A Mortal’s Journey to Immortality: The Tale of Xuan Gu

Due to the popularity of anime, especially the rise of third modeling. Chaotic Star Haimening. Zi Ling plus Song Yu, Mu Peiling. These people are so popular, each with their own characteristics. It doesn't mean that the more women you search for, the more disgusted many people will be. This is wrong. It mainly depends on the brain interaction between the character you create and the protagonist. Nowadays, people who watch anime read fan fiction. Most of the purpose must be to recruit these women. I have read the novel three or four times. In fact, the plot of Tiannan and Luan Xinghai is the one I am most familiar with. Since you have traveled through the Chaos Star Sea, you have missed the first chapter. I definitely want to take advantage of the popularity. Now that Mu Peiling can't accept it, I will accept Song Yu. Don't always think about the main plot of the script that deliberately avoids the protagonist Han Li and starts it alone. If you think about what readers are coming for now and whose plot they are familiar with, they must be familiar with Han Li's special copy. For example, Yunlan Zong, there is no way, the character creation after the anime adaptation is great. Readers have such a high opinion of him that although there is no need to accept them all, they can still accept Song Yu now. Just like the encounter between you and Wen Tianren, the imitation of the plot "Going to a SPA", this is a hot part that is very impressive to the audience. The animation can only go as far as it is now. The popularity of the plot will drop after the release of Tianlan Saint, because more and more people will not understand it. It's better to take advantage of the popularity and accept Song Yu with a lot of brains, so that more people who have high expectations and don't care about books will increase. You can't change some people who obviously keep books, but they forget your book as a result. But if you have a title chapter with a woman named Song, then she will definitely not raise pigs, absolutely. You can definitely take this Song Yu away, because she is the only one left now. As for Zi Ling, I don't see how you describe the character of Zi Ling, especially since there is not much interaction with the male protagonist. In the book you wrote, I have a vague impression of her. If you suddenly write about other examples, such as the sects of the three major monks, the audience will not be very familiar with it. Unless you have strong character creation skills that can attract readers' taste. However, I still recommend describing very thoughtful encounters with Song Yu and others. This kind of feeling is full of expectations. As for the strength, this stock selection is as good as Han Li's already, which means that it is basically invincible. Again, if you want more people to see your book, you can try to gain popularity, such as the popularity of Yunlan Zong and Song Yu. Because there are too many characters portrayed and created, and the audience knows too much. I voted for the monthly ticket. Except for Wen Tianren's part, the writing is still very good and I am very satisfied. You can do it according to your ideas. Except for the big nodes, you need to cross over with Han Li, but you have to combine animation and many fans to incorporate some particularly popular branches so that you can improve your performance. If you are like this woman named Song, she will go on an adventure with Nangong Wan and Mei Ning later. You can make an outline. The protagonist hides his cultivation and appearance and encounters them by chance It happens to be on the same road as your own purpose. You need to be smart to collect Song Yu. Only in this way can those who support books not support books. Your book has many advantages. The first point is that it is written very thoughtfully. I have also been looking for clever fan fiction, but there are very few. Writing more about character development is a plus, because you must grasp some of the most popular branch plots before becoming a god. Come on

If you don't open the Fallen Demon Valley dungeon, you won't be able to enter the middle stage of Yuanying. If you don't open the Dajin dungeon, you won't be able to enter the late stage of Yuanying. You can see the ending at a glance.

I watched the latest episode of Mortal, the small rocky mountain outside Cangkun Cave, and then the mountain flags and other things. The author's extension matched the original work perfectly, and the extension was also very reasonable, and the plot design ability is very strong!

No, I can't watch it at all. The plot is not bad, but only the plot is good. I wrote a lot every time I downloaded a copy, and it seemed like I was making a lot of money, but in the end there was no actual improvement at all. The pressure on cultivation is too great. The beginning of the pill formation is at its peak, more than 450 chapters are still in the early stage of Yuanying, and the latest one is still in the middle stage of Yuanying. Han Li, who had a highly qualified Xuan Gu and was not as good as the four spiritual roots, was dragged to death. He even had the replica of the small green bottle. Speaking of the replica of the golden finger, there was no sense of existence at all. It is obvious that there is no bottleneck in the reconstruction, but the speed is slower than Han Li. The battle pressure is so high that every time I play a high-end game, I have to resort to all kinds of accidents and coincidences to survive. I have no mysterious charm at all. Overall, I feel very ordinary and have no personality charm at all.

