Who Says I'm Not a Chivalrous Hero?

I have followed dozens of chapters, and I have read the author's "Jianghu" before. When I read this new work this time, I can still feel that the author's notes are very solid, and the plot design, fighting, characterization, etc. Are all very good. In the story about "Jianghu", I chased after the heroine and became the emperor (if I remember correctly?) And then gave up. The plot later felt a bit broken, and the story of the predecessor was added inexplicably, making it an emotional drama, which was a bit boring. Back to this article, the advantages were mentioned earlier, let me mention a few disadvantages: 1. The female characters are all well portrayed, extra points! But there were too many, and later I obviously felt that the character types were overlapping, and it was difficult to master the pen and ink to portray each character deeply. 2. A lot of meat is very filling, but eating too much meat will make you feel tired. Reasonably controlling this level is indeed an issue that needs to be considered. 3. The plot is a bit monotonous, from south to north, and falling in love at the same time. I understand that a good plot should be able to arouse emotional fluctuations. At present, I feel that it is through ➕eating meat, ➕playing cool, and deepening the relationship. Some personal opinions, I hope it will be better in the future.

You can change the title of the book to whatever you want, and then you can remove the label from Invincible

The protagonist of this book is finally not the kind of rookie who has just entered the world. He is very powerful at the beginning. I really don't have the patience to read those slow-burning rookie growth stories. Moreover, this book is definitely the best book I have ever read (as of the latest chapter). The heroine disguises herself as a mask, the heroine calls 🛏️ to others, and the passerby villains have lustful eyes when they see the heroine. There are no such surprises. It can be seen that the author definitely takes the harem readers seriously.

Taking Tucao to complain about a certain high-quality fantasy book, it is that the main plot is too weak. After reading more than ten chapters, I have no idea what the protagonist is going to do. Maybe it is a common problem of invincible books? As the helmsman who almost fully ordered the last book, I was quite optimistic that you could keep up with Mr. Guan, and come first with the Twelve Heavenly Kings and then the Great God. The writing is actually pretty good, but the plot of the story really needs to be carefully conceived. It seems that the author is quite young, and it's when his imagination is running wild, and I really don't want to complete it. It's too innovative. I'd better read more famous works and stitch them together. I won't talk about Evil God. Although Yuanshi's book contains Lei, you can also refer to the plot. Many of Wubai's works are also about the general harem. Qingguang's book is a bit similar to Wubai's writing style. There are also only witches in the world of immortals who are also invincible novels. The beginning of the plot should have a sense of crisis? In other words, attraction, it is clear what the protagonist wants to do. In the last book, we at least knew that the protagonist wanted to find out who he was, and escort the empress by the way. Wasn't there the main plot, and wasn't there a sense of crisis? For an author who doesn't have much fan base, the first few chapters are so important. I read about a third of the last book, but after reading more than ten chapters of this book, I felt that it was tasteless and a pity to abandon. There are also some small H books with good plots, such as Xiao Sanxian, Six Dynasties series, Demon Sword, etc. You can refer to them here These are worth stitching together. Although it is all about seeing multiple female protagonists, there must also be plot foreshadowing to highlight the heroine's character. There is also the issue of the number of female protagonists. I personally like to write as many as possible, rather than just four or five. But in the early stage, can you not have several appear at once? The question of quantity depends entirely on the author's writing skills. The most classic The Deer and the Cauldron has about 1.5 Million words for seven heroines, and roughly 210,000 words for one heroine. Of course, some heroines have more roles than others. Can you say that the plot of The Deer and the Cauldron is bad? It is enough for an average author to write a plot of about 300,000 words and write a heroine at the same time. When a young author is full of energy, he complains a lot and hopes that it will not shock people too much. In the next book, he should write the plot and slowly add the heroine. Don't have too many heroines at once. One of the classic servants rarely appears too many at once. Come on, try to write a great book first.

Not to mention how well the characters are created, the single-round plot is far inferior to that of the previous book. The main plot of the previous book was clearly advanced from the beginning, and the relationship with the heroines can be said to have developed naturally as the plot progressed. However, the plot of this book feels very haphazard in its progression. It is not as clear-cut as the previous book. And there are a lot of memories interspersed with it, which makes it easy to lose immersion. In addition, some modern or Internet-based terms are also more dramatic, and I feel that the male protagonist sometimes behaves greasily and awkwardly.

