Swallowed Star: Starting with a Warblade

The comments in the poisonous comment area of the recent chapters have made it very clear The first point is that the competition mechanism of the genius battle for countless years has been completely destroyed because of the protagonist's so-called low talent for laws and the targeted behavior of not allowing him to enter the original secret realm. This has affected the credibility of the virtual universe system for countless years. , The issue of prestige, according to the later chapters, it seems that it is still the arrangement of several kings, this kind of behavior that wantonly destroys the credibility of the virtual universe system. To be honest, the lives of these kings are probably not as valuable as the reputation of the virtual universe system among the top human beings. They can just drag them to sacrifice to heaven. Second point, the host and highest person in charge of this genius battle is the Nine Swords Venerable. All arrangements and various matters for this genius battle should be implemented with the consent of the Nine Swords Venerable. However, the article does not mention that several kings directly bypassed the Nine Swords Venerable and made various changes to the competition system to compensate the geniuses. What are they doing? When leadership doesn't exist? Moreover, the geniuses in this genius battle are all subordinates of the future Nine Swords Venerable. If one of his subordinates is arranged arbitrarily in front of him by someone who is lower than himself without his consent, does it mean that the Supreme Lord of the Universe has no temper? Third point, in the original book, it is clearly mentioned through the Luo Feng Domain Lord level highest points task that the person who presides over the daily affairs of the Virtual Universe Company is the Universe Venerable, not a few kings. The kings can only be regarded as executors and errands, and it is impossible to have decision-making power at the level of a genius battle. Fourth point, the original book is very clear, the field is the prerequisite for understanding the law. A planet level, no, a person who can understand the field at the apprentice level, you tell me that his law talent is poor? Those who are really bad in the field cannot understand the talent, and the forced talent is very poor The fifth point is that the tone is too high and cannot be followed. It is better to arrange for the protagonist to be low-key, even if he enters the secret realm of the apocalypse, than to go to the best result but get into a bad one due to the shady secrets. In the end, it is as hypocritical as giving a bone to a dog and the so-called compensation for making an exception to enter the secret realm of the beginning. This kind of plan once again destroys the rules of the genius battle and compensates for an improvement law. Isn't it good to have talented resources? If you have the ability, you can naturally enter the beginning or even the primitive world The sixth point is that the setting of the inner world is in vain. A good inner world only allows the protagonist to control the whole body. Have you never heard of the human body's microcosm? Set it up. The protagonist has low talent for the laws of the universe. Isn't it good to be able to understand the laws of the universe through the inner world Okay, it's done, delete the book and leave

The most annoying thing is that fans do not respect the settings of the original work. The positioning of various realms, economies, and treasures does not match on the one hand. The personalities of the characters represented by Chaos and the attitudes of the forces represented by the virtual universe are on the other hand. Disrespecting the setting is as disgusting as writing about Dumbledore marrying a wife and having children, or writing about Guo Jing surrendering to Mongolia. From the perspective of Virtual Universe Company, so what if there are thousands of genius battles? There may not be a single venerable person, but at most there will be a few kings, relying on time to wash away the sand. What is the investment in the original secret genius? Even if it can be raised to the level of immortal kings, the cost is just to let the Lord of the Universe or even the Venerable go to that secret realm to harvest it and then it will be repaid. Look at the mortality rate of Luo Feng's time, not to mention that the vast majority of kings and lords still die in the Gu-raising style of cultivation without a chance of resurrection. These are sunk costs. This is the sense of separation from the original work. Does the Nine Swords Venerable care about the newcomers of the four secret realms with a thousand people in a class? So what about the primitive secret realm? You have to be able to hold it after entering it, otherwise Long Yun will end up being kicked into Taichu after a while. The vast majority of geniuses who compete with the strong will be squeezed into the next secret realm by fierce competition after a while and finally end up in the apocalyptic secret realm. Real geniuses can naturally gain a firm foothold in the primitive and Taichu. If everything is really based on the talent of law perception, then why do we need to use actual combat to decide where to go? Just detect the realm of laws directly. Even if it is Hong, his laws are not good, but his mentality is strong. Juaxe personally recruits disciples and lets Xu Jin teach him, and other ethnic groups come to make up for him. If the genes are not good, the laws are not good, then use treasures, or take away special lives to make a clone. Even if the protagonist is not talented at the beginning and slowly rises by taking the civilian route, even if he is bumpy and hard along the way and always loses, I will not dislike it. As long as he respects the original work and writes a good plot, the gains and losses of the protagonist are not important, but I can't bear to violate the original design.

Compensation for being crowned a king? ? Lord Nine Swords: Did I die suddenly? ? Can King Feng decide the list of Taichu Secret Realm? ? Virtual Universe: Did I die suddenly? ?