This book is a pity. In fact, it can be seen that the author has put effort into researching the transformation of the plot. The main problem is that the rhythm is broken, and the events are arranged too tightly without improving the cultivation level at all. The opening scene is at its peak, and after so long, the grassland war is still in the early Yuan Dynasty. I feel that you are deliberately downplaying the protagonist's cultivation progress and covering it up with some plot conflicts. In fact, you reflect that the Xuanhuang section is too long. I think you are wrong in reflection. The Xuanhuang section is very good if it is taken alone. The characters are all well-depicted. The problem is that you cannot write every battle in detail. For example, in the later period, such as practicing magic weapons to kill Miaohe and other low-end Yuanchu, a few simple paragraphs will be enough. Moreover, a copy of Qingyang Sect was inserted before the elixir was formed in the early stage. In my opinion, it is good to take it out alone, but the length is too long. The character Xuan Gu is also difficult to control, and writing is very difficult, because you have to restore the true character of this character, who is strong and cunning, but also has strong personal charm, chic and calm. In the middle and later stages, everything was pushed forward by events instead of taking the initiative to plan. This resulted in the lack of foresight that the character Xuan Gu should have, and the character deformation was a bit serious. The fundamental reason is that the author's plot plan and strength plan do not match, and the author's own innovation ability is somewhat lacking. In order to update every day, he has to expand the content that should not be expanded in detail. It is okay for a short time, but the rhythm will inevitably collapse over time.

I wrote more than 50 chapters in one copy 1, my face changed drastically 2, I was shocked 3, I regretted 4, I would not escape until the enemy closed the door and beat the dog after the enemy closed the door 5, I almost died 6, I thought of countermeasures, but in fact, there is no specific countermeasure 7, I can only fight 8. I remembered the original work, and I was shocked 9. I had no preparations, no back-ups, and it all depended on luck 10. I am a time-traveler, but I just have no back-ups 11. I am a time-traveler, and I have never thought about the original work and emergencies. I have no plan. 12. I think about countermeasures, I am calm, and I am in danger. But I just don't know what to do. The plot depends entirely on teammates or enemies who suddenly appear 13. Finally, I would like to send a message to the author, I have died of poison, goodbye.

I'll make an alliance with you with my front foot, and you can do this with my back foot? This is the first time I've seen someone treat a reader as a clown?

① After the rebirth of the baby, the plot was too slow. Many book friends have also reported this problem. An old man named Xuanhuang wrote chapters 154-206, a total of 53 chapters. How come, at this speed, do you really plan to write more than 2,000 chapters like Wangyu until the time when you transcend the tribulation and ascend? ② The protagonist has already had many opportunities. It is time to reorganize his own gains and plan the subsequent upgrade route. The current writing method is completely waiting for Han Li to upgrade, and then downloading the dungeon with Han Li. Is that any different from the original work? Do we have to wait for Han Li to go to Xiaoji Palace, Kunwu Mountain in Dajin, and finally sneak into the spirit world? Go to the spirit world and then go to Tianyuan City with Han Li to perform a mission? ③ It can be seen that the author wants to write about the feeling of mortal fighting, but it may be limited by his lack of control over his writing skills, which leads to too much procrastination. The most important thing in the fandom is the character interaction and the novelty of the plot, so make appropriate choices ④ The author is still open-minded, generally does not restrain himself from speaking, and is tolerant of other opinions

Readers of the original work don't know the plot, so they will naturally enjoy watching the adventures of the protagonist. The biggest pleasure of being a time traveler is that it is the most profitable, fastest, and strongest. However, the author wrote another Han Li. What's so interesting about that? If you are interested in it, wouldn't it be better to just re-read the original work?

I can see that I can't write anymore when I come to Tiannan, so I can only follow Han Li's original work.

