Water Margin: Heroes of the Late Song Dynasty

After reading the first seventy chapters, I feel that the overall story is pretty good. The only shortcoming and the biggest poisonous point is that the protagonist has no motivation to practice martial arts after being in prison. It is really incredible. I think many people have seen this. The author also wrote that the protagonist has no awareness of martial arts. I read it among ten people, and at least seven or eight of them abandoned it. Because the author writes this way, it is completely illogical. Even if the author explains in a separate chapter that the protagonist is a lazy college student and has cancer, it is unreasonable. Because, no matter how lazy college students are, they will always try to make up for it when there is an exam, and they will study hard for a while before the battle. Therefore, after being imprisoned, according to normal thinking and knowing that the system is unreliable, wouldn't the protagonist learn martial arts assiduously for a while, and then relax his motivation to learn martial arts under the influence of laziness and cancer? The protagonist in the book seems to know that there is no system, and I have the author to follow suit, but he has no awareness of practicing martial arts at all. I only practice martial arts when I'm really free, and I'm also drunk. After encountering an incident where his subordinates were killed in an instant and he had no choice but to be captured, the protagonist actually had no awareness of being prepared for danger in times of peace. Does the author think it is reasonable? I think the author would feel incredible if he looked at this from a reader's perspective🤫 Therefore, I suggest the author consider whether to modify that part. Personally I feel like modifying it, it won't affect the plot.

It was going well in the beginning, until the system appeared, and I suddenly became confused. Why does history have to mix and match systems? I don't understand, so I chose to give up.

Those who forged certificates: Jin Dajian, Xiao Rang Shipbuilders: Meng Kang, Ye Chun Blacksmith: Tang Long Firearm: Ling Zhen Tailor: Hou Jian Engineer: Tao Zongwang Accountant: Jiang Jing Doctor: An Daoquan Veterinarian: Huangfuduan Horse fortune teller: Duan Jingzhu Hotel Manager: Zhu Gui, Zhu Fu Scouts: Shi Qian, Dai Zong, Ma Ling Intelligence agents: Le He, Yan Qing, Ma Lin

When setting up the character, I took into consideration that modern people may not be able to endure the hardship of practicing martial arts. In addition, practicing martial arts requires practicing since childhood. Zhang San was already 18 or 19 years old when he time traveled and missed the age to practice martial arts, so hard training may not be effective. Of course, the protagonist's force will reach a first-class level by the end of the first volume through the system's bonus, and he is basically the first person below Zhou Dong when he holds a weapon (force plus five). So the protagonist doesn't like to practice martial arts not because he doesn't know martial arts, but because he is a super master. Why do I practice martial arts when I have such a great system? It's useless to work so hard, but there is a system that can easily make you top-notch, isn't it...?

The writing is incomprehensible, and I always feel that there is something wrong with it. The pig's feet it writes does not look like a normal person. Take a look for yourself. It is well written, but I can't stand it anymore. There are so many vulgar things that have to be inserted into the plot that I vomited.

Is this level of writing really scary? Haha, this protagonist was not written to death by you

It's as plain as water, no wonder the grades are so bad

Sweating? They're just a bunch of murderous bandits trying to do justice for God.

Zhang Shan, a certain senior book fan, traveled through time and became Zhang San, a rogue who stole vegetables from the vegetable garden of Xiangguo Temple in Tokyo during the Song Dynasty. This year, Gao Qiu had just returned to Tokyo, Song Jiang was still just a police officer, and Wang Lun had just gone to Liangshan. Let's see how Zhang San started as a small businessman in Tokyo, then became rich and dominated the world. After ten years of gathering, they split the earth and became kings, fighting for hegemony in the world. I will revive the Han Dynasty and rebuild its glory.

I can't continue editing after twenty chapters, so I need to forcefully connect to the system to continue.