The Immortal Kingdom of Guixu

To be honest, Baxia was pretty good in the beginning, but it got worse and worse later on. In a place like Guixu, where the law of the jungle exists, you do not focus on developing combat power, but focus on business. Isn't this in line with the old saying, the enemy is gathering food and I am looting it, and the enemy is my granary? Moreover, the author also set up the Tianyuan battlefield. Is it possible that he still wants to do peaceful business there? Don't be stupid, no one is willing to trade with you without strong force. Besides, the male protagonist's realm is extremely high. It takes more than two hundred chapters to reach the skin realm of black iron dragon pattern. Are there still eight remaining sequences that haven't started yet? Not to mention the realm above the black iron In general, the author has exhausted his talent and the sun has set,,, so disappointed

Since the value of the jade plate is so high, not only has the news spread on the dark web, but it is also worth a billion dollars, and the protagonist has already known that the news has been leaked by clearing the dark web. Doesn't the employer know that, and in order to get the jade plate, the employer will not hesitate to spend a lot of money to buy a thousand mercenaries to fight for it, and in order to get it? The jade plate was brought back to the country as quickly as possible, and several high-profile players were sacrificed to cover the protagonist, the secret agent, in bringing the jade plate back. So the question is, since the protagonist brought the jade plate back to the country as quickly as possible, shouldn't the employer spend so much money and send someone to take over as soon as possible? Don't you know the simple truth of "Long Nights and Dreams" and actually let the protagonist take the jade plate to stay at the hotel he booked? Doesn't this mean that those who want the jade plate are there to snatch it from the dark web? What brain circuit is this?

It smells like an urban dragon. I thought I saw a miracle doctor more than ten years ago.

"Wu Tomb" is a masterpiece of fantasy novels at that time, while "Eternal Kingdom" is the masterpiece of Yun Dynasty, but the ending is a bit hasty. "Lord of the Other Side" was originally a pioneering attempt, but unfortunately it failed to break through. But no matter what, the eternal sky boat, supreme artifact, Yunchao Immortal City, Civilization Holy Tower created by the author... And other comprehensive war platforms are all very good settings. The most impressive scene is indeed the scene in "Wu Tomb", when the protagonist Wu Tomb controls the Wu Tomb Tianzhou and leads the martial arts cultivators of the ancient continent to break through the Zerg obstruction and enter the endless starry sky. Paired with the BGM of "Little Apple" by Chopstick Brothers, it made my blood boil as a high school student. Now that the author is getting older, he does not expect more breakthroughs in his new works, but only hopes to be as close as possible to the level of "Wu Tomb" and "Eternal Kingdom" back then. And he successfully completed "Lord of the Other Side" within his ability and continued "Lord of All Demons". It would be perfect if the trilogy "Lord of Ten Thousand Demons", "Tomb of Warriors" and "Eternal Kingdom" could be integrated into a complete world view, and then the subsequent "Lord of the Other Side", "Lord of Ten Thousand Ghosts" and now "Guixu Fairy Kingdom" could be integrated into it.

Make some suggestions. The author's creative direction is wrong. What kind of mobile base farming style should you engage in, such as the recently popular mobile city upgrades, train upgrades, and doomsday convoy upgrades, and write similar novels. Anyway, it is necessary to have a mobile base, and constantly add various combat units and living units and upgrade them. I think if you write this kind of novel, some people will definitely read it. This is also what you are good at

Can you please study how to end it first? Every book has a sloppy ending at the end, especially the one on the other side, which is about to be discontinued again. Just be a human being.

The abilities of the useless teammates you found in the early stage were useless, and they kept following the protagonist to obtain resources. In the middle period, characters from film and television dramas were added to the team. Why didn't you add characters from film and television dramas to team up with the protagonist from the beginning? I've been describing the useless dialogue between the protagonist and those useless teammates, which is a long list of words. These useless teammates are poorly designed and have no impression at all. It would be better to add famous characters from movies and TV series to team up with the protagonist from the beginning.

