Swallowed Star: Life Simulation
吞噬星空之人生模拟
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 518k Words
- Subgenre
- Myriad Worlds
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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40 Years later? ? ? ? ? ? Since we are writing about the Great Nirvana Era, we shouldn't jump too far for such a long time. What does sleeping mean? In order to keep up with the development of the plot, copy it unchanged?
The first thing I wrote was okay, but the later part has been dormant for 40 years. Don't you have anything to write about? It was still pressed from behind. It's really funny. What kind of simulation system is this? Bullshit.
The way this plot is arranged, it's too obvious that the protagonist's level is suppressed.
6. If it really floats, poison will be released as soon as it comes up? He was seriously injured and fell asleep at the beginning.
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I feel that fans of Devouring Starry Sky can delve deeper into the original plot of the apprentice planetary level on the earth and the star level (before the genius war) in the universe. After all, the subsequent plots are really similar. They are all genius battles - training missions - external inspectors - extraterritorial battlefields, and then they are almost crowned kings and venerables. After all, when I watched Swallowing the Stars back then, my favorite plot was still the Earth chapter.
The first one was rubbish, the second one was rubbish too. If your IQ is not good enough, just go back and move bricks.
I'm really worried for the author. I don't know how many people have left the story in the past 40 years. It was obviously a new development trend, but it turned out to be a lightning point. After that, it fell into a cliché and the results were not good. The author has no passion in writing. It feels a bit broken. Alas, I can't see the future at all.
If you don't know how to write, don't write about the Great Nirvana! Just copy the plot and start writing. Anyway, there are a lot of fans who will watch it, but you will sleep for forty years at the beginning. Even if you're a fan of the original novel, you won't read it.
It makes sense that your novel is not popular. You inexplicably ended up in a 40-year coma and wasted 40 days. You had to wait for Luo Feng to rise at the same time, and then you made a Golden Finger one. I don't know how there was a chance to simulate it. You might as well just write about Luo Feng's time period.
It's boring to keep suppressing the combat power. It's better than the previous book. Goodbye.