Swallowed Star: Supremacy Across the Heavens

I gave up when I saw the sharing of talents. Please, a weak person cannot protect a secret, and if it is leaked, the protagonist will be dead.

Seeing how silly Pig's Feet always likes to do live broadcasts and exposes all the secrets to his close friends and family, I feel that Pig's Feet is written by the author as a fool. After all, any powerful illusionist in Devouring Starry Sky World can hypnotize and enslave the weak. Pig's Feet exposes all the secrets to weak relatives and friends, which is harming himself and them! As a result, once talent sharing came out, I guess many people would give up! Why? Because the author has a creator's perspective, he may feel that it's okay to share everything with his real-world relatives and friends in the novel, but we readers will only feel unhappy when we read this kind of fast food article and can't substitute so much! Moreover, the pig's foot talent should be mainly aimed at improving one's own life-saving ability and training ability, so it is most reasonable for the third talent to be a clone ability! As a result, it came directly to the late stage, or what is the talent for assisting others? The more I read this fanfic, the more I feel that it's no wonder Tomato is a great god. According to the writing, the fanfic can't arrange a wave of relatives and friends like the original pig's feet?

If I could time travel through this introduction, I would think so too 🤭

You don't have an ID card if you're not at planet level. How can you open a bank account if you don't have an ID card and you're not even a citizen? When you're on an alien planet and you're still walking on the street, aren't you, an apprentice, afraid of being slapped to death by someone else?

No! What the hell happened in the last few chapters? It was originally written well, but why did it suddenly summon "players from another world" to come over and play the game? If these "alien souls" summoned by the protagonist are absolutely loyal, then I have no objection. It can be regarded as summoning millions of soul slaves, but the author just set them as "players" with their own thoughts and uncontrollable behavior! Moreover, the protagonist has no effective means of control when facing them. He can only ban or delete their accounts like the game official does. Isn't this asking for trouble? Besides, does calling these players over to play the game bring any great benefit to the protagonist? Can we get a group of loyal subordinates? Or a talent that can enhance the protagonist's understanding of the law? Anyway, I don't see any benefits so far. I only know that these players are big troubles that are beyond their control! Forget it! Having said so much, I guess the author won't listen to it, so I'll wait for another two days to see what happens😔

I didn't want to say it at first, but I wanted to say more and more in my mind, author, can you mention the IQ of the high-ranking human beings in the book? You have reduced their intelligence and made them feel that they are not worthy of being high-ranking human beings. In the original work, after Luo Feng and Hong showed outstanding will, the top management successively dispatched the Chaos City Lord to investigate. The Chaos City Lord did not find anything, and then Juax went to investigate. Your protagonist and his whole family are so talented that they have all joined the virtual universe, yet no one has investigated it yet? Especially your description of the Lord of the Universe's control of time and space. I feel like no one in the book knows how to control time and space. You are trying to humiliate them too hard. It feels a bit insulting to my IQ when I read it. I really can't stand it anymore.

If there is no adversity, create adversity and create plant life. What is the use of this thing?? It looks cool, but when this thing is developed and used, the pig's feet won't need this thing, and it will also cost money. If there is no conflict, create conflict. As soon as the pig's trotters get rich and have people, they will immediately arrange conflicts and force the pig's trotters to run away.

First of all, praise it well, I am willing to write an original plot, it does not start from the earth, it is very innovative. However, the author's writing and layout skills are a bit lacking, and the plot is weird. And I really want to complain about the person who shares his talents with those around him. After flipping through the catalog, it seems that the whole family of five has entered the original secret realm? Is it a little too outrageous?

This author is really awesome. He will give you a wave of poison every few days.

I hate those parents and his best friend. This is swallowing the stars. In the later stage, you are so powerful that you can support me no matter what. In the early stage, you