I can write one chapter about moving materials, which is really invincible. The number of words is endless. 2/3 Of this book is useless nonsense, various side descriptions, and things that can be explained clearly in one sentence. It should not be long if I break it down. I have to write about moving materials (how to move, where to put, how to move in the past, how to move in the future, how to move in the future, why to move like this). There is too much nonsense, and the plot progress is too slow.

Now that I have read Chapter 141, I feel that there is absolutely no need to write about this Quanman Siheyuan, and it is extremely bloody 😅

Before I finished reading the first chapter, I discovered two contradictory points. It was mentioned earlier that foxes are ever-changing and no one can figure out whether they are male or female. However, the protagonist said that after dealing with him several times, he could recognize them from a distance by smell. A jade plate said "unique and precious", but the protagonist was asked to escort him alone. If the protagonist is invincible, he should not do things that are not arranged for escorting. If he is not invincible, he is only given to the protagonist. Is this written by AI or a primary school student?

Have you forgotten the eternal lotus seeds, eternal heavenly boat, and the market connecting all heavens and worlds again? ? ? Why are all the unique things I wrote and written gone? ? ? I really can't understand it!

The author has some imagination, and the subject matter is good, but Che Zulu talks too much, and all kinds of side descriptions do not advance the plot, which is hard water.

I came across this book again. When I saw the weapon shaping chapter on QQ Reading, I couldn't stand it anymore and left silently. The author is also an old author. He has written several books. Now he writes more and more. Aesthetically, I really can't appreciate it, and I still remember it deeply!

There are a lot of ancient characters, so you can't be creative, and dead historical figures have to be dug out of the soil. No wonder you have poor grades. Writing novels is mainly about your wild imagination. You have arrived in another world. Good guy, when you look at it, you are all a fellow from another world. To be honest, a small indigenous planet has no sense of existence in this grand world view. Now that you are here, a group of fellow ants want to dominate the other world.

99.99% Of "Starting Point" books are like 💩.

The author seems to be afraid that the readers' understanding is low. Whenever he explains a new setting, he has to repeat a large paragraph many times in a short space. He is even afraid that I don't know that 20% is one-fifth? ?

I really can't read Qidian. It's no different from Tomato. The high-level ones are very poorly written, and they only make money. The low-level ones have no writing skills.

Although he is said to be an old author, he is useless. His writing style is not good, and the things he writes are not innovative and interesting. To be honest, they are not as good as some books written by newcomers. Alas

A lot of hydrology, a lot of preaching. Why does the author think you have rich experience? Two-thirds of a novel is preaching to readers. Who do you think you are? It's a lot of nonsense, I hope you can get rid of it soon

The writing is really retarded and mentally retarded! Whether it's the pig's feet or the supporting characters, they all look like underdeveloped mentally retarded children.

I really can't stand it any longer. Siheyuan, Ode to Joy, Mr. Zombie are all here. Movie and TV world, right? I'm crazy about my style.

This is a water story. Whose chapter 660 is still a black iron? This is preparation for water to reach chapter 3000.

Reading the introduction is very confusing. Since all things have withered, what is the food that people rely on to eat? Eat dirt?

Alas, when did you sell your account? This AI is too hydrological.

Garbage among garbage, spit it out, all written by AI

No, buddy, the book is called Fairyland. From the comments, it sounds like it's a courtyard house.

Are you serious about dividing the cultivation of the human body into nine parts? Your skin has increased by 100,000 pounds from the dragon mark. Ordinary bones, flesh, bones, tendons and marrow have not changed at all. How can a piece of wood withstand a mountain without falling?

The front is good, but the back is all stretched out, and it's like a film and television world.

Forget it if there are too many oil bottles, the sperm will get into your head

Brother! It's two million words long and it's not even halfway to the black iron level.