The latest poisonous point 😢😢😢 I believe everyone has discovered it Virtual Universe Company cannot be biased and change the rules There is a high probability that there will not be a Universe Master in every genius competition And the [Item Spirit] of Virtual Universe Company is responsible for most things, he is the master of the universe of the mechanical clan! Will people target you? Look at the original book where the Lord of Chaos discovered that Luo Feng had a golden horn and a clone, which can be considered cheating. The Lord of Chaos didn't care and said: As long as you have deceived the responsible lord, that's your skill I don't care at all, no, I should say I don't care You value the genius battle too much What does a session in 5,000 years count in the eyes of those powerful men in the universe? It's just a quota for the Chaos Secret Realm! The status is comparable to immortality, and at most it can be made a lord! [Worship the king as my teacher, and my status will never be as high as the king] On this point, do I need to change the rules? The Venerable may not be qualified to change! In large companies and organizations, unless you break out of the rules, you must follow procedures . . . . . Too unreasonable! Whether the protagonist wins or loses! Another poisonous spot! Write a poisonous point, and then block it again The protagonist wins? It's so unreasonable. I keep saying that the protagonist has poor talent, but in the end he wins. It's so unreasonable! Let Poland go to the secret realm of heaven and earth? Slap those immortals in the face, slap the big man who changed the rules [at least the Venerable, most likely the Lord of the Universe] in the face The protagonist loses, and then surprises everyone step by step? Hehehehe Abuse the Lord? It's still a slap in the face to the immortal and powerful figure! And can the protagonist not be angry? Can the big shot let the protagonist rise with confidence? The protagonist becomes stronger every time he gets slapped in the face! Too underestimated the big shots, they can't even see the talent of the protagonist? Directly offending people, and also making a big mistake [not following the rules] . . . . . Stop talking, let's see what the author's views are! 😢😢😢😢 Every poisonous spot must be blocked one by one! !

Personally, I think the best thing about this book is that every step of the protagonist's growth is demonstrable. In some books, the protagonist grows up too fast, and the opportunities are arranged too randomly, causing the rhythm to break down, and he becomes immortal in 200 chapters. Others don't describe the protagonist's growth enough, resulting in it being inexplicably strong, like the author's YY notes rather than a novel. Every time I see a plot like this, I have a feeling: Is this the main character? It's nothing great, just give me the chance and I'll do it! This book is very good. There are more than 30 chapters so far. Every bit of progress of the protagonist is logical. The progress of sword skills and changes in mood are all natural and follow the development of the plot. It is convincing: "The protagonist has experienced so much and can make such progress. It is indeed a accumulation of accumulated experience." Rather than saying that the protagonist knows the importance of state of mind, reads classics, and then becomes innocent and becomes one with nature and man. I hope the author can continue to maintain such advantages, and I am looking forward to the following plots! Of course there are other things I like. The character of the protagonist, the text, and the original work should only be regarded as the background of the times, rather than the original work in the text. I won't go into details. In short, I like it! !

All I can say is that this novel still has a long way to go. The author's diligence in researching information is very worthy of appreciation. This is a manifestation of responsibility. I believe that the final effect of such a book should be good, unless the author can't think of it and writes those very disgusting fragments. Overall, it is more in line with my appetite. Keep up the good work, work hard, become bigger and stronger, and create greater glories.

So far, I have never seen a Virtual Universe company with such low standards. It completely violates the setting of the original work. You have set a new limit for devouring fans. The most recent article about Genius Zhan is a hammer. Lord Feng Wang has the IQ of a dog and is extremely short-sighted. Virtual Universe Company ended up targeting a star-level minion, completely losing its structure and ambition as the pinnacle force of the human race. As soon as this plot came out, it is estimated that nine out of ten Devouring fans will burst into pieces on the spot.

