I Built a Safe Zone in the Nightmare World

Repeatedly questioned and shocked, really fragrant and pretentious. I was completely fooled by the few fight scenes before it was released.

Do you want the safe zone to become a safe zone for all mankind? Just rely on inserting wards to light up the map bit by bit? The setting is too small... The big store manager personally presides over everything when needed, so it won't be such a big nightmare world. Just lighting up the map of the main areas of human activity probably won't be completed in a few years 😂 Generally speaking, the book has been okay in the early stage... But now it feels average... It's too cliche + I don't know what the author wants to focus on, the platform of the safe zone or the protagonist? How many elites have been destroyed in the world, and now humans are also going to be destroyed. There are only two or three kittens and puppies relying on the safe zone... (Of course, if the setting collapses and suddenly the extraordinary world becomes as numerous as dogs, there will be nothing to say... It was so difficult to describe the extraordinary in the early stage. I think the levels will not be easy in the future, right?) Anyway, this book was highly recommended in the early stage... Now it is just average...

It feels like there is really no need to go behind the scenes. After all, you are alone. Building the safe zone into a platform feels like the best choice. One person's power is limited after all. The platform allows for communication, trading, rest, treatment, production and creation, strategy knowledge exchange and sharing, etc. The safe zone can exist in many dreams at the same time, opening up different areas. People in different dreams can also help other people to strategy. People from other dreams may not be able to enter, but providing other logistical help can better help break through the dream. As the saying goes, a power is limited. Building a platform can allow dreamers to communicate with each other, strengthen themselves faster, and break through more dreams. Only in this way can the invasion of dreams be delayed, more masters can be trained faster to conquer more dreams, and the protagonist can grow faster, and the safe zone can be bigger, stronger, and have more functions. In one sentence, it benefits oneself and others.

First, the sense of oppression is gone in the early stage. In the beginning, the fog, weirdness, and even the bloody hands gave people a good sense of oppression. The safe zone effectively created a buffer zone for the protagonist. This tension → safety pull was the key point that attracted me to continue reading. Later, the safe zone became too safe 😆, resulting in almost no sense of tension, and the author is not very patient in writing about the psychology of small group adventures. In the end, it gave me the feeling of following the outline and setting up a river cruise. In fact, when we get to the next level, the safe area should not retain the modern style. It should be changed into a campfire save point like Hidetaka Miyazaki. There is also a limit on the number of people. Although it is safe, it will not be out of tune with the environment as a whole and retain the sense of adventure. Second, there is a lack of opponents who can grow together. Opponents that grow together, no matter whether the opponent is a person or a force, will give readers a sense of urgency, and the level of the opponent will also give readers a different latitude experience. For example, if you just enter the next level and see the giant beast, you can tell after a while through the narration of others or members that you are closer to Baicheng and what strange situations are happening around the giant beast. In this way, readers will understand that there is likely to be a war between the safe zone and Baicheng; It is a trick, but in fact the whole city is controlled by a certain ghost, but this information is only known by the protagonist through a plug-in. Others only think that the city is developing well, and they are planning to communicate with the main city to let other satellite cities develop together. This kind of overt information can be circulated among members, and the secret information is released through the mission panel without lowering the protagonist's strength, allowing members to guess the truth. Finally, several cities visited the main city of Guangzhou, uncovered the conspiracy of the satellite city, and then started a war. This side description should highlight the development and choices of hostile forces, as well as the attitude of the strong in the middle and late stages towards the settings behind the safe zone, and fill out the article with cool points such as "revealing the settings and world view", "giving a sense of oppression", and "comparing the living conditions of people in the two places".

The author has developed path dependence. From the middle stage, he has been repeating the process of safety period from shock to joining in different groups. Constantly changing maps, new NPCs, not believing in safe zones, being shocked, joining and then repeating it all the time. It is boring. Basically, he is shocked twice a week, and each time he is shocked for three days.

