Writing Scripts in Marvel, and They Call Me the Mastermind?

Preface: I have already read Chapter 106. I don't know if the author will improve it later. Before subscribing, I personally thought it was quite interesting, but the more I watched it, the more I felt disconnected. The author's description is seriously separated from the plot! He keeps explaining it in dry language... Because he is the protagonist, he wins. Wait, how did the protagonist win? Didn't I say that he is the protagonist and very smart! What's a smart way? The protagonist uses his own wisdom to solve this disaster... Then what did the protagonist do? Use wisdom to solve disasters... [Possible spoilers] The most obvious one is Tony. I don't know if Tony's character is like this or what. The author has been using the word "smart" to dryly emphasize Tony's wisdom, but in terms of behavior and actions in the plot, Tony is a manic patient, and everything will make him angry and sweaty. The wisdom from beginning to end is that the author said "Tony is very smart" and "recently researched a new set of armor". You ask me what he did in the plot? In a fight, if your opponent is too strong, you have no choice but to rely on your teammates. In the battle of wits, he has always been in a state of complete refusal to communicate. He is unwilling to even use tricks or use Nick. I don't know whether he looks down on him or is too arrogant. When things are going smoothly: "I won't listen, I won't listen, because you have harmed everyone. I don't trust you anymore, huh!" After encountering a big crisis: "Damn it, I really can't do anything to you! I just I can cooperate with you, but there will be no next time~" Tony's super wisdom told him that even if he doesn't have super power, he can just wait for his teammates to use their strength Tony is just lying down to win the dog, with a record of 0.3, And his language was banned for insults Tony is a mama's boy, waiting for the author to praise our little Tony as a smart and good baby

Is Tony's group's fighting strength a little too overwhelming? This article about the Statue of Liberty gave me a headache. The protagonist group, holding the four talismans of rat, horse, rabbit and chicken, was beaten by Gan Wentui and Bai Jue? Is this because Loki is obviously an actor, but if he is the Holy Lord, he cannot be killed on the spot? Author, don't you think it's outrageous? From the beginning to the present, the Holy Master chapter has been emphasizing the quality of the talisman, but when the talisman is on the Avengers, it is like a mission prop for killing monsters, highlighting a buyer's show. The rabbit charm was given to Micah to kick him at the speed of light, and Arthur was almost kicked to death. When it was in the hands of Tony and Thor, the speed of light was defeated 🤔 The chicken charm was the first to get it, but your arrangement was to save fuel for Tony 🤔 First of all, the Chicken Talisman is really not for you to use as a bamboo dragonfly. Its actual function is telekinesis. The Chicken Talisman allows you to apply any vector and any size of force at any point in space. The action time and the size of the effect vary from person to person. The upper limit is the Holy Lord himself. What kind of performance should this ability give Tony, who has the highest IQ in Marvel? It's too detailed and brain-burning to write, so it's just a matter of recreating a wave of Lao Wan's famous scenes. And the basic abilities of the Samsara Eye, Shinra Tianzheng and Wanxiang Tianyin, are not ready-made templates 🤔. The chicken talisman in the original work can be played well, not to mention that this is an enhanced high-end version Just take a step back, with the chicken and rabbit dual talisman in hand, if you give it to Peter or Thor, won't even Jackie Chan Tohru kill them randomly? This Flying Thunder God with zero consumption, zero CD, and no need for coordinates is not the plot that kills you because of the Bull Talisman. Not to mention the speed pass dungeon, anyone in Avengers Alliance can handle it with ease Since you are going to write this dungeon of the Holy Master, why not polish it well? There are so many bugs in the spells, and the combination is even more troublesome. Anyway, there is still black magic that has not appeared, the Hokage has been sewn in, and the eight demons themselves. The main perspective is given to the Avengers and the gang. There are a lot of bosses waiting to be beaten, so there is no need to worry. The combat power has collapsed, so we have to write down some highlight moments. Every time we are in a desperate situation, we rely on Xiaoyu 🤔 The Avengers are not the Earth Defense Force. They go up to deliver the monsters after killing monsters. After delivering the monsters, they wait for the invincible Xiaoyu. After they become the atmosphere team, they go back to drink the celebratory wine? I am not saying that this book is not good-looking. You are really a rare behind-the-scenes masterpiece. I just hope you can write better. My long-term prostitution leopard head is also ordered from beginning to end. If you write better, more people will be willing to pay for it.

