The Heavens: A Grand Collision of Fantasy Worlds

The protagonist is too strong, there are no difficulties, and the main plot is too scattered.

To be honest, within Duntie, the biggest problems are still Dun and Bucky. Dun and Tie have no problem with each other's ideas, but Dun concealed the fact that Bucky killed Tony's parents from Tie, and Dun had his own selfish motives. This kind of selfishness is understandable, but it is wrong. The most disgusting thing about Shields in this matter is that he did not even apologize to Tony after being exposed, but chose to let Bucky run away. It can be said that a series of wrong decisions by Shield himself led to the Battle of Shield and Iron. Bucky's problem is also his own inner conflict. On the one hand, he said [I remember them all] and wanted to die, but on the other hand, he ran without hesitation when the shield called him to run. The biggest problem is that even if he did this unintentionally, there is no problem in apologizing to Tony, but while he was conflicted and internally conflicted, he forgot the most important apology. If nothing else, Bucky was Shield's friend and knew Howard. Tony also knew that he was brainwashed. He would definitely beat him up, but he would definitely not kill him.

The writing of Under One Man + Harry Potter is terrible. I have also made a suggestion. It is up to the author to decide whether to adopt it or not. I hope the book sells well.

Having said that, after reading this book, I felt that it was not very good. There are two main reasons. The first is that this book is very confusing. The author seems to have no main line at all, or in other words, he always forgets the main line. The whole book is full of the feeling of writing whatever comes to mind. Although the protagonist is the mastermind behind the scenes, is it too confusing? This is why the protagonist of this book disappears and appears, the man behind the scenes for a while, and then jumps out again. It's not very pleasing to both sides. To be honest, it's not very satisfying to watch.

The author's conflicting views on Civil War and Iron Man and Captain America are really disgusting.

Jackie Chan Adventures also has an official comic

In this kind of fusion novel, either the protagonist is strong enough and all changes are attributed to the influence of the protagonist, or the protagonist is secretive enough and all the stories are just promoters or vests, otherwise it will look like a crappy writer tinkering.

It feels like there's no main plot, which makes it uncomfortable to watch.

I really feel that the author could use some further education. You must write something that can be done by one person. But what others write is not controversial. When it is your turn to write, everyone is arguing, so you have to think about it. Your subject matter is actually the poorly written variety comics. If you put various works together, the plot will be roughly the same as the original work. It is better to read the original work. I won't talk about other old-style comprehensive comics. Take "Stop Destroying the World View" by Zhai Nan, a new book guide with the same theme as yours, as an example. I also wrote Under One Man, Marvel, and The Adventures of Jackie Chan. I won't talk about subjective feelings, but only about objective results. The results of the other party's book are definitely better than yours, and the book reviews are not as controversial as your book reviews. For your own good, study carefully how others write. And in terms of plot alone, the small world needs to be easy to try. The most common variety comics that are easy to watch are definitely those youth romance dramas. And there's heat. Why don't you find a reason to write a variety show that incorporates youth love stories like 100 Girlfriends?, Wits stories like Light Yagami, Lelouch, Bungou Stray Dogs, bands like The Last Band, etc., And horror stories like The Girl Who Can See, Psychic 100%, The Daredevils, Junji Ito Universe, and Trevor Henderson Universe? How can we increase the reader retention rate without taking advantage of today's hot spots such as Dragon Restaurant, skin grafting, etc. The Internet speed is not fast. Here are the instructions for stacking armor Of course the pen is in your hand, I just don't want the story to end like this. If you can listen, just listen. If you can't, you will be punished. If it's useful, use it as a reference. If you think what I'm saying is wrong, just treat it like I'm farting. Don't argue, everything you say is right. It's not my book anyway. I am still quite interested in this subject. After all, everyone who comes to see this subject likes debate. Like Kanshijie and P Club comparing each other's moral limits

The latest chapter feels a bit like that, even though I know there is the yin and yang balance mechanism of Jackie Chan's Adventures. Forget it, I wish the author to finish the novel. Landscapes meet each other.