The following routine can basically be judged. When encountering a new force, the new force is shocked, and then the lord is attacked to get the coordinates. First, a few store employees kill the lord, and the members are shocked. Then the members kill the lord, and the other forces are shocked. Finally, when the store manager who cannot handle it appears in front of him, everyone is shocked. During this period, some items and buildings were launched, and once again members were shocked and became tired of the same routine. Nevermind the nightmare forces, the intelligence system of the official forces is Akaashi's. There is no basic intelligence collection, not to mention that the entry conditions for the intelligence acquisition locations are not harsh (for the official). Secondly, there are the arrogant forces. If I have to be shocked, the subsequent content is no longer worth paying for. It is a cycle of Grandma Liu entering the Grand View Garden with inflated values.

The writing is quite good, but there is one biggest bug. The city has become an island. Where does the rice, flour and food come from? Where do beef, lamb and pork come from? Where does seafood come from? As long as it is not a major agricultural and breeding province, these things will need to be transported from other cities. Excluding these necessities for survival, there are also petroleum, gasoline, coal, iron, etc., And even electricity and water. Storing supplies for more than a year will definitely not last that long. Even if you have cognitive impairment, you can't go without eating, drinking, or traveling. What should we do with those logistics companies and trans-provincial multinational companies? Their employees have nothing to do every day, and the company has no accounts. Can't they find out that they are raising these people for nothing?

The writing is good, and now it is accumulation. The longer the time, the slower the nightmare invades reality, and the snowball rolls and gathers momentum. After a few thousand people, the safe zone becomes a safe city, and everyone can reverse invade the nightmare and expand the territory. Nightmare, I look at it like a chicken wag. Of course, if there is no safe zone, the nightmare uncle will be gentler and love me 😭😭😭

Many readers may be a little confused in the free chapter. For example, why didn't the official go directly to the safe zone? Why is there always only Baijiang City and not the whole country or the world? I saw a lot of comments about this, and this is also the fault of the author. After it was put on the shelves, it came back around, and it seems to be around 91, which directly raised the world view to a new level. The shortcoming of the author of this book is that his writing power is a bit weak. Every time he writes about the world view, he loses control a little bit in the later stages, and it seems anticlimactic. And although this book has a weird background, it is more like a part of the power system, and the writing style is not that weird, so readers who pursue the weird flow will most likely not understand it. The advantage of the author is that he is very good at the subject of power development and management. He is considered to be one of the few masters of the Qidian genre. Other authors like to turn it into a road adventure and travel alone even if their power or territory is half developed. But this author is better at pure business, and the writing is also very enjoyable. However, this book did not light up at the end of the free chapter, which feels like a shortcoming. The last advantage of the author is that the author's world view is that mankind is in a time of doomsday and chaos, but the writing style is relatively relaxed and not so heavy. Human beings have infighting and traitors, but the author has always focused the main content on the concept of community and advocates cooperation. He is also one of the few authors who can balance the relationship between the official, the personal, and the official.

He said he wanted to play behind-the-scenes, but he has been on the front line. The behind-the-scenes flow is to portray group portraits. After reading half of the free chapter, I memorized the bloody handprint. The rest are all templates of reckless men, which is boring.

Ever since Tiannan City was lifted, I lost the spontaneity of my original article and started to indulge in pretense, all kinds of pretense, and then trade and arrange observation teams with each other. Any help? The protagonist is promoted throughout the whole process by relying on guilds. If you say you trade a few more flowers to make spiritual potions, I am pushing the main line. But what is the protagonist doing? After trading for half a day, there is no improvement. Recently, there is a lot of nonsense that the level does not change, the experience does not change, and the recent gains from conquering nightmares are not mentioned. There is no end to Tiannan City.

Where did their food come from after Baijiang City fell into a nightmare? I remember that there seemed to be more than 3 million people in Baijiang City. It is impossible to produce and sell by oneself. Food cannot fall from the sky.

