Mystic Lord

The aim is to examine the author's choice of names and other aspects, based on real-world literature, to identify what I consider to be good or bad.

From the perspective of the Feng family woman, it's hard not to think that the protagonist has gone from being a sycophant to being in this terrible state, and that he has been possessed by an evil spirit or that some great figure has been reincarnated. Think about the boy you raised like a pig since he was little.

They even dared to lay a hand on a little girl. It's outrageous! They might as well just electrocute her.

The writing style is alright, but there are some minor flaws. First, where did the protagonist, who died from overwork in his previous life, learn to set up these murder traps? Secondly, while it's true that novels of this genre can appropriately use some uncommon characters, the author used them too frequently. In many places, they could have been omitted, and the forced use negatively impacted the reading experience.

First of all, this cave-world setting came out of nowhere, and then you added a source castle setting. I can only say that I used to follow it every day, but these past few days I haven't watched any of it. It's very awkward.

If you find this story enjoyable, please feel free to read it once or twice a day. Although the book is still in its early stages, the rules dictate that all resource recommendations and exposure are linked to reading the book, which is quite important for it. That is, to read until the latest chapter is updated daily; The dumpling bowed;

Before it went on sale, it seemed pretty good, but I feel that the addition of Source Castle was a complete failure. The mystery was interesting because of the diary, but now you've added rebirth, a player system, and now Source Castle. Don't you think that's too much?

This book is so formulaic. You've already joined a sect, and the Feng family is still messing with you like this. Are you so afraid that you'll secretly report their family to the sect? You've been getting messed with all this time, and you only want to wait until you have the ability to take revenge. You've been suffering from the Feng family's mess the whole time.

There are fewer and fewer books that I can actually read these days, but I can definitely read this one. I just hope that the author can finish the book if his health allows, and not leave it unfinished or discontinued, as that would really hurt his popularity.

Murdered by his wife on his joyous wedding day—this is worse than a story of annulled engagements! Why insist on a disastrous start? Since he's already transmigrated, can't he at least have a better starting point, a better platform, and enjoy himself? I don't understand, why torture the protagonist in this day and age…