It's almost up to date. My question is, you're writing for Marvel. Why did you change your style and start writing fantasy halfway through? The big incident of Aizen at the beginning is quite interesting, but when it leads to the fairy world later, I don't know what it means.

The arrangement of character activities can be out of the ordinary, but it should not be too abrupt. Natasha's entry into the Earthly Immortal Realm and her apprenticeship with Dugu Qiufei was a bit of a failure. Since I have always mentioned how arrogant the Earthly Immortal Realm is, how could a "barbarian" take the mantle so easily? Moreover, the style of painting is too abrupt. The combination of multiverses, whether it is the Armored Warrior linking up with Captain America, or Zhao Li The linkage between , Stark and Constantine is possible, because their own power growth systems are still within their own logic (Captain America and Xing Tian do not have much conflict in style because the growth system of the Armored Warrior is relatively vague and has not formed a complete, systematic logic with a lot of room for maneuver), while Natasha seems abrupt and has a different style of painting.

6 Ah, the armored warriors of Lucifer the Great have all done it! We are looking forward to the follow-up more and more. It would be more interesting if characters we could not imagine appear!

It's even, with very few shortcomings, except that the villain created by the protagonist is a bit too strong, and it doesn't feel evenly matched. Others are really good, not a little or two better than the one next door. ps. The elements of Marvel become less and less as we go to the end. It's just a few people from the Avengers who come and go, and they keep adding fictional characters, but not many Marvel characters. Moreover, the author does not have enough understanding of the entire Marvel series. Marvel's power is only in the movie world. And the plot of the fictional Earth Immortal World is getting more and more complicated, and the settings are constantly being thrown away. The forces of the Earth Immortal World appear all the time, the Avengers are shocked, NPC: Wow, natural disasters, similar plots. Furthermore, the characters in the Earthly Immortal World are basically the characters of Jin Yong Gu Long, and their combat power has been raised to the level of martial arts. They are all on an equal footing with the characters in Fengyun, and even beat them 😅, speechless.

Emmm can only say that there is too little Marvel content, whether it is villains or superhero teams. The author exalts the mystery of the East, that is, the world of earth and immortality, which is cool, but you don't want to do it simply. If you are high on the top, just be high on the top. Just arrange the corresponding opponent as a background board. It's okay to show off occasionally. Now that your superhero team has completely become clowns, does Marvel really have nothing to write about? Eternals, Vampires, Hydra, Mutants, Inhumans, Nine Realms, Galactus, Symbiote, Time Administration, Ultron. As a reader, it is really difficult for me to locate this novel. Is it a Marvel fan? As a result, the superhero went to seek immortality. Fantasy novel? This is even more nonsense. This book is really good. The characters of Chaoying are restored very well. The collision between the visitors from another world and the Marvel characters is not too awkward to read and the stitching is very good. But the author still wants to write everything about superheroes and super villains in the Marvel world. The collision of various systems is the most exciting. Let them learn mental skills, sword skills, and immortality. Then I can't see Xianxia?

The system is too messy. The author writes whatever he dreams of. Sooner or later it will collapse and the eunuch will run away.

There is no need to subscribe. It's the same as what AI wrote. Che Zhuluan said back and forth that the water is so bad that he desperately tries to pull up Dongfang and belittle everything that is not Dongfang. Ordinary food and grass should be free.

It's a group portrait, but Tony is the protagonist. Basically everything revolves around Tony.

In the early stage of the classic, the settings are directly stuffed into the readers' mouths. A big black Buddha mother Aizen is purely self-orgasmic. No events are mentioned just to expand the world view. It is better to write the first one from Jackie Chan's Adventures and slowly introduce the settings you want to add from the identity of the father.

