Fishing and Hunting: From Coastal Waters to the Open Sea

Four chapters into the book, and I have no idea how to make a living. How can I attract people? Three people in the family can't get married, it's too deliberate.

It's a must-have, it's not that cool, it's not in my daily life, the whole article is about my inner activities, if I don't want to think about women anymore, I'm convinced

I really didn't know it could really be this bad! A bunch of ideas and then fears of this and that! You don't have to write down those ideas that don't work out, but you can't write them down and then say no. Isn't that just disgusting?

It's really poorly written. You haven't figured out what to write. The ten or so chapters are just conjectures and then rejected and then conjectures again. The beginning is so important and if you write it in a mess, your grades will not be good.

I can't stand it after reading the first ten chapters 1. I have been recalling the past and analyzing the first pot of gold, as if I have been in a meeting with myself. Proposal - Negation 2. Various explanations about the background. All family members have had unfortunate marriages in their previous lives. The elders have gone missing. The three major surnames in the village. I also said that I miss the girl from the Zheng family 3. There is no strong main line. I can think of what I want to say in scattered thoughts. I have begun to round up for the sake of logic and self-consistency. The protagonist has a face and is hesitant. Summary: The above chapter can cover it all. Just explain some background in the plot and bring it out.

What's the point of rebirth if I don't dare to accept you if I have gold and silver? I don't know why all the unhappy marriages come to your house and you are not happy at all? Golden Chapter Three?

What a crappy novel, very divided. One moment he said that he didn't dare to sell the gold and silver coins to hide the money. The next moment he made excuses and said that he had sold Melo beads and was rumored to have earned more than a thousand. Then he was refused the loan and thought it didn't matter. The next moment he said he wanted to borrow a boat. Fishing for abalone, I'm speechless. I don't know if the author wants to make money by writing about it or is just too timid to make money. According to the author's logic, as a fisherman, he shouldn't dare to catch big stuff and sell it secretly, because he will be jealous of others. It's so funny.

You can establish a protagonist who is inherently evil and doesn't trust anyone. Be careful and don't write it as if you are being persecuted and paranoid. Moreover, write about the behavior directly and don't keep explaining human nature in a long-winded way. Long-winded and repetitive talk about human nature.

It's normal for you to have so many negative reviews. The first dozen or so posts are verbose, but I think it's okay. It feels like I was reborn in my forties, fifties, sixties or seventies. But in the next ten chapters or so, a group fight suddenly broke out, and the fight started again. My mother is like a lunatic. Why do you say this? It doesn't fit in with what you said before. Also, I was so cautious and thoughtful at the beginning, saying that I would not release the Earth Dragon Network method. However, after a few chapters, I felt that I was getting bolder. I started fighting in groups and released this Network method again. It's not worth watching anymore. It's just a show-off and a slap in the face. It's cautious in the front, but it turns out to be a set-up later.

I feel relieved when I see everyone scolding me.

Che Zhulun talked about one thing back and forth, either it was about what happened in the previous life, or he was a young man who had an attack of youth and talked about a lot of great truths. He was so good at it 😒 The first twenty or thirty chapters were so bad.

The only person who can read this book is a talented person. After writing so many chapters, why can't I make money? You can't do this, you can't do that either

After two times, I just told everyone, and then I made earth dragons and gave them to people who were not relatives or friends in my previous life, and gave them away for free, as long as you make up a reason, it's really bad, Holy Mother Bitch

Is Zhao Hu the father of the protagonist? If you don't have money to buy a floor cage, give him a home-woven floor cage for free The first person who hired a boatman thought of him, and soon he had to do it himself. No problem. Zhao Hu had various problems and wanted to help solve them. If he didn't work on the ship, he would also give him a watch.

I haven't written a few pictures since I went to sea, it's all nonsense.

I have always liked this book, but the chapter about the recent conflict with the opponent is a poisonous point. It describes compatriots as enemies, adds murder and robbery, and adds original sin to the protagonist's life. This brain circuit... Is it venting anger? There is an international conclusion on which of the two sides has been more civilized in the past seven or eight years.

After reading Chapter 11, I really can't stand it anymore. I kept stressing that in that era, there was no need to write these things over and over again. Also, I don't understand why the monthly ticket is more than 400. I read the comments section and there are also a lot of bad comments.

Fortunately, I can watch it 👍 It's short and concise... I praise you 😁

Well written, it is much better than the previous books. It is strongly recommended that the author double the physical strength of the protagonist. Is it normal to be reborn with double physical strength? For example, when I was young, I could lift three to four hundred kilograms, and the protagonist can lift seven or eight hundred kilograms. Don't exaggerate too much, I can probably lift about 300 pounds.

One is that it's too wordy, and the other is this mother figure... It's too useless. He is obviously capable, but the protagonist still goes along with it, which makes me angry just looking at it.

Tomato's routine was not popular at the starting point

Yishui's psychological dialogue, thinking about that

The year it was written was not 1981, but 2026.

Dude, you have over one million words and only 48 posts. I'm really impressed that you don't have a eunuch.

I gave up after reading Chapter 12, I couldn't stand it anymore, I didn't dare to do anything in front of me, I only dared to think about women, the black market was also illegal, and now I was punished again

Did the author write about courtyard houses before? It was too cumbersome, long-winded, and messy.

It's ugly, makes me angry, and there are too many messy things.

How can I put it, after reading these more than 30 chapters so far, I feel pretty good. There is nothing poisonous about it. It is not the kind of person who makes predictions and makes a fortune as soon as he is reborn. Being able to make money cautiously is a must-have character in that era, otherwise you will not know how others will kill you.

Yes, the writing is more realistic and better than ordinary period writing.

After reading Chapter 13, Pig's Feet is still playing in the mud on the shore. Nothing has been accomplished. It's dragging its feet.