Reborn: Life Must Shine

He kept going on and on about those trivial things from the past.

Dude, have you read this book on your phone? It's all long paragraphs without any breaks. I originally thought it was a pure AI book, but it looks like it was hand-written. Also, you didn't even make a cover for 500,000 words. That won't do.

He's a reborn character, yet he acts like a clueless idiot, completely lacking in social experience.

The paragraphs are so long, and I wanted to skip some unimportant parts to see the plot, but this makes reading difficult.