Great Qian Martial Saint!

I have read Chapter 56. I am writing this review not to praise the author or to scold the author. I also hope that book friends who read it will not start a fight under my post. They are simply unhappy about some of the things I said. At the same time, it will also give future book friends a reference to screen the book before reading. First, let me talk about the advantages I think so far. The first point is that the author writes the characters, daily life and fighting descriptions carefully and in detail. Even if it is not said to be Xian Miao, it can be said that the book was written with great care. The second point is that the author's writing seems to be quite stable. The development of the story is not slow, nor does it mean that the combat power explodes in just a few chapters. The whole writing is smooth and allows people to immerse themselves in it, without making people feel abrupt when watching it. After talking about the advantages, let's talk about what I think is wrong. The first point is that the setting of the realm is a bit confusing. The previous setting said that the Qi and Blood realm is from skin refining and meat refining to muscle and viscera refining. However, the author's protagonist's Qi and Blood realm is a realm where you can break through the level by stacking Qi and blood. After the protagonist reaches the second level, he finds a low-level skill and breaks through to the third level. It does not reflect the setting of the realm and skills at all. The second point is also a point that makes me very unhappy. As a time-traveler, you can be cautious, but the obscene flow is not the shrinking flow, and the Gou Dao flow is not the Dog Dao flow. The protagonist travels through the world of martial arts, and should adhere to the law of the jungle. However, the protagonist's behavior does not look like a person who has traveled through the past for several years. It is incomprehensible that he does not reveal his realm when killing miscellaneous fish. As a man whose father was almost a bad guy, the protagonist did not take the opportunity to reveal his realm in order to preserve his merits and strive to protect his family. (The author feels that he can use the skills and money left by the protagonist's father as an excuse to show that he is a young genius in external martial arts. He has practiced to the second level in a few years. After all, the protagonist has a clean origin and is a member of the system. Someone will risk offending the dual qi and blood geniuses. Did he risk exposing the protagonist's experience to the bottom?), But instead let others take the credit, and let Liuzi take advantage of him, almost killing his sister, and attracting an enemy that he could not fight against: Mr. Tiger (before Liuzi died, he had an argument with the protagonist at his house, couldn't the neighbors hear it?); In addition, the protagonist had also practiced martial arts before, and did not have an awakening panel. Instead, he awakened the panel at the beginning, and the author did not give a reason to fill the gap. In general, if you don't take into account the shortcomings of the protagonist's behavior, the first 56 chapters are worth reading. That's all. I will continue reading.

Why. I felt a little emotional when I saw what the author said at the end of today. I was looking at this book, from the lack of interest when it was published, to all the subsequent abuses, to less than 5,000 sales when it was released, less than 500 first orders, and then selling for over 7,000 yuan after two months on the shelves, 2,000 yuan three months later, to the subsequent high-quality products, and even today, one year later, the book has been booked for more than 7,000 yuan. To be honest, when many authors see this kind of problem at the beginning, they either cut it off without even putting it on the shelf; or they cut it after seeing the first order on the shelf; or they throw away the book and abandon it when they see no improvement after the first three months of writing. It is rare to have such patience and perseverance. Although this book is not as satisfying as those popular books, but this perseverance and patience are enough for me to read and book it. Last month, due to work reasons, the update was unstable and the outage became more serious. Although it is not stated clearly this month, everyone can see the efforts in updating. In the past, a page had 4,000 words, but now it has 6-8,000 words, or even nearly 10,000 words. Perhaps many people feel that the progress is not fast enough in terms of content, and think that the author is deliberately cheating. But others dare not say it. Based on the efforts of the author Hushang this year, I don't think it is the case. Moreover, according to some authors, even the excess is considered to be the debt due. 🤔 But according to the recent updates, Hushang basically didn't think about this. Haha. I hope everyone will not criticize too much and try to make the author less stressed and write with peace of mind. After all, no one wants to end up with a book that they have been chasing for so long. Come on!