I wrote Chapter 12 of the second volume yesterday. Some book friends feel that the protagonist's strength does not match the strength of the God of War. Let me explain it in detail. First, some book friends have a misunderstanding about the strength standard of the God of War level caused by God's perspective. Many people believe that the low-level God of War has at least several times the force amplitude, and that the third-level body and sword skills are standard for the God of War. They feel that the protagonist has not yet reached the strength of the God of War. In fact, in the original work of Swallowed Starry Sky, there is only one requirement for the promotion of a low-level god of war: that is, to kill two junior lord monsters and submit a record of their performance. Argument: The original text in Chapter 36 of Chapter 4 of Part 1: [The level of a warrior is determined by the performance of hunting monsters. For example, in order to reach the 'Junior Warrior Level', you must have a record of killing two Junior Warrior monsters! [If a rich boy buys the corpses of two junior lords and says that he killed them, his warrior level will change to a 'Junior God of War'. Once you do this, it will easily attract some warriors to challenge you. That's all if you have the strength. If he has no strength, it would be embarrassing for a person with the title of 'Elementary God of War' to be ravaged by a group of warriors. Therefore, most people are unwilling to obtain the title without sufficient strength. For example, if your body is only at the level of a high-level warrior, but you have high power and strong sword skills, and can kill two junior lords in total, you are already a junior god of war in the evaluation of the Devouring original work. Therefore, the strength threshold and upper limit of the elementary and intermediate gods of war are actually much weaker than those from the perspective of God. Only at the advanced God of War level can there be peak figures with physical strength that reaches the peak of the Advanced God of War, high amplitude of force exertion, and strong sword and body skills. Because they are not at the planet level, they will be stuck at the advanced God of War level. Some readers also think that the third level of Shenfa and Swordsmanship has several times the force amplitude, which is considered standard equipment for the God of War. There is a very classic example in the original Devouring text, the God of War 'Yang Hui' who led Luo Feng into the God of War training camp. Argument: Chapter 14 of Part Two Trial Tower Original Text [Luo Feng turned to look at a black stone pillar on the right side of the entrance to the Trial Tower. Carvings also appeared on this black stone pillar—— "Name: Yang Hui Gender: Male Identity: God of War Trial Tower Level: 3.2"] Part Two Chapter 16 Jiangnan Pavilion original text [Yang Hui is a mid-level God of War! As the only veteran mid-level war god Yang Hui in the book whose strength is evaluated with clear data, his trial tower level is 3.2. Everyone in the trial tower has the same body values, only the comprehensive bonus of body skills, fighting methods, and force amplitude. What is the concept of the 3.2 Trial tower level of the veteran mid-level God of War? Argument: In Chapter 29 of Part 2 (the original text is more, you can check it by yourself), Luo Feng has also reached the trial tower level 3.2. How strong is Luo Feng at this time? Perfect-level body skills have been consolidated, and the second-level sword skills have slightly improved, with the power level 2.8 Times. This is the standard, which can be regarded as the level of a veteran mid-level god of war! Argument: The original text of Chapter 33 of the second chapter of the huge reward [Luo Feng's final trial tower level is 3.6. He finally successfully completed the b stage, but in the c stage, Luo Feng was killed quickly. "Well, compared with my body's power reaching 3.5 Times and my body skills reaching the perfect level, my weakness is sword skills, which are only at the second level."] At this time, Luo Feng's body skills are at the perfect level, sword skills are at the second level, and his body's power is 3.5 Times. The trial tower level is 3.6, Which is far higher than the 3.2 Level of the veteran mid-level war god Yang Hui. At this point in the argument, it is already obvious. In the original work Swallowing the Stars, the strength of the low-level God of War and the middle-level God of War are not as strong as some book friends thought. The third level body skill, the second level slightly accomplished sword skill, exerts 2.8 Times the force, which is already considered to be the level of a veteran mid-level god of war. In this fanfic, the strength of the protagonist is controversial. The protagonist's current strength is that both body and sword skills have reached the middle stage of the third realm, and the force amplitude is 4 times. This data is significantly higher than the veteran mid-level God of War by more than one level. It is not an exaggeration to say that he is at the level of a high-level God of War. The protagonist's basic strength is at the threshold of a warrior, with 4 times the force, and the strength reaches the threshold of an elementary god of war. The elementary god of war has a force amplitude but the average level will not exceed twice (refer to Yang Hui). In terms of strength, the protagonist is one level weaker than the Elementary God of War. In terms of combat level, he is two or three levels higher than the Elementary God of War. His overall strength is considered to be the top of the Elementary God of War. I personally think the logic is smooth. In addition, the setting system of Swallowed Starry Sky is rigorous and meticulous, but after all, there are still many blank settings. If you want to write a fanfic with a new plot, you must figure out these blank settings by yourself. A thousand readers, there are a thousand Hamlets, and everyone has their own understanding of engulfment. My position is that discussions that quote the settings of the original work are acceptable, but questions based on personal impressions are not accepted. (In fact, I don't have the energy to explain every question that deviates from the original work.) Hey guys, I work part-time. I only have time and energy every day to think about the plot and code. It is already the limit. Recently, every update has been very fast. From last night to noon today, I basically searched for the original text to explain this wave of settings. I haven't thought about the plot today, and I haven't coded a word. (Paralysis.) I hope the bosses can be tolerant of the settings cited in the new plot of this book in the future, and I would like to ask for follow-up reading and votes. Oh, that's all, I'll come back to code in the evening.

Forcibly suppressing the revision of the original work There are many things to learn about changing the rules in the swallowing star. For example, there is a mathematical genius who can solve Goldbach's conjecture in the college entrance examination. The overall score in the college entrance examination is second in the country and he just passed the English. Then the Ministry of Education specifically targeted it and changed the rules not to allow people to apply for other schools to enter junior colleges...

To use an analogy, this is just like a national leader suppressing an unknown college entrance examination candidate, saying that he is too subject-oriented and what he has learned is a bit unpopular at this stage, and then suppressing and manipulating his college entrance examination ranking. Does this make it clear to everyone?