The safe zone has started to charge, but the price is a bit high. First of all, the "entry fee" is 100 dream dust (if there are no people who come, will they not be saved?). I feel that in the early stage of operation, when the customer base is not large, it is not particularly wise to raise the entry threshold instead of lowering the entry threshold. The original intention of the protagonist operating the safe zone is not to earn a lot of money, nor to become a big capital of Monopoly, but to create a safe zone for those who conquer the nightmare to rest, and a platform that can trust each other for transactions. Now not only does the appraisal charge, but the cost of purifying spring water has increased 10 times, and the recycling price has to be discounted by 30%. This is not like a neutral and kind-hearted platform, but more like a protected area that relies on its monopoly position and is like a gold-eating beast. I cannot speak for all readers, only for myself. What I hope to see is that the protagonist can always maintain a high standard. Firstly, he should not lose his vest. Secondly, the goal should be to create a vast safe zone to protect all living beings, rather than being a "city lord" who knocks bones and sucks marrow. Secondly, I suggest that the safe zone, as a neutral unit, should not take the initiative to intervene in transactions, maintain a consignment service and charge handling fees, and later open an auction house to charge handling fees. Isn't it better than receiving the goods at a low price and selling them at a high price? Isn't it higher?

The subject matter is acceptable, but the author is not, and it is judged to be unsightly 🙂

Is there any point in concealing the true strength of others except the protagonist? It's strange to see someone who hides his strength and enters the countermeasures bureau just like the protagonist. Nightmare will not reduce the difficulty just because you hide your strength. What's the use of hiding it? The protagonist has a complicated identity. What is his reason? The right answer is to directly show your strength and receive more cultivation and attention to better improve your strength.

The paragraphs are too fragmented. Moreover, words spoken by the same person within the same sequence should not be divided into two paragraphs. Zhang San said: Be careful, there is a car. Run! This is very grammatical. But what if it is like this: "Be careful, there is a car" "Run!" It is easy for readers to mistakenly think that this is two people talking.

I really can't stand it anymore. Every time I come into contact with a new force, I have to do it once, twice, n times. You are good at it.

I basically use AI... One of the biggest features of AI is that it cannot accurately write the economic system.

Before there was a safe zone, I felt that Blue Star Human City could survive for more than ten years. After the safe zone was established, crises hit one after another, and within a few months, the danger of annihilation appeared and everything was finished.

The creativity is good, but it's watery, the routines are extremely cliche, and the writing is poor, so be careful before entering. But if three problems can improve one, the book will not be unreadable.

Let's talk about this book in a nutshell: upgrading, opening a map, strangers hearing about the safe zone, entering, being shocked, repeating the cycle, and ending.

Looks good! It's just too little, so I read it all in one go. It is suggested that the protagonist can pretend to be a boss like the Fool in Lord of Mysteries, and use membership cards to gather explosive troops, taking advantage of the previous book and giving full play to the author's comfort zone.

The writing is so embarrassing that I can't stand it 🔨

When Chinese people are villains, they don't talk nonsense. When it's foreigners' turn to be villains, they immediately jump out to show their loyalty. Is the devil your father? What about the diversity of species? It's all over the place.

I would like to ask the author if he has made any progress in his subsequent writing? If it's still as rubbish as the first ten chapters, then there's no need to read it.

1. Around Chapter 170, there is no toll, but I remember it was 100/time at first 2. In Chapter 178, the thief, I remember that the safe zone has an expulsion function. Wouldn't it be nice to expel the thief? And entering the safe zone requires an audit. If you don't pass the initial approval, it will be fine. To sum up, there is a reason that the AI ​​lost its memory when writing the article, causing the problem.

I'm still wandering around the free chapter, but I really can't help but say: This book is too long-winded. The author is really good at word count, and he can't stop writing when he encounters something new. For example, when I entered the campus and met a junior sister, I counted 4 pages and was immediately hooked. There is another thing that I particularly cannot tolerate, and that is a lot of word-count content interspersed between character dialogues. It's obviously a coherent dialogue, but the way the author handles it in many places is: a character says one sentence, and then it's lost for two pages, and then another character says another sentence, and then it's lost for two pages. I really can't stand it. As long as your character's dialogue is over, I can accept it. Just turn a few more pages. But it happens in the middle of the dialogue. I'm worried about missing important information, which makes me very unhappy.

The author should come back and write in the mainstream. If someone copies your book, the results will be better than yours.