The past two days are exactly the same as those written by Daxuan Wusheng. First there was a shock in the county, and then there was a shock in the state. It is predicted that the next wave will shake several surrounding states, and then the imperial capital. That's not to say that this won't work. Logically speaking, it should have been written like this, but at that time, I was reading people's complaints in the book of Daxuan Wusheng 🙂🙂🙂

It was fine at the beginning, it didn't matter if there were more heroines, there were more harems. Stallion books don't matter either! Now that I write it, it seems like I'm going to have sex with a woman... In addition to the protagonist's sister, all the beautiful girls who appear in the book are either having sex or preparing to have sex. I'm also convinced. The enemy is a woman, so! The enemy is planning to kill his family's legitimate daughter, Cao! The prostitute his enemy found for him is gone! The enemy's maid was used as an undercover agent, it's a mistake! The wife Ming Media is marrying is also planning to marry her ancestors together. Although it is not a direct line, this is what I am writing now. Looking at this, I think his younger sister is not his biological sister and is planning to work with her in the future, after all, she has been given so many scenes. For me, this book was worth eighty-nine points before there were no Chaos Cao Ren, but now it can't even get more than four points!

It disgusts me to death. I can't stand it anymore after reaching chapter 300. I don't know how the monthly ticket can be so high. Or is it that Qidian readers now like to read this kind of article that pretends to be a pig and eats the tiger and then keeps looping? Superiors or unfamiliar families will definitely despise the protagonist. The protagonist's realm is always only exposed a little. If the family power cannot win over the protagonist, they will definitely be hostile to the protagonist. The list is endless What is the difference between putting this book on the monthly ticket list and being a scam? The book review section must have been carefully deleted by the author. What else did the author write in the 80th chapter to gain momentum? I saw 300 and didn't see the momentum. People who know the protagonist's experience and achievements still look down on the protagonist. He has to lick his face and say a few words to scorn the protagonist. Really, I rarely comment on a work, but this one really disgusts me.

