Swallowed Star: From the Start, I Settled 100,000 Years of Bitter Cultivation

Why is it so inexplicable every time I write about a woman? It's about training, and it's about women fighting in the palace. It's clear that the protagonist's understanding in the inheritance is very strong, but the intelligent life of the woman just keeps saying no, no, no, he's a human in the secret realm. Then the reward was lowered by one level, and then an intelligent life who had lived with the feudal lord for an unknown number of years kept talking to Luo Xi among the sisters. Please, you are recruiting disciples for the master, and Luo Xi kept pretending to be a white lotus.

Every time I see you describe in detail the pretty boy and Sister Yu, the perverted woman the protagonist is with, and the immortal he is suspected of cheating on, I feel sick to my stomach while reading it. It has a good setting and a fresh initial background. Just write the main plot well and enrich the world view from other aspects, not those disgusting things.

It's okay to leave aside the descriptions of women and other content, but when it comes to those women describing all kinds of mindless viciousness, it's like watching those exaggerated skits and all kinds of little fairy behaviors. Delete these or change them. The results should be better

I really couldn't stand the plot about the female genius, so I ran away first.

The entry angle of this book is quite good and it is relatively readable, but the author's understanding of the original work is difficult to read. For example, in the original work, humans can only touch the law at the ninth level of the domain. Only extremely rare people can touch the law at the seventh level of the domain. However, if this book does not touch the law at the seventh level of the domain, it means that the talent is mediocre. Come on, most of the original work has not touched the law at the ninth level of the domain. The author also has a confusing understanding of the law. Isn't this the same meaning in the original work as comprehending a trace of the law, touching the threshold of the law, stepping into the threshold of the law, and getting started with the law? Is the author's understanding progressive? How many years and decades does each step take? I'll go, it's awkward

1. Avatars are best at saving lives. Get a soulless avatar and maximize your life-saving capabilities. 2. The avatars given by the original universe will be ineffective when you are a true god. Get some avatars that are beneficial to the true god and beyond. For the divine power route, one blood sea clone and one avatar from the Yan God Clan. Maximize your talents. 3. Break through to the route of the true god with divine power. Get some clones that will help you break through to the Lord of the Universe. According to the law of fusion, the best natural beast god cannot be conceived, and the level of the inferior starry sky beast is a bit low. The law of time and space and the blood sea clone are good. Unfortunately, when you can get the materials, it is possible that the law of time and the law of space have reached the 20th floor of Tongtian Bridge and are useless. So get someone who is good at the law of time and the law of space. The talent is about a hundred times to a thousand times. A special life clone with multiple genes is enough In summary, the best clone combination is: a soulless clone, a blood sea clone, a Yan God Clone, and a special life clone gifted with the law of time and space. Other fancy clones are meaningless.

I would like to make a suggestion, could you please stop wandering around in the Poganwu Universe Kingdom and scheming with a few Pokenhous there all day long? Based on the speed of progress shown by the protagonist, it can be said that he is the seedling of the Lord of the Universe. No matter how much he looks down on him, it shows that there is still a master who is willing to accept him as a disciple. As a result, I am constantly being plotted by others. As long as there is a backstage, there will be so many bad things.

Why is the author's update speed getting slower and slower?

Looking forward to an exciting plot design with ups and downs! ! You can go on for a while, but you can't keep developing in a mediocre way, as it will wear away your patience.

I didn't read the content. I just glanced at the introduction and found something strange. The protagonist, a human in a secret realm, can be stuck at the cosmic level for 100,000 years. This talent is a bit lame. If placed in the universe country, he would probably be stuck at the star level or even the planet level. After all, the energy in the secret realm is rich, and it is relatively easy to break through to the world master. However, due to the lack of innate soul, it is difficult to understand the law, it is difficult to break through to immortality, and it is almost impossible to break through to the universe master.