Fishing and Hunting: From Coastal Waters to the Open Sea

It's a total flop. No satisfying moments, no slice-of-life content, just endless internal monologues. Maybe he should think about women again? I'm speechless.

I had no idea it could be this bad! A whole bunch of ideas, and then you're afraid of this and that! You don't have to write down those ideas that won't work, but you can't write them down and then say they won't work. Isn't that just utterly disgusting?

You can establish a protagonist who is inherently evil and distrusts everyone. Be cautious and avoid portraying them as having persecution complex. Also, focus on the actions directly, rather than constantly offering rambling explanations of human nature. Avoid being verbose and repeating statements about human nature.

What a terrible novel! It's so disjointed. One minute it's about someone taking gold and silver coins but not daring to sell them to hide the money; the next it's about making an excuse to sell Melo jelly, which is then spread like wildfire that they made over a thousand, and then being refused a loan and thinking it's all for nothing; then it's about borrowing a boat to fish for abalone.

It's definitely poorly written. You haven't even figured out what you're trying to write; ten or so chapters are just conjecture, then rejection, then more conjecture. The opening is so important, and you've written such a mess; it won't do well.

I couldn't continue after reading the first ten chapters. 1. It's constantly reminiscing about the past and analyzing the first pot of gold; it's like the protagonist is having a meeting with himself, proposing and then rejecting. 2. There's a lot of background information: family members, unhappy past lives, marriages, missing elders, the three major surnames in the village; and then the…

What's the point of your rebirth if you can't accept gold and silver? Why do unhappy marriages always seem to happen to you? There's not a single satisfying moment. Don't you know about the Golden Three Chapters?

The Poisonous Father is such a protagonist, he lacks any real backbone, lets his family leech off him, and helps everyone, even his enemies.

I don't even consider this book worthy of being called a good one; it's terrible. The three golden chapters are utterly useless. I kept lamenting that I needed a way to make my first fortune, coming up with several ideas, and finally, after agonizing over it for five or six chapters, I chose the very first one. The paragraphing, the writing style—it all felt artificially engineered.

It's normal for you to get so many negative reviews. The first dozen or so chapters were a bit rambling, but I thought it was alright; it had that "forty, fifty, sixty, seventy-year-old reborn" feel to it. But then, in the last dozen or so chapters, there's this sudden group fight and head-splitting scene. My mom's acting like a lunatic, why is she bringing up this plot?