Marvel: Cosmic Conglomerate

At present, it seems that the author's writing is pretty good. I hope it won't be like a certain Delta Technology book that was abandoned as soon as it was put on the shelf. Another personal suggestion is that technology should not move too fast. You can develop a plot of fighting with other companies in other dimensions for a certain technology, and then you can insert it into the Marvel hero system. Once a giant enterprise is formed, it will inevitably develop with the consortium. Comparative competition can lead to rapid development.

Tentatively, this is a collection of stories about Paradox Interactive's war criminals. The protagonist is quite wicked, but that's what giant corporations need – wicked capitalist behavior. Anyway, with Graywind around, I have the right to not eat beef (a slang term for being a slang term for someone who doesn't eat beef). I suggest reducing the amount of romantic entanglement with the female protagonist. Your descriptions of emotions aren't very strong. There are many highlights: expansive dimensions, corporate warfare, alien battles, and a global struggle for supremacy. The author corrected some of the problematic parts I pointed out; I think it's alright.

Love and Nuclear Peace

Seriously, you've already given us such a huge power-up right from the start, unleashing Gray Wind right at the beginning, how are you going to write the rest? It feels like your Resident Evil arc is killing people off way too quickly... After reading the first dozen or so chapters, all I remember is the banter between Gwen... In short, there's nothing particularly noteworthy so far...

The female lead's massive, ten-ton thunderous slam, the protagonist's lower body was shattered to pieces 🤣🤣🤣

Oh, it's a global giant! I thought it was some kind of sinister enterprise, the Stone Man! It scared me to death!

Almost all the female protagonists in the StarCraft fanfiction are Little Grey, it's infuriating! When will our Insect Mom fans finally stand up?! Insect Mom's eternal love and eternal embrace are just so wonderful!

My suggestion is not to prey on every pretty woman. Give the main character some dignity and don't let them become lowlifes. Unattached female characters are fine, but those who are in relationships are just too degrading.

If Marvel scientists compare their disciplines to an abyss, ordinary people are climbing, advanced researchers are using jetpacks, and top scientists are digging holes out of thin air—Marvel has so many wheelchair-bound scientists! I don't deny that Osborn and Stark are talented, but the others aren't all fools. Marvel scientists are practically gods in their respective fields. For example, Dr. Pym's Pym Particles, and the protective suits are super technology for exploring other dimensions, not to mention the hidden magical properties of the Pym Particles. If you can thoroughly research energy conversion, loan sharks will band together to become your researchers! Marvel has plenty of unlimited energy.

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