Starting with Contract Spirits

It's so hard to come up with a name, my hair is falling out, and the author is crowdfunding to write a book~ We are now recruiting all kinds of elves. It must have a name, attributes, and evolution type, preferably simple and easy to understand. (PS: It is difficult to appear in the early stage if it is too strong) What other supporting roles, introduction, detailed attributes, feel free to do so. Attributes include: metal, wood, water, fire, earth, wind, ice and thunder, light and darkness, illusion, poisonous ghost... As well as attributes not discovered by the alliance and so on.

The author should build a fan group. Then he can hold activities during festivals and be informed in it. {"NickName":"Ink Finger Key","UserId":312859723}Please🤭

Nowadays, this kind of time-traveling or gold-finger writing has a common problem, or it can be said that it is the same with all novice novels. It goes too far and makes other people look like trash. I don't see how hard the protagonist works, how much perseverance he has, or what kind of extreme environment he has experienced. We can't even see how smart the protagonist is. He somehow becomes invincible by cheating. He also keeps saying that he relies on hard work. In the early stage, this may be more suitable for the readers of Shuangwen, but in the later stage, the combat effectiveness will definitely collapse, and if it is always a pretense routine, no matter how much readers like it, they will be tired of it.

This book is quite interesting. It doesn't matter if there are a lot of Pokemon traces. After all, isn't it nice to have ready-made ones? But what is rare is that there is a lot of self-innovation. As long as you can maintain this, it is better to refer to Digimon and other pet streams. I hope you can continue to have your own ideas. Come on ＾0＾~🤓

This outrageous world structure cannot even be justified. There are Pokemon everywhere, and everyone has one Pokemon, so there are related industries. Trainers are the mainstream profession. It is even more outrageous. Everything can become a Pokemon, and then people have to spend tens of thousands of dollars to buy Pokemon? ? Can this still become mainstream? The state's subway construction only has a long payback period. Do you get any payback? The national medical insurance subsidy is tens of billions. What is the concept of at least hundreds of thousands per capita? Is this lab stage? Forget about military use, my Dongfeng is not worth more than this? Mass production, accurate, reliable, fast, ultra-long range. All things can become elves, aren't they more numerous than humans? It's outrageous to spend tens of thousands of dollars to buy elves that are more numerous than humans. With these tens of dollars of talent, you still have to pick the rest and pay the IQ tax? If I buy a Husky, the price of a fighter will not exceed several times the normal price, which is ridiculous.

I have also read your first book for free. Goodbye before I finish it. It's up to you to figure this book out for yourself Please give it a boost

The theme and setting of this book are very good. You don't have to stick to Pokemon. After all, this book is also very good! I hope the author will persevere and write a novel that can surpass Chong Mei

I just finished reading the last chapter. The author may be tired. At the end, it is obvious that a lot of progress has been completed. But it is undeniable that this is a masterpiece of native elf literature, and it can be regarded as half a fairy tale. Whether it is the original Silkworm Baby, Er Harin, Big Fat Bear, or the later Shy Yan, Die Xiaodie, and Dumb Crow, they are undoubtedly extremely successful characters. Even after reading for several months, you can clearly recall their personalities, preferences, and their unique charm. In comparison, Fu Fu Ai Ai and Xiao Cai may not be so outstanding, but they are still impressive. Personally, the image of the Vulcan Crow is the most outstanding part of the book, and even once overshadowed the protagonist of the book, Die Xiaodie. Perhaps we see something very similar to ourselves in the Dead Crow. He does not have a good background, nor does he have a good talent. All he can rely on is his own efforts and risking his life. Among a group of companions who can be said to be extremely talented, Xiaodie, with his mortal body and god-slaying body, can be said to be invincible in combat aside from Die Xiaodie. Just like the title of the last chapter, cutting open the legendary road with one sword, the stupid crow killed countless favored men with no "qualification", and even more, with no "qualification", he broke through the door of legend by himself without relying on the help of the protagonist. To be honest, I was shocked at that moment. In summary, elves are slow to develop, and become more exciting in the later stages. You can see a lot of them in Su Hao and his partners, some of which are funny, some of warmth, some of mutual encouragement, and some of family affection. The world described by the author made me yearn for it. Maybe the real world is cruel, but maybe the process of growing up is the most precious thing.

This book was okay in the early stage, but became very popular in the later stage. It has a lot of poisonous points. The protagonist is a freshman. He doesn't do research to save money, reads materials to gain intelligence value, and works hard to develop his own strength, but he messes around everywhere. He wastes his precious golden time on being a patrolman, a teacher and other chores. He thinks he is awesome, but he is a fool. College is the learning stage, and it is a critical period to concentrate on improving yourself. Once you graduate, it will be difficult for you to study with peace of mind. The protagonist built a laboratory and became a sheep herder. In reality, if someone behaves like this, they are basically useless.

The author is great, especially Silkworm himself has a soul and will find ways to make money for himself as a trainer. It is no longer the way of writing Pokémon fandom in the past where trainers constantly challenge and interact with the lives of Pokémon without a lot of Pokémon. The interaction is very cute, especially Gunuo's plus emojis. The picture is really awesome, but there are a few updates. I hope the author will update more... Gunuo ◎↖⇔↗◎