I didn't find any bad points after reading half of it. On the contrary, it is well written. The character description is in line with the original work, the plot is well deduced, and there is no delay in doing things. The author obviously has a deep understanding of the original work. Many plots are well rounded and well organized. It is considered a masterpiece among mortals. Shennong guarantees that you can definitely watch it

In fact, the author's writing skills and plot deduction ability are really strong, and he is definitely one of the top among mortal fans, and he can even compete for the first place. But I don't know why, the author is so afraid that the plot will deviate from the original work, and insists on keeping the protagonist's combat power to a level not much stronger than Han Li. Even when encountering a situation that is really impossible to get around, he would rather reduce the protagonist's intelligence than let him significantly change the plot. Actually, this is not necessary. For example, in the plot of Kunwu Mountain, wouldn't it work if the protagonist first goes to Chaos Xinghai, his body is promoted to Yuan Hou, and his avatar uses the Six Paths of True Demonic Skills to become a god, and then goes to Kunwu Mountain? The enemy is not strong enough, and more gods can be involved, or even Liuji and Tiankui Wolf King are involved. The author is biased and must control the protagonist's realm in Yuanzhong, for fear of being too powerful and deviating too much from the original plot... In fact, when we read fan fiction, we mostly hope that the protagonist can significantly change the original plot, and we are also happy to see various super developments. What's more, the author is not incapable of originality, and he is not afraid of not having original plot filling. It really makes me shake my head that I am so constrained in writing fan fiction.

Sure enough, whether it is the original work or this book, Han Li is the most charming: he usually travels low-key and cautiously, he is extremely cautious when downloading a copy, he takes action decisively and uses all his strength when encountering danger, he is not greedy when encountering a strong enemy, and he immediately flees far away. Unlike the protagonist in this book who hesitates every time he takes action, and as a time traveler, I don't see the advantages of a time traveler: intelligence advantage, the protagonist knows almost all the plot characters, treasures, and magical powers, and also knows the plot, but does not make preparations. Whether it is based on the original work or the protagonist combines the original work with the current situation, he can basically foresee the direction of things.

I think this is the author's first novel, but it doesn't feel like a newcomer at all. Compared with the original novel, it has the same feeling and the plot is compact and exciting. It's really not bad. Even if the title of this book is changed, it is also a very exciting novel.

Knowing the plot of the original work well, you still help Han Li transform into a god? Still being cornered? Is this protagonist sick?

I felt that the protagonist was very ink-stained. I had to wait for nearly a hundred chapters for a return of the sun, thinking that it was a safe and direct return of the sun. I didn't expect that it would also have a vulgar plot like traditional fantasy: the enemy said that the protagonist could not move, and came to the door, and the plot was full of dangers. They say they are steady, but they don't see it at all.

Others use magic weapons to hide their cultivation, but the protagonist is so awesome that he uses magic weapons to claim his own cultivation 😆 and has to remove the magic weapons every time he starts a fight. Slipping away

Either you update more and make more updates. Your updates are not too fast and you are still procrastinating. There is no need to be at the same level as Han Li. You have to wait for him to ascend, right? I really wouldn't have written it without Han Li.

It's too ink-stained, smelly and long. The original work doesn't even have your ink-spots. Xuangu itself is in the middle stage of Nascent Soul. You've already written a million words and you're still inking back and forth in the early stages. And the golden finger is bigger than Han Laomo's. You're still inking back and forth in the early stages. Whose fanfic has you written like this? Completely exhausted my patience.

The protagonist has been busy strategizing for a long time, and not a single enemy who coveted the Xutian Cauldron has been killed, and now Han Li has become a god. What is the protagonist busy with? Previously, Bingfeng only asked the protagonist to protect her and transform into a god. That was because she didn't know the protagonist's strength. Did the protagonist really just sit there and do nothing? There was only one Supervisor Ye just now and no one was watching. We also have three ice sea level nine demons to help us. It is more than enough for the protagonist to send Yuan Zhong's clone and even Yin Yue to protect Bing Feng. The main body should have slapped the spirit-dropping talisman and led the ancient demon empress Yuan to refine the corpse to attack Han Li and behead him! Destroy Han Li, and then team up with Han Li to kill the old demon Qian. In this way, all the enemies have been dealt with, and Bingfeng can become a god in peace and peace of mind. She owes the protagonist a big favor. If the protagonist has an idea, he can cooperate with Man Beard inside and outside, and become the boss of Xiaoji Palace! What are you writing now? I'm really speechless.

