High-Tech Startup: I'm Really the One Making Phones!

Please don't make mistakes, and don't ask me about technical logic anymore. I understand. What else should I write about novels😦.

The battery of the iPhone 4 is 1800 mAh. The main battery can be fully charged to 6000 mAh in about 300 seconds, which is less than seven or eight minutes. The question is, it takes less than half an hour to fully charge the battery of the Realme GT5240W and the phone is still hot. How can I solve the problem of "steelmaking" of the phone if it charges so quickly? What should I do if it becomes a lighter and burns people?

Since it is a novel focusing on black technology, the focus should be on black technology, not business war. It is not that it cannot be written, but it is too long. The focus should be on the birth of black technology, the birth of products, market feedback, plus user experience, and the description of social media. The current way of writing is simply putting the cart before the horse. If you write about business war, just write about business war, market integration, company development, and employee treatment. But if your setting is rebirth plus system, then writing so many business battles will not make much sense. For example, if you remove rebirth and just write about system, will this book have basically no impact?

Fully ordered, 169 chapters so far. First: The description of the villain mocking the protagonist in an incident is long and detailed, and the protagonist's retaliation and slap in the face are often summarized in two sentences. You are a novel. It is here to make readers happy, not to annoy readers. It would be better not to write if it is not a complete slap in the face. Second: The interaction between the protagonist and the supporting actor (the government) can be said to be touch-and-go, with no sense of interaction at all. He is obviously a top scientific and technological talent, but as a result, the government's technology has been acquired, and the protection intensity has dropped significantly. These are technical talents, and talents are the most important! There is obviously a department to protect the protagonist, but the result is that the protagonist does not know anything about the protagonist (the protagonist was involved in the photolithography machine incident). It is obviously a technology that affects the world (gas battery), but the secret department does not check in, and the protagonist, the developer, does not keep secrets and can go abroad freely. It was obviously a meeting organized by the government, but a rubbish (host) appeared during the interview, and nothing happened afterwards (the government did not respond, and the protagonist did not retaliate). This is the golden body of the protagonist. All departments of this world government are blind (patent office, confidentiality department, exhibition organizers) and there are too many details to complain about. Third: Can the supporting actor Zhao Tiezhu stop writing! It's okay to write before your career is on the right track. After your career is on the right track, you have to spend a lot of time describing the small actions and appearances of various supporting characters, such as the description of Zhao Tiezhu's scars that appear every time. This Zhao Tiezhu makes me extremely disgusted. Every time something happens, it is always related to a woman. His facial description is still that of an uncle. A senior executive with a rich love history is as if he has never seen a woman before. Every time he goes out, he is either looking for a woman or on the way to find a woman.

It's too watery, the plot is average, black technology, more than a hundred chapters, and it still starts with a waste battery, crazy epithets that shouldn't be described, watering it hard, is this progress like 10,000,000 words?

The author deliberately suppresses the sales of mobile phones. In the real book, the Orange mobile phone has that technology and price, and its sales exceed 50 million units every minute. Just look at the sales of Xiaomi and Huawei! The author might as well increase the technology research and development point to the tens of millions level, that would be reasonable! As a result, the book said that the Orange mobile phone was launched with a million dollars, but the annual sales volume was only 10 million, which is unreasonable and unhappy!

If the author wants to write about a male protagonist who has feelings for his family and country, don't write about a female protagonist from a foreign investment bank!

How can I put it this way? It's cool but not cool. The writing is good, the plot is relatively reasonable, and the details are rich. However, the author is a bit too self-indulgent, which leads to a messy rhythm and poor storytelling. Summary: It's a relatively sumptuous meal in a small restaurant, but it's a bit sour. It can be seen that the author is trying his best to describe a part of the real business war, and even a complete world view. But there are too many supporting characters that have nothing to do with the main plot and it seems watery. There is also a lot of sensational writing, which makes it a bit awkward to watch. The second problem is that some plots may be unavoidable in real business, but too much ink is considered abusive in a cool novel. The third problem is that the scenes in the middle and later stages are too spread out. Each section wants to describe it in detail and incorporates too many data and report formats. As a result, the entire writing style is like an investigation report on industry history, with a messy timeline and a relatively invisible protagonist.

The author is very naughty, so the protagonist is also very naughty. The science and technology articles are about trade, the trade articles are about patriotism, the patriotic articles are about love, and love is about people's hearts. Any two or three themes can be connected together. The result is that the author becomes a big pot of stew, and he insists on getting together again. Many of the supporting characters have evil intentions, and the protagonist, like the author, has both wants and needs. It's very uncomfortable to see people flying

High technology cannot be equated with cheapness. If you are the first to invent it, if you can't make money, how can anyone enter this industry? Only if you say product iteration, the industry's complete price will come down. You have developed so many black technologies yourself that you can't even reach the first echelon, and you are still a third-rate product. How can it sell so well with such a poor performance? A mobile phone that came out later than you has a higher sales volume than you. The protagonist has no reflection at all. If you say that you will only do high-end and leave the mid- to low-end to domestic manufacturers, will you think you are righteous and disrupt the market with the latest technology and the lowest price?