It wasn't that obvious when it came to the American prototype before, and it was still passable, but this time I can't stand it I will wait and see for a while

After reading for a long time, especially after the Tiannan City alien business group appeared, I turned back to the previous plot and found many seemingly inconspicuous details. If put together, it seems that a set of underlying settings that are different from the surface story can be deduced. This is just my personal guess and may not be the author's original intention. I will discuss it with everyone here. The first is about the origin of the nightmare world itself. We tacitly agree that this is the spiritual realm formed by the collective subconsciousness of mankind, but we can feel a sense of dissonance in several conversations with alien business groups. This group of aliens wandering around in various areas would never use the term "nightmare" to describe this space. Instead, they used terms such as cracks and mezzanines. The special materials such as crack stabilizers and boundary components taken out during transactions did not seem to be something that could be produced by mental illusions. People from the business group occasionally mentioned that an unstable channel opened a long time ago, which resulted in today's layers of fog barriers and tidal disasters. I am wondering if there is a possibility that this area is not a naturally born plane of consciousness, but a passage mezzanine formed after an accidental opening of the door to another world. Human beings are only pulled into it in the form of dreams due to the influence of overflowing spirits. The layers of barriers are more like protective structures built by later generations to seal the cracks. This is just a personal conjecture based on fragmentary lines, and there is no clear confirmation of the original text. The second is the origin of the Countermeasures Bureau. I always feel that it appeared just right. Very early in the chapter, the senior management retains a set of old files recording the logic of the construction of the shelter. The content is highly overlapped with the protagonist's safe zone system. However, the source of the files has always been unclear, and no corresponding real-life research project can be found. There are also many highly targeted collection tasks that require the search for various special seed fragments, and these materials are only refreshed in a certain area and cannot be found in other places. According to the normal resource distribution logic, even if rare materials are scarce, there will be multiple refresh points. It seems very deliberate to lock in one place. I privately speculated that these task lists and ancient files were not independently explored by the Countermeasures Bureau, but were information circulated from a certain future timeline. This agency was more like a pusher arranged in advance, guiding the protagonist step by step to collect the corresponding core fragments. Another thing that makes me feel a little abnormal is the various architectural drawings dropped after clearing the nightmare. The basic functions that the protagonist comes with at the beginning are very rudimentary, but the blueprints such as purification workshops and alchemy facilities obtained through subsequent dungeon settlements are generally better than the initial configuration. They can always make up for various problems encountered at the current stage. If protection is lacking, defensive buildings will be built, and if material processing methods are lacking, the corresponding workshops will be unlocked. If you rely on trial and error in actual combat and slowly improve the design, it will take a long time, but in the plot, you can often get a mature and complete plan in one copy. I wonder if these drawings are not native trophies inside the nightmare, but design plans that have been pre-embedded in advance and delivered to the protagonist in the form of rewards, eliminating the need for independent research and development. They are just packaged as gains from customs clearance and will not break the rules and balance of the world itself. Following these clues, perhaps the source of the safe zone's own abilities is not as simple as it seems. The protagonist's golden finger comes suddenly, and there is no reasonable pre-paving for the system or initial space. Combined with the details of the seed fragments and retrospective files mentioned above, there is a bold guess: whether the safe zone system that will be formed in the future will be dismantled into countless scattered fragments, drawings, and materials, and put back to the early stage of the story in various secret ways, slowly piecing together the protagonist's abilities. In this way, a very interesting causal relationship can be formed: the opening of the passage brings disaster, the protagonist relies on the scattered fragments to build a safe zone, and after stabilizing the rift in the future, the entire system is sent back to the past to facilitate everything in the beginning. There is no clear starting point, they are cause and effect, and it is a very typical closed-loop setting. Of course, these are just inferences I made up after reading various details. The author most likely just laid some foreshadowings and may not write this line completely. Overall, the main lines of this book, including infrastructure construction, level entry, and transactions, are very comfortable to write and the rhythm is smooth. It's just the subtle hints in the details that make people think more. I wonder if any book friends have similar feelings to me. Everyone is welcome to share their opinions.