The Big Shot Behind the Scenes Is Actually Me

Hmmmm, I still want to complain... Author, you can imagine that with this introduction and the scene of slave trading at the beginning, my first reaction is that this is a medieval setting. Then the protagonist appears with a Chinese name. This is not the most important, the key lies behind. When the heroine said that she was from Liujiatun, I completely collapsed... It doesn't mean that you must translate the accent when writing a Western fantasy background, but you, the author, have to taste it yourself. You see a bearded knight and a lady in a linen gown walking in a crowded western town, and then the knight suddenly says, "What are you doing, girl?" Sister, let me say one more thing: I am from Liujiatundi, and I have come to the city to get medicine for my mother. This is like calling Constantinople Constantinople... In short, it is very funny.

If there is no pretentious plot, just wait for the street. After defeating two books in a row, there are very few readers who can remember you. The Riddler can have one, but that is only after having a certain emotional foundation for the characters in the book and having a more sense of involvement with the protagonist. The current situation is that there are too many riddles, and there is no emotion for the characters, just like a rough outline, without a sense of reality. I am not happy for the time being. To put it simply, there is nothing to see and a lack of expectation. Can we make some pleasant plot first? Just a little bit of foreshadowing will be enough, and part of the world view and settings will be released first. No matter how behind-the-scenes, the protagonist must have more presence, otherwise who would I bring in? Narrator? Can the Riddler and Wen Jing be left for later? No matter what, we have to set a small goal. Let's go to Sanjiang first. Your way of writing has no future!

Stop being aggressive, and stop engaging in literary youth.

In 2023, Qiu Ming still hasn't updated

This book was actually written by Brother Wen Qing. I didn't realize it at first and just read it. I thought about the book about the Celestial Dragon Assassin engaging in heavy firepower vs. Cold weapons a long time ago. It was the most abstract author I have ever seen. This book is still the same. I have not forgotten my original intention.

So interesting. This is the first time I have seen such an incompatible and divisive book. When I first read it, I thought it was a female comic book. After reading a few chapters, I felt something was wrong. Then I looked at the introduction and discovered that the man was the protagonist. The protagonist is a male, but the perspective is always given to a woman, and what the heroine sees and feels, including her psychological activities, is frequently expressed in words. Where is the protagonist? It's just a face, without any mental activity. Can this still be said to be a male blog? ? Secondly, the names of places, currencies, etc. Are all very Westernized words. At first I thought it was a novel background such as the Western Middle Ages, but I found out that it was an ancient text... I took it directly to the ditch. It's hard to put it into words.

I still feel that the author is suitable for writing martial arts or metaverse type martial arts.

I'll go, brother, nothing will happen to you, right?

I don't know why, I just want to knock Su Liu's CP, ah ah ah

The Riddler started out as a story about rescuing slaves, but it turned out not to be a traditional behind-the-scenes story, and it had nothing to do with the behind-the-scenes story. It all relied on the readers' own guesses. The reality was tiring, and the novel turned out to be even more infuriating! I wrote a bunch of characters without any clue, all relying on guesswork! ! ! ! ! !