Han Li only spent 271 chapters (Chapter 854 ~ Chapter 1125) from the middle stage of Nascent Soul cultivation to the later stage, and wrote about 800,000 words. You can know how slow the protagonist of this book is in cultivation, it is simply helpless 😐

I hope I can write about the spirit world. The shortcoming is that I don't have a strict positioning of my own strength. I don't have enough trump cards to dare to play a copy with the old demon, and it is a bit overwhelming in combat power and realm. He insisted on delaying the birth of a baby at the same time as Han Li. It is obvious that Golden Finger can imitate the little green bottle and use krypton medicine to cultivate immortality, but the result is that he never relies on elixirs. And I also made a set of flying sword magic weapons. I just hid them and didn't use them. It was a life-or-death situation. I closed my eyes and waited for death. Why didn't I self-destruct the magic weapon? Then why did I practice more than a dozen flying swords? 3. There is no strict plan for the progress of the training. The time traveler knows the details of the original work and what mechanisms are there. To get the fate, you have to be conscious to download those copies. It is a little bit intellectual like an aborigine. In short, it can only be regarded as food and grass. Shuhuang likes the mortal stream to read. Personally, I feel that the most stringent combat power system for the mortal stream is Eternal Green in fast food restaurants. Unfortunately, updating is a problem.

The author is really not good at writing emotional dramas. The characters of several female characters are very different, as if they were industrial assembly lines and have no flavor. The character of the protagonist is also not well developed. Xuan Gu is not like Xuan Gu, and the time traveler is not like time traveler. After reading 600 chapters, his character has not grown much. Logically speaking, after experiencing so much, his character should gradually become old and demonic. The protagonist's behavior is cowardly and not overbearing at all.

Wei Wuya's plot is outrageous. You, an alchemy ghost cultivator, dare to go to other people's late Nascent Soul sect and make nonsense calls, and they even come here to see you? Just because I met you once hundreds of years ago, I will give you face? You can make up the secret realm of the dungeon, don't make up the relationship between the characters, and downplay the unfamiliar things.

This should be able to solve most of the problems that arise now.

Chapter 134 is the early stage of the Nascent Soul, and more than 380 chapters are still the early stage of the Nascent Soul.

The previous Xuan Gu had his own stand, Surviving in the disadvantaged situation, looking for opportunities to return the favor, The battle plot with Sanyang and others was also exciting And he and Mrs. Wen had a good grasp of the sympathy and mutual use of each other. The situation in the land of the dead is somewhat like the meaning of falling in love. Of course I also like Mrs. Wen very much in the original work. The plot of Nan Longhou in the early days of Yuanying is also exciting, and the excessive relationship with Yuan Yao is okay (but not as interesting as with Mrs. Wen). After returning to Chaos Xinghai to find Feng Xina, the whole story is not as interesting as before. From here on, the two protagonists are Han Li and the protagonist. Han Li even influenced the protagonist too much and took the initiative. He has the majestic flavor of the character Xuan Gu. Xuan Gu should be better than Han Li in terms of qualifications, heart, scheming, and golden fingers in the fan fiction. The rest of the story fell into a cliché, and the protagonist became mediocre. It felt like everyone was the confused protagonist. I feel that the mysterious bones in the original text can return Yang and have golden fingers. Maybe they can ascend without Han Li. But among various fandoms, it seems that Han Li can't do it without him.

I haven't watched the useless protagonist for a few months. Is he still in the late Nascent Soul stage?

Looking at the monthly tickets, it feels like there are a lot of people running away.

So far, I would like to call it the number one mortal fan 🥇. Both the writing and the plot are very good. The author has his own ideas but the writing is very objective without too many subjective assumptions about God. The training system is not mentioned, and the fighting and spell-casting scenes are also very well written. , To be honest, I have never seen such a good Mortal fanfic. Next, I must ensure the quality. While listening to the opinions of readers, I must also ensure my own central idea. I will give you all the votes in the future. I hope to write a few more different Mortals after finishing this one, and create more and more brilliant stories! !