High-Tech Startup: I'm Really the One Making Phones!

Please don't take this personally, and please stop asking me about the technical logic. If I understood it, why would I be writing novels? 😦

The iPhone 4 has an 1800mAh battery, while this phone can be fully charged to 6000mAh in about 300 seconds, or less than seven or eight minutes. The problem is, the Realme GT5 240W's battery takes less than half an hour to fully charge, and the phone gets very hot. With this phone charging so fast, how do we solve the problem of it getting incredibly hot? What if it becomes as hot as a lighter?

Since this is a novel primarily about cutting-edge technology, the focus should be on the technology itself, not business warfare. It's not that it can't be included, but it already takes up too much space. The emphasis should be on the creation of the technology, the product's development, market feedback, user experience, and social media descriptions.

I've subscribed to the entire book and am currently up to chapter 169. First: In a story, the villain's mockery of the protagonist is described in lengthy and detailed passages, while the protagonist's counterattack and slap in the face is often summarized in just two sentences. You're writing a novel; you're meant to make the reader feel good, not annoy them.

It's too padded. The plot is mediocre. The high-tech elements are over a hundred chapters long, and it's still just a useless battery at the beginning. There are crazy additions of words that shouldn't be described. It's just padding out the content. Is this the kind of padded content that's going to reach tens of millions of words?

High technology shouldn't be equated with cheapness. If the first inventor can't make money, who will want to enter the industry? Prices only come down when products iterate and the industry is complete. You've developed so many cutting-edge technologies, yet you're not even in the top tier; you're still third-rate. How come other products with such poor quality sell so well?

The author deliberately downplayed the phone's sales. If the Orange Phone in the book had the technology and price, its sales would easily exceed 50 million units. Just look at Xiaomi and Huawei's sales figures! The author might as well have raised the R&D level to the tens of millions; that would have been more reasonable! The book claims the Orange Phone sold a million units initially, but its annual sales were only ten million – it's illogical and frustrating!

If an author wants to write a male protagonist with a strong sense of national pride, then they shouldn't write a female protagonist who works in a foreign investment bank!

Well, it's a high-tech story but not a wish-fulfillment novel. The writing is good, the plot is relatively reasonable, and the details are quite rich, but the author gets a bit self-indulgent, which makes the pacing messy and the storytelling weak. In summary: The meal at the small restaurant was quite lavish, but unfortunately it had a slightly sour smell.

It's too long, spending too much ink on the data and the supporting characters' plots. Dude, this is a novel, not a written report! There are also some minor flaws. My back is sweating, my heart skips a beat, and my pupils constrict. These are the exclusive features of Dragon King's novels! Adding fewer of those pointless plot points might be better. It's like if you've opened 2000 stores, do you have to write a separate document for each one? This is a novel, not a presentation.