
Immortals, Be Forbidden!
禁仙!
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 823k Words
- Genre
- Xianxia
- Subgenre
- Cultivation Civilization
- Updated
- 3d ago
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249Chapters
85Monthly votes
19.3kRecommendations
26.1kFans
7 ch/weekPace
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After thinking about it, I feel that the issue of the protagonist that everyone was discussing in the early stage is actually not about shaping or social phenomena, but simply about the protagonist. . . How should I put it? The protagonist simply doesn't look like a person who has lived for decades after being reborn through time travel. Too indecisive, or the inner drama is a bit too rich.
Some thoughts and suggestions on how to open it
The title and introduction have deceived many people. First of all, you have to adjust your psychological expectations and expectations. To put it bluntly, the [opening method] is wrong. Compared with the two worlds cultivating immortals, it is actually more like an alternate world light novel with a post-modern fairy tale flavor, especially the expository text is very strong.
In terms of favorite main characters, the order is: Demon Prison > Disaster Gear > Buddha > Trainer > True Aura. If you read the whole story, True Aura would probably rank 2nd or 3rd, while Demon Prison is number one and unbeatable. 😡
The vegetarian master is back
I checked and all of his previous works are gone, what a pity.
Adding a dog's tail to a sable coat
The beginning was great, and the plot unfolded logically and smoothly. However, it recently went astray; it started focusing on saving the world, became preachy, and portrayed the protagonist as a great philanthropist.
The correspondence between cultivation realms is extremely illogical. A person with a Heavenly Spiritual Root and abundant spiritual energy reaches the fifth level of the Physical Body Realm at 28, which is still below the Foundation Establishment Realm. Especially considering that Chapter Two states this progress is considered excellent, the cultivation realm system is completely broken.
Will this one be as long as the one from the True Qi Era?
I've read over twenty chapters. The writing is smooth, but there aren't many exciting or engaging parts that keep me reading.
Contradictory
At the beginning, it was written that righteous cultivators did not treat mortals as human beings, and the righteous path was limited to cultivators. Although it was the righteous path, it was also similar to the demonic path, so the protagonist wanted to ban immortals. But as the story progressed, a lot of people cared about the common people and could not bear to see them suffer.
What are you writing?
In simple terms of binary dialectics, it is neither good enough nor bad enough. All day long, I'm not in control of my own actions or words; I always find excuses. I can't shrink back, and I can't stretch my head out. Are you as obsessed as the demonic Cang Yue, insisting on writing a protagonist who is supposedly an "ordinary person" but is anything but ordinary and full of flaws?