When I met Hua Buxie in Kunlun, she was very dissuaded. The character suddenly changed, and then the overall writing became a bit hazy, and the dialogue style suddenly changed. I have been subscribing until this point. If the writing is good, I will continue to subscribe, but it is really uncomfortable to read here.

I just finished writing 🐔 and Guan Guan. The previous book was originally very good, and the number of updates in the new book issue is also very good, but I don't know why the results are not very good. I feel that it is at least in the top ten on the new book list. Come on, I've been reading anyway

This kind of overflowing writing style is really unbearable. Withdraw it.

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The following are personal feelings and opinions, for reference only: 1. The previous writing is very good, the plot and characters are okay, and the relationship between the male protagonist and other female characters. If it is not good, I will not order it. Subscription is the best review Let me talk about some things that I can't stand. When I saw the chapter of Han Yuwan, I felt something was wrong. 1. The problem with the character of Hua Buxie. In the past, the character of Hua Buxie gave people a kind of stubborn cuteness, with mysophobia, wallet, and small money. There was a kind of cuteness in everything. It was the same style as the senior sister, but different. However, when Taoism began, Hua Buxie turned into the female CEO of Yuemai, with all kinds of scheming and scheming, and her style changed drastically. Actually, it doesn't matter. Just change the character. It's not a big problem. However, there is a problem with the writing of this paragraph, especially the protagonist's situation. Compared with the previous plot and style, it is quite clownish. 2. Plot problem. From the beginning of the acquaintance with Hua Bu Xie Taoist Temple, the protagonist is at a disadvantage in various ways, accepting torture, accepting assessments, and then, and then nothing. There is no fun here, and the protagonist has no unexpected and cool actions. There is a feeling of being forced by the plot. To say collapse, I feel that the protagonist here is the most collapsed. Especially this paragraph: (If she wasn't pretty enough, there were clues from the Hanyu Ice Silkworm Book, and most importantly, she might be my aunt's junior sister...) This paragraph feels like a forced redress. It's okay to suppress it first and then expand it, but the chapters nearby are written Yes, it was a test first, and then there were all kinds of small-minded losses. The damage was not big, but small losses were losses. The anger level gradually increased as more came. The most important thing was to accept the torture and speak for the other party. It was really hard to hold back. Calling the clown turtle man might be too extreme, but it still tasted like that. If you don't believe it, you can compare it with the plot when Yun Suosi was lurking. It is impossible to suffer a loss, and you even have to take it from both ends. After taking it with the front foot, you can take it with the back foot. Compare it with the Taoist temple. The tolerance is ridiculously high. Anyway, I can't stand it anymore 😭 The aunt also told the protagonist to stay in the Taoist temple, and the senior sister needs to break through. It smells like a forced matchup. If it hadn't been written like that before, this is definitely a place to raise expectations, but I still forget it now. I can't stand this anger. 3. If you don't agree with my two points above, then you can read what I wrote before and compare it here to know if I made a mistake. The taste of Shaoxia is no longer there, which is sad 😢.

Everything else is okay, but the plot is as humorous and retarded as the previous book, and the protagonist/writing style is a bit greasy like the previous book.

Please write more in this book, don't leave any regrets like the previous one, where Jiu'er ended before you could write much, and you need to control the quantity and quality of the heroines.

The pacing of the first few pictures is not good, and it is especially not recommended to jump to the timeline; secondly, the emphasis on killing the emperor at the beginning is too high, and there are issues with the heroine's role.

The literary style of online writing becomes an excuse to attack, and it smells as soon as you open it, so you can have a sense of presence🤢 This is not to protect the author, but to protect the rights and interests of the subscribing readers. This is the style of Qiu Guan. If you really blindly follow the advice of someone who has not spent a penny, you will not disgust the original audience. This is fundamentally different from looking for poisonous points.

