The Myriad Worlds Map

Master Lingzhi was still able to interact with Qiu Qianren and smiled.

The writing is pretty good, but I wish each world could be longer and not too short, so as not to turn into a running account. In addition, if the main world can be written well, it will be very brilliant. The collision between the martial arts of other worlds and the world of cultivating immortals based on spiritual roots is now a great start. I hope it won't collapse.

I also feel toxic. If you don't have the brainpower to write a plot, don't write a useless story. The protagonist's previous life was in the era of information explosion, and this life is in the world of cultivation. After several decades, why is it that in the Luding World, he still behaves like he is ignorant of the world? He must not have the intention to harm others, and must have the intention to guard against others. Now a primary school student can understand how he survived (the writing is too stupid)! There is no need to write about Deer Cauldron and Shooting Condor in the original version (the starting point is so high). It is still interesting to just write about Fengyun.

Are you writing about the most delinquent person in the world?

The settings can be changed. The pig's foot is a second-hand travel prop from the previous time traveler, which is still broken. It has also been worn in the world that the previous time traveler passed through. Who knows if you will meet someone you like in the future and find out that the previous pig's foot slept with it 😓. Besides, after the pig's foot has raised the system, how will it be connected to the previous pig's foot. . So many holes have been dug. This cannot highlight the unique mystery of pig's feet, and the sense of substitution is not good.

Why are there so many perverts in Qidian? Do you like putting an old man in the protagonist's head? Abandon the pit! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Does the protagonist have a problem with his IQ? ! ! !

The protagonist's last life was in vain... This introduction is very problematic. If you don't have spiritual roots in the main world and you can't practice, why should you go to the fairy world...

Please update the world of Elf Dream Ye Luoli

What is the protagonist doing in Shooting Condors? It's practicing exercises, learning martial arts, and fighting for hegemony. I can't figure out what he wants to do there.