Mystic Lord

The purpose is to examine the author's naming and other aspects of excellence and personal opinion of the shortcomings from real-life documents.

From the perspective of the Feng family girl, the protagonist has changed from being a dog licker to the ghost he is now. It is difficult not to look at evil things taking over his body, or the reincarnation of some big shot, right? Think about the boy you raised as a child. Not only did he survive being poisoned by evil spells, but his cultivation has improved rapidly since then, his mind has suddenly become stable, and his personality has changed. In just a few years, his cultivation level has surpassed his own, and he has also inexplicably developed a relationship with the descendants of the Hundred Flowers Secret Realm. The secret realm that he finally planned for is gone. I can't even see the hatred towards myself who has a deep hatred, just like facing a roadside weed. I would be scared to death, which true king reincarnated under the guise of someone else.

TM Loli can also be killed. If she becomes numb, she can be electrocuted to death.

The writing is okay, but there are some minor flaws First of all, as a person who died suddenly after working overtime for a long time in his previous life, how did the protagonist learn to lay out these murderous traps Secondly, this type of novel can indeed use some rare words appropriately, but the author uses them too frequently. In many places, they can be used without them, and the forced use affects the perception

First of all, this cave is very sudden, and then you have to add a source castle setting. I can only say that I used to chase it every day, but now I haven't watched it at all in the past few days. Very awkward

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It felt good before it was put on the shelves, but I feel that Source Castle was definitely a failure when it came out. Mystery is because there is a diary, so Source Castle is a bit interesting. You are reborn and a player system, and now you have stitched Source Castle. Don't you feel it is too much? I originally hoped to be like a super god mechanic based on the game understanding and the results of the prophet. Mystery didn't match up at all. There is also Xuanjian, which is not to say that it can't be stitched but You have too many books. According to my many years of reading experience, I will definitely end up writing it because you will write it in a very scattered way. Three books and three writing methods, Xuanjian's causal calculation, super god players' prophetic and mysterious settings, and Source Castle are the least relevant to your book. I originally wrote a good copy and suddenly brought Source Castle and two unrelated people came to join the branch line. Don't you feel very divided?

This book is too cliche. You have already joined the sect, and the Feng family still does this to you. Are you afraid that you will report his family's secrets to the sect? I have been being harassed by others all the time. I have to wait until I have the ability to take revenge. I have been suffering from being harassed by the Feng family in the past.

There are really fewer and fewer books that I can read now, but I can really read this one. I just hope that the author can finish it when his body allows it, and not leave it unfinished or interrupted. It is really quite popular.

I was cultivating immortality well, but I came to Source Castle out of nowhere, which made me laugh, and I had no desire to continue watching.

The previous movie book was quite thoughtful, at least it put a lot of thought into the setting; although the previous card pool was cut, Goldfinger and the plot at the beginning still have a sense of design. What is the situation in this book? This plot is just a cliché. There are at least a hundred identical fairy tale novels as a starting point. What is your pursuit, the author?

After it was put on the shelves, the plot suddenly changed drastically. The original plot was no longer closed, but I got a Source Castle to still give opportunities to strangers. Traditionally, the chance of cultivating immortals in the cave is farming. You can just force it out and start a chat group and say it is a cave.

After it was put on the shelves, the style was completely different, and the original sense of revenge and survival was lost.

It looked quite interesting at first, but after it was put on the shelves, there was a chat group. Too many stitches are too much, and it's not enough. Can anyone tell me what happens next? Isn't it really the same as Tarot Club? I feel that I am not interested in reading anymore, it is not as good as the previous one.

Why don't you reward yourself after the competition, and say that you are at a higher level, then you deserve it? Everyone practices the same way. I just practice faster than you and I am better than you. There is nothing embarrassing about this. Some of them have been practicing for longer than the male protagonist. If you want to label yourself a saint, you don't write like this.

I'm specifically here to scold the author. What the hell? He writes so many uncommon words and pretends to be a cultured person.

You will get half of your longevity when you get married, but you won't get half of your cultivation when you get divorced?

The rest is okay, but there is a bug I know killing will gain experience, why doesn't the protagonist kill? You play games without killing monsters, and practice hard every day, You either don't suppress the protagonist, or you don't design this function. You design to gain experience from killing, but you stay in it every day and don't kill monsters, which is equivalent to me playing an online game, and then I don't kill monsters and form a team to kill. How can I upgrade this level?

Why is it that the more I read, the more I misunderstand the Lord of Mysteries? I am afraid that I will become a fool next.

Actually, I am a little disappointed with you. The recommendation vote I gave you was at a higher level than when you updated. I hope that after joining, you can work hard and grow up quickly. At this level, it's not just about getting things done. You need to have the ability to think systematically. What is the value of what you do? Have you created barriers and formed core competitiveness? What is the difference between the novel you write and other teams within Qidian? Does your article precipitate a set of reusable physical data and methodology? Why should you write it and no one else can? You need to use your own judgment, not just do whatever I say. Follow up, put your thoughts into the ten chapters of the daily update. I hope to see your thoughts, not just the progress. As a reminder, your output is a bit meager compared with authors at the same level. It's almost the end of the year, so work harder. Look at that person on our monthly voting list. Before they were banned from the list last year, they could lay in front of the keyboard all year long. Growth must be accompanied by pain. When you are in the most pain, you actually grow the fastest. I feel like my words have touched your soul.

He was killed by his wife on the grand opening day. It would be better to break off the engagement. Why do you have to make a shocking opening? After traveling through time, can't we have a higher starting point, a better platform, and enjoy ourselves? I don't understand, why are you still trying to trick the protagonist after all these years...

The plot is a bit cliche, and the progress of the plot is slow. There are few things worse than the beginning of the protagonist. He is 18 years old and can only work as a handyman, and his life is taken away. It is not recommended for those with a quick temper. However, it is not poisonous.

Have you ever been a fairy? Some things are written randomly and taken for granted😡😡😡.

Come on, I hope this story can end successfully

Xiao Baiwen, how did you get this score?

There is an account in the comment area that keeps saying that this book does not have a heroine. I have read the author's solo card and this book does not feel like a eunuch novel without a heroine. I guess there are quite a few book friends who are looking forward to a harem like me. That junior account cannot be a black man.

Since publicizing this life-threatening incident can cause his family to be wiped out, why don't you publicize it? I'm curious

To be honest, the writing is not bad, but there is one thing that makes me uncomfortable. The normal game is to increase the level with experience points, gain skill points as the level increases, and the skill points can improve the skill level. In this book, it's the other way around. Experience points don't actually increase the character's level. To gain experience points, you must first upgrade your skills. After upgrading your skills, your character's level will increase inexplicably.

Since the book is called Xuanjun, is there the Seven-Chapter Secret Scripture of Xuanjun? 🙂

Xuan is black and Jun is human, so is the alias of this book Black Man 🙂