Swallowed Star: Starting as a Late Bloomer

1. The concept of this book is very good and unique, with a rare ordinary flow 2. The development of new plots is also pretty good 3. It is a bit watery, but it is not a big problem, and it will not make people too confused. The whole book is coherent 4. The protagonist's realm is too slow. He can go faster in the early stage, otherwise the later chapters may have more words than the original. If there are too many, no one will read it 4. The update speed is not enough, forget it. Occasionally, there will be no update after the update is due. I think the author may not be too careful. With the author's ability, it is no problem to write four or five chapters a day 5. Don't arrange too many extravagant plots for the protagonist in the early stage. The main focus is on the realm. After the world master or immortality, there will be no water. Things 6. Regarding the qualifications for promotion to the secret realm in the future, I feel that based on the protagonist's current performance, he can advance to the secret realm of heaven and earth in the future. There is no need to write too high. 7. The problem of clones: I feel that it is more reasonable to seize the body. Other opportunities are difficult to write, especially with the protagonist's talent 8: Law comprehension problem: both However, if you are an ordinary stream, don't force yourself to understand too much the higher laws. You should focus on the lower laws to break through immortality as soon as possible 9. Don't arrange too many awesome passers-by for the protagonist in the early stage, such as (Douglas, Cammons), because the protagonist's progress will definitely be very slow. There is no need to forcefully arrange so many powerful people in the future to get to know the protagonist

It's well written, and I like seeing the non-protagonist's perspective that wasn't described much in the original novel. The author can give the protagonist a chance to explode at a certain key node

The author's last book became popular in the first half of last year and then drifted away. He dated his girlfriend every day and had no time to come up with ideas. In the second half of the year, his popularity hit the arteries. He almost mailed it, and then he was half dead. Don't make the same mistake in the new book now 🙂

I was a little speechless when I saw the protagonist fighting that demon god. Comparing the protagonist to Hong or Thor, beating that demon clan wouldn't be the same. Does that demon clan have 10 times the genes or something? Even if it's like this, tsk tsk tsk. . . . . . . .

The behavior of the protagonist disgusts me to death. I must say that the protagonist clearly knows that launching a spacecraft with information about the Xuanhuang constellation into space will most likely lead to the enslavement of the planet, but still ignores the future launch of the entire planet. He clearly knows the virtues of a space adventurer but still wants to leave the launch coordinates of the planet. The author euphemistically says that even if he becomes a slave, he can be released from slavery. I just want to say, shit on you! , The protagonist only has the chance to break away from slavery by having an understanding and an egg, and they will directly lock your upper limit, and you will be a slave forever! , Along with the billions of people on the entire planet to be slaves for life after life, it really disgusts me, this is the level of the author!

The author wants to cultivate the identity of an ordinary genius step by step, but now it is a bit deviated from the original intention. It is no problem to set up a clone with a chance. The initial setting of the demon clan's two-tailed demon mink is very good. Combining it with the demon killing clan's clone is the best choice for common losers. Now set up a special life of thirty times, and then have the Venerable Patriarch to participate. There is something wrong with choosing a demon-slaying clan with twice the genes in the exam. It is a disadvantage, and ordinary geniuses have deviated from their original intention. Now Teacher Feng Wang is still following the route of the Venerable Patriarch, and his cultivation speed is comparable to that of the original secret realm genius. He has reached the fourteenth floor of the Sky Bridge before he is 100,000 years old. Is this in line with the growth path of ordinary geniuses? Regardless of the fact that at first glance, I thought it was another genius who only appeared in tens of thousands of epochs.

The original work Swallowing the Stars has been renamed

There are more than 50 pictures of the protagonist attending three banquets, accounting for twenty chapters! ! ! Men hate shopping and parties! It is recommended to change it to an auction

Oh, the water beast god started writing Devour again?

Banquet Quite a sigh Too modest Can't help but 😁 🙏

It looks like using AI to expand the plot. It feels like one chapter is divided into five or six chapters. It may also be a separate water skill. After all, he is an old author.

Why do people have to make fun of the protagonist everywhere? ? ? Innate mockery of the Holy Body? ? ? ? There are also those scenes of listening to sermons and the subsequent scenes of breaking through the overpass. . They are all carved from the same mold, and these similar plots appear again and again. . . I used to be a banquet expert, but now I am a copy and paste expert. . . .

