A Speedrunner's Guide to the Abyss

Some time later, Zhou Qiming received a courier. After opening it, there was nothing else inside, just a VCD disc and a note with a string of URLs written on it.

The disadvantage is that it feels too wordy, and the protagonist has logical flaws in what he does, and the plot is a bit speechless. (I'll talk about it later) The advantage is that the writing is actually pretty good. If you can tolerate the verbosity, it's actually okay and you can read it. If you look at it without thinking, you can actually count it as waiting for food Spoiler area: You know you can get things in reality, and gold can be exchanged for money in the game, why not get it from It's okay to try to get gold in reality (the protagonist says he has no money, but he can make money just by selling a car, and didn't his sister keep 3kw? The protagonist even said he was very poor when posting a bounty on the forum) and the protagonist knows that reality is extraordinary, but still thinks it is just a game? Normally, shouldn't I invest everything (it's too expensive to buy some Yuan coins, you have tens of millions of money, everyone who plays games knows the importance of early advantage) and in the end I made a potato goulash and sent it over. I had no choice but to gamble my life, wasn't it? I wanted to scare others with something good. Can't you get some guns from reality? (Go to a beautiful country, it's easy to buy a gun with tens of millions of cash). Even if you can't get it or use it, you should write about trying it instead of having nothing. That's all for the time being, and it's mainly a bit long-winded. I hope the author can consider it if he sees it.

There were so many rambling words. In Chapter 18, the protagonist wanted to get something to eat from the real world and went back and forth several times - why he didn't take it before, why he wanted to take it now, what impact eating it would have on him, whether NPCs can be trusted, and a detailed analysis based on the specific situation of Xiao Jian's experience... Finally he took out a can of potato stew. I usually listen while cooking, but my hearing is really exhausted and I have no strength in my cooking hands.

The difference between the title and the content is a bit big. I thought it was a quick article from Zhutian, but it turned out that the pace of this thing was too slow!

I have read Chapter 95. It is currently a two-dimensional version of a novel with a semi-dark world view. I have changed the synopsis. The synopsis used to be like a god man playing openly and openly in the abyss to shake the world. Now combined with the main text, it looks more like a behind-the-scenes flow. The writing is good, but it is particularly young and focused on the two-dimensional atmosphere. The current feeling is a behind-the-scenes flow + solitary approach, because there are millions of players on the planet Except for the protagonist, we don't have any outstanding players. It can be considered that all players have intellectual disabilities. Only the protagonist can successfully develop various skills, which is a bit petty. I am not very interested in the behind-the-scenes flow and do my own thing. I prefer the unabashed pretentiousness of the original introduction. If you like this type, you can watch it;

I don't understand what the protagonist is doing recently. There are only one sentence of useful information in so many chapters: My sister is the White King. I don't know what the rest of it has to do with the six words in the title of the book.

Come on, big brother who is typing on the keyboard.

I don't know how to write book reviews. I just think that the book is quite good so far. It is a fairy grass and worth collecting by everyone.

I came here from Zhihu and was moved to tears when I saw the author's answer. I also wanted to write what I wanted to write, but it didn't fit the market. Come on, author, you are so awesome, you can persist for so long. I almost couldn't hold on to the first book, but after reading your answer, I gained the fighting spirit again. In my next book, I will also embrace the market and restrain myself. I will write what I like when I make money.

It's a bit naughty, the protagonist is too extreme, and his skull is burned. So in order not to show off my brain, I chose not to watch it. It's not that it's not good to watch, but the plot is rather slutty. I just need to rest my head by reading novels. This book is suitable for those who have nothing to do with their brains at work, so that they can exercise their brains.

It's pretty good and has a great sense of story. The disadvantage is that it is not attractive enough for novices, and the power system or the feeling of great power in one body is slow. Looking forward to more developments

How is this book written by my sister? I don't want to click in when I see my sister. Now that my sister appears at the beginning, this thing is no different from a poison point.

I really didn't pique my interest now, but I wanted to try it out. Where can I read the first book?

I just read the beginning of Chapter 21. To be honest, the story feels okay, but some plot jumps are too frequent and too detailed. For example, in the previous chapter, it is difficult for readers to get involved while cooking while thinking.

It's already one hundred chapters. I read the author's previous comment that if Mian Mian has to write twenty chapters, then it will be one hundred and twenty. Later, there will be integration of forces to start treatment, as well as the inevitable obstacles of cults, plus a little bit of daily life and other things. Will it be too long and appear bloated?

You can skip the first three chapters and start reading from the copy. It's a bit too coy. The copy is well written.

It's unreasonable, brother. It's a showdown at the beginning. If she doesn't explain which company, which boss, what kind of job, and why she was given so much, I won't let her go anyway.

I was bored and looking through old books. I clicked on Magic Punk to see if there were any serialized books. I saw that there were indeed some 🙂 It looks pretty good so far 😁

I just came from Zhihu, what a pity, my fellow Xia Dian

Personally, except for Chapter 1, the overall pace is very slow, which is due to the slow release of information. I feel that as the opening event, it has a huge impact on the reading experience. My personal suggestion is to streamline Chapters 2-3 into 1 chapter. Since it takes one and a half days for the real soul to be delivered to the protagonist, in Chapter 3, I will write about how the protagonist intensively browses the forum when the server opens on the hour. During this gap period, the protagonist can only watch others playing on the forum and posting early adopter posts. I think it is more valuable to write about it. It is through the various information released by the players who open up the game that the novelty and mystery of the game Abyss are raised, and strong expectations are created. It is similar to the feeling that when Black Monkey first came out, office workers had no time to play and could only browse the forum intensively to watch other people open up the game. At this time, it can actually be better. Shape the readers' expectations for the game; second, based on the collected information on land reclamation, let the protagonist make game plans in advance, such as which planet to choose, what plans to make, what attempts to make, etc., And write them in a slightly specific way. This can not only reduce the amount of information and length in subsequent chapters, stabilize the rhythm, but also create a sense that the protagonist is fully prepared in advance, and continue to raise expectations to a certain extent; third, it can also allow those players who have the channels and background to get the true soul at the first time to appear on the forum. This length may take 2 chapters, so start writing the content of entering the abyss in Chapter 5. Here, the content of the protagonist thinking about how to break the game is compressed, so that the protagonist can discover the bug that breaks the game as soon as possible, and then try to control the length within 8-9 chapters to increase the pace. The author writes very well, and the writing style is quite sophisticated. However, the opening content hardly gives the protagonist any interaction with the external real environment. It surrounds the protagonist too tightly and lacks a bit of life. Let's continue reading, hehe.

Is the author a virgin or a female author? The real-life interaction with that young lady is so awkward.

What happened to Zhihu? Can someone explain it 😭

There are a lot of people who keep books, but I don't even know if they are on the shelves.

Looking forward to it being put on the shelves. It must be updated immediately.

It's amazing, I feel like watching Gu Long's emotional line. I can watch it but it's very awkward. I just want to read the online article and enjoy it.