Is there an English version? I just returned to China and I'm not used to it... It's very

The plot of Cuixia Villa has been a mess recently. Compared with the previous book, it is not even a little bit worse. It cannot even maintain the level of the first volume. The reason why the protagonist participates in the martial arts competition to find a bride is barely tenable. It can only be seen that the author Tianyi is trying hard to push the characters into the plot. Then there are a bunch of so-called NPCs who don't know whether they will show up in the future. What are you doing with so many characters? I don't have any impression of these characters in my mind. For the supporting characters in the early stage of the last book, you can write the ghost leader Liu Yuezhi, the King of Jin, and Yan Jiu. Although the map is small, it can write a touching plot. Now only the protagonist and the harem group are left. Speaking of the harem, I like Sisi. I wish and look forward to the follow-up plot. At least I can see the whole process from stranger to close love. What's going on with the two childhood sweethearts and Mo Mo? Forgive me for speaking harshly, but it's really hard for me to be emotionally invested in them based on the memories of just a few thousand words in one chapter. Although I'm sorry for them, their relationship is like a rolling log to me. If this hurts people who like these characters, I apologize again The other one is Sister Lin, who has been in a lot of roles recently. The first volume is very well written, but the second volume is unknown. She is inexplicably obsessed with love. I can accept it once or twice, but I keep emphasizing something." I can't trust anyone in the Demon Sect." "I only trust Jiang Buxie." "Are we really a couple?" If it really doesn't work, author, just look at what you wrote in your last book, Shen Xiang Pavilion. Although I think it's quite difficult for Miss Shen's family and Empress Canghua's identities to jump around I don't want to complain about another potential harem beauty. I hope that a reasonable and touching plot can be given in the follow-up. It's hard for me to give an exact reason, but when I saw the plot about her, I felt awkward. A senior sister with a silly and sweet personality is enough I really don't like this chapter. I couldn't help but talk about all the points I could think of. I don't know if it's true that the author has forgotten the feel of previous writing or something else. I only know that as a reader who has been following updates from the beginning of the book until now, and voted as soon as possible if he had a monthly ticket, I am really disappointed with the current plot.

I read the previous book online, and I have supplemented it with this one. I still say the same thing, the author is definitely the next level author, or even better

I'm chovy. I heard that Lao Guan is going to die soon. The automatic subscription has been opened early. This month's monthly tickets have been given to Lao Guan. Get some blood back. Don't send Lao Guan any more 😭😭😭

The relationship between Yun Yunzhi and Jiang Buxi still feels a bit forced. It would be better if the male protagonist swore a domineering oath after the two experienced a life and death incident alone. There is still a sudden greasy feeling. The current perception of these two is a bit different and unnatural compared to Guan Yunshu and Zhao Wumian. There is also Mo Zhenci. The past between her and Jiang Buxi was actually quite romantic, but due to the flashback (the sequence was too late), there was a sense of déjà vu as if the wife had fallen from the sky. This feeling of "falling from the sky" or "falling back" dominated the first impression and made it difficult to erase the feeling when the past was explained later. I hope Qiuguan will spend more time in the follow-up writing about the daily interactions between the two, otherwise it will appear that this relationship is "cheap".

The first book progressed too slowly, and this one is a bit too fast. I also said above that it is on the same level as Guan Guan. Is this imitation too much? Originally, Guan Guan's books were seriously homogenized. Yours is too similar.

It's a pity that I changed it a little late, but it doesn't matter. If I change my name, my grades will definitely be much better.

I hope it won't be like the last book where I only started to recommend women at a later stage. I hope I won't put it in my mouth and won't eat it.

To the latest chapter so far. It feels like there are more plots for the female supporting role than for the female protagonist. . . This is the harem. . Come on, the author doesn't seem to have that intention, but there are definitely too many plots. Jiang Nian'an can remember it, and can also recall the plot lines. Yun Suosi and her sister can't remember the names without looking at the character cards. Not to mention the plot, maybe the main plot line later will be much better. . But for now, it feels like the protagonist is a bit out of her element. She keeps saving beauties everywhere, but she is not the heroine. . . . .

My grades are not good but I have a lot of monthly tickets. I would like to ask if there is any income from the monthly tickets. Anchors should not be eunuchs because of their bad grades. This is my first time chasing a book. Woohoo😭😭

Like the title, is Qiuguan still a good boy?

Chapter 1... If your writing is not good enough, don't write so much plot description.

Can the heroine have a nicer name? Lin Bugui looks like a boy.

It's getting more and more difficult to write harem works that are so obscure and need to be reviewed.

I am a martial arts person. If I don't read it without green, the author obeys the ancestral precepts and should write green articles, and he will become a god by fire.

Don't have too many female protagonists. There is still a difference between a harem and a stallion. If there are too many heroines, the plot will not be divided enough, and it will be easy to stereotype. Three to seven is about right.