name of the god at the beginning, and the Chibei Mansion. What a pity is the story line and framework. How should I put it, it would be better if the author could smooth out the story line in the early stage.

It's just mediocre, nothing exciting, maybe a little frustrating to watch? Maybe

I found something good in Baicao Garden. Coordinates twenty-one. The beginning is quite attractive, the setting is there, the plot is there, the cheats are there, the goals are there, and the character of the protagonist is also well expressed. The protagonist's actions in the current chapter are all rewarding, and there is progress in several lines. There is a lot of content and characters, but each has its own place and is not cluttered. You can recall the relevant settings in one sentence. The author must be an extraterrestrial demon or reincarnated.

It's so empty. In the recent chapters, I feel like I've done something and yet I feel like I haven't done anything. The protagonist has been doing some very high-level things at a very low level. It's awkward.

They are in opposition to Silver Moon University, but they go to save people from Silver Moon University? It has to be the protagonist Wei Guangzheng.

The more vests you wear, the less interesting it becomes.

Is it really not strong enough? Isn't Lao Dai a district?

This book is also too stream-of-consciousness. Although the setting feels good, the writing is arbitrary and many times I can't understand what is being written.

Is the realm in chaos? The male protagonist, who is in the ninth level and the ninth level, and who has a name on the throne, is still an apprentice and even the first level is not as famous as he turned out to be. But there are a lot of top combatants in a small town. The differences between apprentices are still unknown. The male protagonist is also very good, and it all depends on his vest. He has done many things that can easily break his vest, but no one has found out.

After experiencing so many events in just a few days, it was so depressing. The protagonist was still heartless, and I don't know what the author was thinking.

The writing is good, the plot is confusing, and there are disconnected plots everywhere.

It didn't stop, how did the protagonist lock his intelligence? Even patching later can't save the perception at the time

Sometimes the settings are greater than the protagonist's choices. When choosing rewards, I don't understand them at all and choose them based on my feelings, which gives people the feeling of being forced by the author.

I read almost thirty chapters and read them all in one go. All I saw was the sea Ocean, you are all water🤣🤣

Where did you get your 1,000 collection? In this writing, the transition is too abrupt. It was east at the top, and west the next second. There is no foreshadowing, no explanation, and the scene suddenly changes.

The characteristics of the ninth level, ninth level, high extraordinary and the names above, gods, are not written at all. Also, the difference between secret weapons and potions is not reflected at all. Different sequences, different secret weapons, often used once and then lost. The Lord of Mysteries is obviously very serious about this aspect. He knows clearly what abilities each level has.

It can only be said that the author is not very experienced, and this kind of plot of hiding information cannot be written like this, because the situation in the book is obvious and it can be inferred that Yueling is related to Silver Moon, but the author's perspective and the reader's perspective are different. From the author's perspective, you know that the protagonist knows, but from the reader's perspective, no matter how obvious your clues are, as long as you don't give the protagonist's reaction, everyone will not know what the author wants to write. It is even said that because the clues are too obvious, everyone thinks that the protagonist should know, but you do not give the protagonist's reaction, then there will be problems, because the author does not give the protagonist's reaction. The information between the writer and the reader is not equal. You must write down what the protagonist knows or has guessed about the matter, and write enough to prove that he has already guessed, rather than being ambiguous. Only in this case can you hide the protagonist's information, that is, you must make sure that it needs to be hidden in the text. The person who hid the information did not get the information, but the person who read the novel got the information that the protagonist knew, instead of just pretending to be sugary like now. Because if you write like this, even if you designed it in advance, the actual effect will make people think that it is patching, and the reading experience will be greatly reduced.

The good writing conceals a useless plot... (The main plot is messy, and the plot advancement is 0)

There is potential, but the author is really not very good, and the way he promotes the plot is too awkward.

The Esoteric Cult simulator is quite stream-of-consciousness. If you don't look up the information, you won't be able to understand even a small part of the content of the game just by playing the game. For example, the crown that appears in the game appears in the game Ghoul DLC and is one of the virtual gods in the virtual world. It was mentioned once in the game. If you just play the game, you may even skip it.

The setting is okay, but the plot and description are too uncomfortable. I couldn't figure out the plot when listening to the book. There are many branch lines at the beginning, and the author also likes to skip the narrative. At least the storyline should be written linearly at the beginning, and then jump to the next step. Once the readers are familiar with the setting and characters, they won't be confused.

Why did Yin Ling start to forcibly lose consciousness?

Author, you update 30 chapters a day. Think about how much money you make in a month? This is not something that cannot be achieved. If you bite the bullet and persist for 45-6 years, you will have it for the rest of your life. When the time comes, you can be as cool and unrestrained as you want.

Author, why is everyone licking their lips?

I get sick from time to time. There is too little description of the protagonist's mind. There is not much problem with the behavior style before and after. But it just reads like a fool.

Tantric version: I am really not the lackey of the evil god.

I really don't understand what the person who wrote this kind of book thinks. There shouldn't be Chinese names and place names in Cthulhu. It's too inconsistent. You're not an oriental weirdo. I'm so drunk.

The author of "The Secret Buyer"?