1. Introduction to Martial Arts - The Sixth Level of Qi and Blood (1) The First Level of Qi and Blood (Skin Training Realm) (2) The Second Level of Qi and Blood (Meat Training Realm) (3) The Third Level of Qi and Blood (Yijin Realm) - Strength up to a Thousand Jin (4) The fourth level of qi and blood (bone forging realm) (5) The fifth level of qi and blood (organ training realm) (6) The sixth level of qi and blood (blood exchange realm) - the power of ten thousand catties 2. Three levels of inner qi (1) The first level - initialization of inner qi (accumulation of inner qi) (2) The second level - the return of clear and turbidity (purification of inner qi) (3) The third level - Tianlin lowers the top (breaks open the gate of heaven, purifies and sublimates the inner energy, and has outer gang protection, which can be called the outer gang realm) 3. The third realm of Xuanguang - plant the seed of Xuanguang in Lingtai and become a master of martial arts. (1) The first realm of mysterious light - the first light of the spiritual light (the heavenly gate opens again, the rain from the sky combines with the will of the gods, the mysterious light is born, condensed into the seed of mysterious light) (2) the middle realm of the mysterious light - the night shines like day (the heavenly gate opens again, the spiritual energy is empowered, and grows stronger Xuanguang, liquefaction of inner energy) (3) Xuanguang high level - Xuanguang Chewu (divine interference in reality, life span of 180 years, can be called a supreme master) (4) Failure to break through, the path of life and death disappears, the foundation is damaged, or he becomes a false master. 4. Yuheng Phase Three - The Seed of Mysterious Light Blooms and Bears (1) Yuheng Early Phase - Condensed Spirit Flower (can be called an ordinary master, divided into ordinary, powerful, and top combat power levels) (2) Yuheng Middle Phase - Spirit Fruit Prototype (can be called a veteran grandmaster or senior master, and is divided into ordinary, powerful, and top combat power levels just like the early Yuheng Phase. Mid-term perfection + top combat power can be called a top grandmaster) (3) Yuheng Late Stage - Grand Master Realm 1. Spiritual Patterns One to Nine: Spiritual Patterns Engraved on Spirit Fruit (Sixth Patterns You Can Try to Break the Mirror) 2. Three Mirror-Breaking Levels (1) First Level - Spiritual Pattern Condensation: The spiritual patterns on the spirit fruit disappear, replaced by cracks as complex as spiritual patterns. (2) The second level - cultivating the divine soul: When the life energy in the spirit fruit is extremely intense, the core of the spirit fruit will begin to cultivate the divine soul. (3) The third level - Breaking the shell level: wisps of spiritual power continue to accumulate until the shell of the spirit fruit is broken. (4) The three passes of Pojing are extremely perfect, facing the barrier of heaven and man. 3. Heaven and Man Pass (1) Reshape the Lingtai: lay the foundation of the Lingtai and feel the meaning of the world. (2) Transform the fruit into the source: The spiritual fruit turns into the source of the divine soul, and from then on the power of the divine soul continues to grow. (3) Heart Demon Pass: After experiencing the inner demon fantasy, washing out the Taoist heart, the source of the soul is refined again. 4. Achievement of heaven and man: The pivot light suddenly appears in the spiritual platform, and the pivot light senses the heaven and earth. Using the soul as a guide, heaven and man become one, and the martial arts heaven and man are achieved. 5. Four realms of heaven and man (to be unlocked) (1) The first realm - the pivot light realm: the pivot light, the source of the divine soul, shines, drawing the power of heaven into one's own strength. When it first enters the realm, the pivot light of the divine soul is like a grain of rice. When it reaches perfection, the pivot light is at its peak and penetrating like the sun. (2) The second realm - the penetrating rainbow realm: build a bridge with the soul, like a rainbow bridge penetrating the inside and outside of the body, the spiritual platform resonates with the heaven and earth, and senses the heaven and earth. 1. Guanhong one to nine sections. 2. Three Realm Passes - Three steps of Yin Yao: Shuguang Yin Yin, Ling Qiao Xuan, and the whirlpool formed. (3) The third realm - Hidden Yao Realm (Heaven and Man Overhaul): Hidden front and hidden light, the pivot light gradually disappears, the rainbow bridge penetrates the inside and outside, turns the vortex into the source, absorbs the power of heaven and earth, nourishes the soul, and nourishes the body. 1. Silence: When the source of the vortex is first formed, the whole is empty and not deep enough. 2. Ink sinks: The source of the vortex is as deep as ink. 3. Ruyuan: The soul is as deep as the abyss. (4) The fourth realm: the realm of returning to hiding (Great Heavenly Man): The inner scene of returning to hiding, with the heaven and earth visible. The soul resonates with heaven and earth (interior scene), and initially masters the power of heaven and earth. 1. Keep the fetal light: The fetal light, the Qi of Taiqing Yanghe, is the innate origin and can be regarded as the soul of heaven. 2. Ding Shuang Ling: The Shuang Ling is an acquired body transformed from the innate Qi. It can be regarded as the earth soul, corresponding to the Consciousness God. The Ding Shuang Ling is the Ding Consciousness God. 3. Control the ghost spirit: The ghost spirit is the origin of human beings, which is the human soul.

At first, when I read the comments, I thought they were very toxic. Be patient and read Chapter 30 slowly. I am a district. The whole story in Chapter 30 has become a network. Except for a few neighbors, all the other characters have their own role. No wonder they all say it is slow. How can it be fast? . Every supporting character has been described and deeply profiled. From Xiao Hu Ye, to Liu'er, Houtou, Dashan, Zheng Shiyong, Zheng Chatou, and Tian Fu Chasi. Every character appears for a reason. Later, the story is also told around these characters. I really admire it. In addition, so much ink was spent on soap uniforms, street patrols, related households, owed money and being owed money, all just to describe the status of the Zhenfu Division, so as to serve the protagonist's becoming a formal servant and his subsequent promotion. When it comes to the appearance of Tian Fu Chai, all the previous foreshadowing is full. You can imagine how great the feeling of gain is when the protagonist's position is promoted, which is also the reader's sense of satisfaction. Everything came out in one breath. I feel numb, I feel numb, I haven't seen this book for a long time. I just saw Chapter 30 and ordered it all. The author must not let him down. Come on!

I write about things with women every day. What are most of them in the dozen or so chapters? Is it boring or not? It's watery to death. I like to read stallion stories and ambiguous stories. Are there so many female videos?

Although I scolded it, it was actually quite well written. Please write more.

This book is finished. If the author has a bad mentality, he will become a eunuch if he cannot write much.