Doomsday Fortress: Starting by Upgrading a Heavy Truck

I flipped through a few chapters of the uploaded content, and it's basically all AI-generated content, so you can just scroll away.

It feels a bit too rushed, with no redundancy… 😜 The poison circle design isn't bad, but there still needs to be room for maintenance. And the convoys feel like a ragtag army, just randomly copying and pasting weapons and armor before going into battle; functionality is mainly about random abstraction… 😓

No wonder your book isn't doing well. You didn't even write the three golden chapters properly. The setting is too complicated and confusing. You should write about how you've just transmigrated to a strange world and accidentally stumbled upon a battle-damaged truck. In the early stages, you slowly uncover the truth of this world by scavenging.

This fog zone setting is insane! 60 Kilometers per hour, and that's fast! Don't you know what that means? 🙂 It means every single person you saved before will die.

Regarding the plot, I hope the author can consider adding some lighter, more relaxed transitional scenes between boss battles or large-scale combat sequences. After all, the entire escape process can't consist solely of fighting and monster-hunting.

This is ridiculous. With this level of technology, even a national-level defense system can't compete. What's the point of this system? It's utterly ridiculous.

A pile of shit, it has intelligence among its five attributes, but I've been keeping some of it unallocated, just praising it for fun, without adding any points.

The soldiers at the front fought valiantly, defending the lines to the death, with even generals dying and entire armies perishing. Meanwhile, in the rear, corrupt officials indulged in pleasure-seeking, and even wealthy families colluded to become rebels. I wonder what the higher-ups in the book were thinking, or how the author wrote it. They weren't all waiting for the protagonist to grow stronger so they would become his enemies, forcing the protagonist to eliminate them.

Why have there been so many missed updates lately? Not even a single explanation. Is this the prelude to abandoning the project?

When I first started reading online novels, I'd read anything I could find. After a few years, I started reading synopses and then choosing genres, gradually becoming a seasoned bookworm with higher standards. My criteria for selecting books now include the number of comments. Even if it's a bot, at least the author put in effort; they've thought about it.