My suggestion is not to lose control, even if it is written in a way similar to Xuanjian's feeling that everything is under control (just an analogy, without in-depth discussion of Xuanjian), write the protagonist's character as an unobservable and unknowable existence. Some readers of the subject of the mastermind behind the scenes come to pursue a sense of satisfaction, and you must be worthy of your core identity as the mastermind. If the character you create is out of control, and make the protagonist feel If you are troubled, it will appear to be cheap and have a very bad impression, because the protagonist must eventually have a status of a creator god. Even if the goal is achieved, this kind of cheap behavior will destroy the sense of mystery and superiority. Moreover, after the created character turns into reality and cannot be controlled, even if you have a history book, but because you cannot control it, and then use the points obtained to try to arrange the script for third-party influence, I always feel that this is not good. Let readers find an anchor point in the book, which is the so-called sense of substitution, which is also very important in itself. A better example is Yinsai in "I Am God" (without discussing the end), who is also invisible most of the time. I have read this type of book before, and it was written by the author 2 Jin of Rice. It is a pity that the eunuch always changes his number. Now I have found this book again. The author writes well, and I hope to continue to break through myself. I wish the author better and better. The above is not a request nor a criticism, just a few suggestions. It is an honor to encounter this book by chance. Wang Haihan

The last few good posts have been about the ancient Odin's transformation into Buddhism. I can't finish the two posts, but I've been dragging them forward to the Temple of War.

In the early stage of the Earthly Immortal Realm, they boasted too high and too high, boasted too much and were too awesome. No matter what, they could be said to be invincible in the universe and the only one who dominates. Especially the issue of attitude, which has always been condescending, giving people a bad impression, and then there is the issue of combat power. This and that one has always boasted that they are awesome, but in fact they have no performance. They only came out recently, but when they made a move, there were only three or two big cats. It gave people the impression that they were not very awesome. Why did they behave like this 😐 Disappointed, their enthusiasm was gradually being consumed, and their demonic energy was really a failure.

Okay, the protagonist has to start playing the game by himself again 😅 It's really impossible to escape behind the scenes, but at least this book doesn't use the protagonist's true identity to pretend to be a slap in the face.

The Mafia was suppressed too hard. In another Marvel Players book, Valon hung Iron Man up and whipped him. Bo Gang even swallowed a few missiles and destroyed half of New York. In the end, it was just a formality. The author's writing skills are good, but there is no need to be too licky with Avengers. It would only look good if both camps had wins and losses.

Your hodgepodge is too easy to write. Since it is an American comic, then add American comic characters into it and create a lot of characters with different styles, just like adding strawberries to Mapo tofu.

Chapter 296 makes it clear that Kaguya possesses the reincarnation eye and will use it to fight in the future. How come there is no reincarnation eye later and it needs to absorb the Byakugan to evolve?

Classic Mastermind gets involved with Peter Parker

It's getting more and more watery, and the pig's feet simply don't appear anymore. The Avengers directly changed into pig's feet. They let you behind the scenes, but they didn't let you disappear the pig's feet? If you don't have the strength to write a group portrait, then don't write it. Everyone in the Avengers has changed their personality. In addition to the Avengers not being established at the beginning, let the villains win, and then just let the Avengers win without any brain. The author should go to work in an electronics factory. There are so many people complaining and suggesting in the comment area. The author doesn't read it at all. It's a waste of my money. Author, please continue to enjoy yourself, I won't accompany you.

The writing is pretty good, but I feel like the author doesn't know much about American comic settings. Although Marvel's Hell status is not as high as DC's Lucifer-ruled Hell, it does seem to scorn Soul Ferry and Death. If you want to promote Eastern themes, you must at least have some basis for it.

Strengthen the extraordinary power of the West. A big fight, not to mention evenly matched, at least has to come and go to be interesting. Pure random killings are not fun to last.

Marvel has the Jade Emperor... There are gods! Are you afraid of people actually coming to your door when you open a vest?

Every time there is loud thunder but little rain, no one dares to write an original character to death. Fans are most taboo about this.

Someone posted that the author did not dare to write the original characters to death. Please don't be affected by those idiotic comments. When you watch a fan, you only see the interaction between the characters. If you write them to death, why should you read them?

Don't be a eunuch. If you maintain this level, I will definitely order all of them.

There is going to be a big power from the West, and it won't work if the East blindly crushes the West.

It's pretty good, but I feel like I've read a lot before, but that's the eunuch.

As the title says, the last time I saw a similar theme, it was a book called Invasion of Eastern Dimensions. Unfortunately, the book is no longer available. It seems to be due to the epidemic.

To be honest, the whole later part is a bit boring, not as good as the beginning 😥