The protagonist is a virgin bitch who sends detectors into the universe for her own selfish reasons. She thinks so well of space adventurers that she is not afraid of occupying her own planet and enslaving all mankind? After reading so many devouring articles, this operation makes me feel very sick. I hope I will fight to the end.

To put it bluntly, it was too watery and the beginning was like this. When I joined a force, I won ten cards. There was no turning point at all. I can understand if there is a competition or something. As a result, from participating to confirming my entry, I lost ten cards.

I originally thought the author wrote it from this perspective. It's quite distinctive. As a result, he only engaged in some witty plots. A realm lord not only has the combat power of a peak lord. And since he is always being killed and never dies, it is easy to tell that he is at least a genius from a wealthy family. Then it has always been the human camp, so isn't it obvious that it is the clone of the human genius? And then it is also written that no one can see it. It is normal not to see it for a while, but the other three times, 5 times, 10 times, and 8 times are all fools? You said the world leader doesn't know. The Immortal Prince doesn't know, the Immortal King doesn't know, and their venerables don't know either. Only you know.

The genius battle of devouring fellows is so boring, this late bloomer can't still participate in the genius battle!

If you use other people's books as a basis, you won't be able to write anything new. It's still the same as Tomato's routine. Others fight against the golden-horned monsters, but you fight against the demons and gods, and you fight tooth and nail. Why don't you go watch the Swallowing Starry Sky again?

Devouring the big stage, don't come here if you are too small. You are too small.

Why do I feel like all the good protagonists in recent Devouring fanfics are named Lu Qingshan.

This is the author's worst Devouring fandom. He is always in trouble, but he insists on becoming a cosmic-level disciple, and later joins a third-rate force.

Readers' suggestions may not be correct. There are some things that readers cannot listen to. For example, in the chapter about soliciting the opinions of clones, a lot of readers said that they don't want clones, but if you really write like that, it's over. The clone is the highlight of Swallowing Starry Sky and is also Luo Feng's signature method. When mentioning Swallowing Starry Sky, clones come to mind. The readers of these comments are tired of reading, but there are more silent readers who want to see the clone. If you really follow the interests of the louder people, the final result may not be good.

I finally figured it out. The protagonist of this book basically increases his talent with each year he lives. For example, if you live ten thousand years, your talent will be that of a genius of one era. If you live for 100 million years, your talent will be that of a genius of tens of thousands of epochs.

Is this also a story that Che Lulu talks about?

I hope this book won't be like the last one. The rest of it is written without any sense. The human race is almost dominating the original universe, but characters like Eclipse, Kodi, and Zhenyan can actually be born. What do you think? Even City Lord Luo shouldn't be able to be born!

It's time to give up. I've been late and owed even less updates. The batch of content that was updated in the last week of Shui was so unpleasant that it was only half a chapter to be posted by other authors. You're returning 90% of the water in this batch of water every day. It's as if you haven't read it yet. I've withdrawn it.

King Shuiwen, the master of banquets😅

I discovered that the protagonist's friends have Chinese names, and the enemies or strangers have foreign names. Did the author have any experience or requirements that led him to write this?

King Zhen in the original work. He was Luo Feng's first teacher when he entered Chaos City. He practices the Law of Earth and Space, which can be seen from the Beast God Cultivation Card given to him by Luo Feng in the original work. It is a combination of earth and space. Luo Feng started practicing the Golden Sky Law. The Chaos Monument True King whom Luo Feng cultivated was also a grandmaster of that lineage. It shows that the Chaos Monument is also suitable for the law of earth and space. The protagonist should choose the same wonton monument as Luo Feng! A lot of fan fiction just solidifies ideas. I feel that the Chaos Monument that Luo Feng cultivated is only suitable for Jin Kong. Others will definitely not work. Generally speaking, it is not the same as the Golden Sky Law practiced by Luo Feng, the protagonist of the original work. Then definitely not choose the same Chaos Monument as Luo Feng. In fact, it can be seen from Luo Feng's teacher. You can also choose to practice the law of earth and space.

What was written, a clone, turned over and over again, how many chapters have been lost?

If you don't have time to write, then don't write. Wait until you have time to write. Now it's just pure fooling around.