Autumn Harvest, 1980

It's so stinky and long that I couldn't stand it until chapter 22. I just felt the same way throughout the whole process, I'm screwed.

See the latest chapter. The writing is good, but maybe I'm used to reading cool stories, so it's a bit depressing and aggrieved. I can understand the author's intention to make the plot ups and downs, but by Chapter 47, the protagonist is retired from the army early and can only be the nominal "militia company commander" of the brigade, the awkward relationship with Green Tea's ex-girlfriend, and the disgust of being stabbed in the back by his aunt despite being kind to his uncle. , Sane but frustrated caution, rejected works from past lives, malicious attacks from other brigade communes, bad but pure fellow villagers... To be honest, when I read online articles, I wanted to temporarily forget about the frustrations in life and enjoy some cheap dopamine secretion. I didn't want to really feel the "reality" of that era. I hope the author can have a "refreshing" climax every few chapters while maintaining a sense of time. The protagonist's psychological "Ah Q" will not always feel that this is nothing now and there will be a lot of opportunities in the future, but in reality he continues to suffer and be suppressed. Maybe in your writing outline, the protagonist will develop very well in the future, but you have to consider how frustrated the readers will feel when the protagonist is introduced.

It's too Q. If nothing else, just look at the motivation of the protagonist in the novel. The original owner gave him 5 yuan a month. Then after the protagonist traveled through time, he noticed that Jiang had probably changed his mind, and instead changed the monthly payment from 5 yuan to 10 yuan. Like a clown, he thought he was offering sacrifices to the goddess in a cold manner, and thought the goddess would treat him differently, but it turned out that he was just a passerby, and then he comforted himself, saying that you do yours and I will do mine. Then the heroine saw this letter and the letter of relief he wrote before, and then said wow, it's amazing, two years in the army have changed him. The protagonist is also mentioned in the novel, saying that he is currently carrying more than 300 yuan from his retirement, which is a lot of money. In the future, he can achieve financial freedom by taking some limelight, and then he provides an additional 5 yuan per month to the goddess, and then says that he is the karma. It costs 10 yuan a month for joint writing, and it costs 60 yuan for six months and half a year. This price is not cheap at all. To you, it is just a hair on the body of a cow. The starting point is high enough, there are too many trivial matters, and the suppression is too severe. To be honest, with the starting point of the protagonist, it is considered a good start in a historical novel, right? I have been suppressed all the time, being suppressed at home, and being bossed around outside. This is of course normal, but I have read novels and are all people who have been reborn. Are you here to see what you can only say is correct, but it can definitely be regarded as a bit frustrating? After that, I want to give you some advice. Is this how the superiors came to be? The protagonist feels like a pretentious Ah Q. In these few pictures, he doesn't seem to have any special abilities or any charm. He always comforts himself, I have knowledge that is so many years ahead of me, and I can make a fortune casually. Path dependency belongs to yes, it is written exactly the same as the previous book, and it is not as well-shaped as the previous book. Well, after reading it, I just felt that the protagonist is a Q

I said why this book is so smelly and long, the flowers are blooming that year, the same thing, the number of words is water every day, let's play in my mind, I have read 30 chapters and am still building canals, one word, disgusting

Ha ha! What a death! I asked you to feed me🔟 Please call me the Prophecy Emperor

I felt really uncomfortable when I saw the flowers blooming that year. They looked awesome, talked awesome, and were awesome in front of my own people. When I had conflicts with others and had conflicts, I could only aggrieve myself. Pig's feet were incapable of solving problems. It can be said that I had no strategy at all. I mainly focused on being aggrieved and incestuous.

How many cowards do people have to be in real life to make the protagonist in a book so cowardly? Author, you are not writing a book seriously, you are pooping hard and disgusting readers, do you know?

I couldn't stand it anymore after reading half of it. The author's writing is fine, but the writing is very aggrieved. He likes to suffer the consequences of being a good guy, but he is aggrieved in real life. He still feels angry when reading novels, 666. I guess the author lives a happy life.

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What you said is ironic, right? In the third golden chapter, we saw an idiot-like protagonist. Is the author underage? Is it written by a junior high school student or a high school student for elementary school students?