Magicpunk

Let me preface this by saying that my writing skills aren't very good, so I'll replace the positive aspects of this book with other content from the book. My opinion on this book is very well written, and in some aspects it can be compared to Jiangnan Piggy King's Dragon Raja (this is just my personal opinion, and I thought about it for several days before writing this review).

If they'd told me the sister was going to die, I wouldn't have watched it at all. The male lead struggles like a pathetic clown, betraying so many people's feelings for his sister. It made me think he'd want to die too if she died, since he kept saying he was willing to die for her. In the end, he became a walking corpse, and it seemed like his sister's death didn't really matter to him. I was so emotionally deficient!

Author, do you know what the most disgusting thing about Naruto Shippuden is? Have you realized you're doing something very similar?

As someone who's obsessed with older sisters, seeing the part about the protagonist's older sister being a prostitute broke my heart... Goodbye forever, I'll never read anything you write again.

Who do you think you are? Do you think you're an octopus? Do you think your outline's logic is enough to give your characters a closed-loop plot development? You're just an opportunist who knows how to evoke emotional fluctuations by tearing apart the reader's resonance. You don't really think you're so skilled that readers won't notice when you padded your writing, do you?

Tomorrow Never Comes... I'm not exaggerating when I first read Tomorrow Never Comes; it was absolutely amazing. It was so well-written, and it ended up being written as a romance novel... If I want to read romance novels, there's a romance novel channel. As for sci-fi novels, I really only want to read sci-fi. It's so frustrating. Such a good subject matter, such a good idea, and it was turned into a romance novel. What were you thinking, author?

Anyway, I forced myself to finish it despite the angst. I don't know how I, who usually enjoys light novels, managed to finish it. I've seen many people dislike this character or that character. Every character in the book has their own code of conduct, and that's how they should act. The author's character development is very successful; each character is portrayed in a distinct and nuanced way.

I can only say there's a reason it's not popular. If you have a penchant for literary and artistic pursuits, you could write a short story of 700,000 to 800,000 words. Stop writing such long novels; it tortures the readers and yourself.

It imitates the protagonist-torture style of novels like "Dragon Raja" and "Ever Night." The pacing is also quite slow; I was constantly on edge while reading. To be honest, I'm better suited to reading invincible, fast-paced novels. I'll come back to this book when I have more patience.

The transitions are clearly too forced. The first volume was so well-written, why add all this unnecessary embellishment? While I also really like Roman Holiday, this plot just doesn't suit your book. It suddenly makes the book feel much less sophisticated. It's a bit of a shame.