Doomsday Fortress: Starting by Upgrading a Heavy Truck

The content on the shelves has been casually read through a few chapters, and it is basically out of the scope of AI, so you can just leave it.

It feels a bit like rushing a duck, and there is no redundancy... 😜 The poison circle design is not impossible, but it still needs room for preparation, and the fleet feels like a ragtag army. They just copy and paste weapons and armor and then go on stage. The functionality is mainly a random abstraction... 😓 At least the combat and logistics vehicles must be separated, and the people brought in must be used to some extent... Otherwise, what is the use of hanging population numbers? I have also read a book before about a convoy fighting various doomsdays and then catching up with space. In fact, I have long forgotten the content, but after reading this book, the ancient memory hit me again... 😅

On one aspect of the plot,. I hope the author can consider adding some more relaxed and leisurely transitional plots between boss fights or large-scale battles. After all, in the entire escape process, all the plots cannot be about fighting monsters. For example: During the resting period of the motorcade, you can arrange for the protagonist to eat barbecue and hot pot with the motorcade members, as if the doomsday has not yet come, and use relaxed laughter to drive away the darkness of the doomsday. The main reason is that I hope the author can add more elements of fighting, searching, and withdrawing. You must know that apocalyptic novels cannot lack various plots such as rat hoarding, free whoring, picking up leaks, and plundering. I hope that in the process of escaping, the protagonist can not only fight monsters and kill people, but also go to various locations to search for supplies and fill up the entire carriage of the convoy, which will be full of fun. The following are the necessary places that I recommend to search and explore: Hospital: Provide enough medical drugs and medical equipment to meet the resource requirements for building a small operating room. Large-scale automobile production factories and logistics repair stations: Provide a large number of vehicle parts, engines, crane repair tools, and a large number of intact finished automobiles to meet the protagonist's needs for decomposition. Large-scale agricultural products market: Provides a large number of agricultural production tools, chemical fertilizers, grain seeds and surviving live poultry, which can be used to establish a self-sufficient agricultural production base when upgrading to the mobile fortress in the future. Large-scale logistics consolidation center: Provides a large number of daily necessities, electrical appliances, canned food, medicine and other basic consumables to meet the material needs of the fleet population for about three months. Military garrison base, a large military convoy that was wiped out by a horde of corpses: It provides professional small military production lines, lathe robotic arms, a large number of heavy firepower firearms, ammunition, artillery weapons, large military tanks and vehicles, and military communication equipment to meet the self-sufficiency needs of establishing small military workshops and combat command centers. It also provides sufficient heavy firepower weapons, military vehicles, and defensive weapons for the protagonist, so that the military strength of the entire convoy is reborn and taken to the next level.

That's ridiculous. At this level of technology, even the national level can't fight it. This system is useless. It's too depressing.

It's a piece of shit. There is wisdom in the five-dimensional attributes. I keep saving some of it and not adding it. I just like it and play with it and don't add it.

No wonder your book has poor grades. You haven't written the three golden chapters yet. There are too many vague settings. You might as well write that you have just traveled to a strange world and accidentally touched a battle-damaged truck. In the early stage, you slowly discovered the truth of the world through scavenging, and then used various efforts to collect blueprints and upgrade the equipment of the vehicle until it became a space shuttle. Ship, you discover that there are countless planets beyond this planet. If you want to continue writing, you can then upgrade the spaceship through cosmic objects, so that the spacecraft has various characteristics, and adventure in each planet galaxy. You can refer to Gu Jianfeng's novel called Interstellar Cruise. Although this novel is very old, you can learn from the routines in it The three golden chapters are to make readers interested in your book. You have too many settings in the early stage and are too wordy. No matter what novel you write, what the public can accept is to slowly clear up the fog and let readers get into your novel. What do you think about it? The setting of this world is also slowly being accepted by readers in this process. You write too hastily and throw out too much data. Not many people can read it patiently. If your first three pictures cannot retain readers, then your novel will be finished. You need to start another one.

The soldiers at the front fought bloody battles and defended the defense line, and even generals died in battle, and the entire army died in the battle, while the bureaucrats at the rear were corrupt, seeking pleasure, and even conglomerates and families colluded to become rebels. I don't know what the high-level officials in the book thought, or how the author wrote it. They didn't all wait for the protagonist to become the protagonist's enemy after he grows stronger, and let the protagonist eradicate them.

When I first started reading online novels, I read whatever I could find. After a few years, I began to read introductions and then choose topics. Gradually, I became an old bookworm and became more demanding. The criteria for book selection also include the number of comments. Even if it is the number of comments, the author has put his heart into it. After all, he has used his brain and thought. The standard for the third stage is to reward fans worth 2 starting coins. The fan value ranking list is clear at a glance. Brother, you can't even get into the second stage. There are only about 600 subscribers. If you are just a fool, you might as well re-open a new book with your heart. After all, you still have some writing skills.

Author, you wrote Lin Xian in, but you can't write to the level of others, so it's very embarrassing. It's fine for a stand-alone work. If you write like this, I'm going to pick my toes. If it's heartbreaking, the gap between you and the other person is a bit big 😥

It's hard to say, it's hard to evaluate. It's food and grass, but it's not the best food and grass. It's edible. It's dry food level. Let's raise it first. I'll read it later when there are more words.

I feel like the protagonist never has enough fighting power in the subsequent fights and is always scraping.

The elements and costumes that everyone wants to see, mecha, power armor types, etc.

Who can read this much? Another fifty thousand, fifty thousand per person.

When I read Chapter 4, there was something wrong with Goldfinger. Did I make a mistake in reading the settings of other books? In that book, steel is obtained by decomposing steel, and petrochemicals are obtained by decomposing petroleum, so you need to look for materials everywhere. You don't need this one. All inanimate substances can be decomposed into particles and then reconstructed. You don't need to look for materials everywhere. You can dig holes in place to save enough for upgrading. First save hundreds of millions of cubic meters of materials. If you still have energy, you can directly synthesize it with particles. It doesn't matter if it's 100 cubic meters per kilometer. As long as your system can save it, you'll still be able to run.

This fog zone setting is too abnormal. It's 60 kilometers per hour. I wonder what the concept is? 🙂 This means that all the people you saved before will die.

Why have you been cutting off updates recently? Didn't even send an explanation. Is this a prelude to becoming a eunuch?

When will we get the 400mm cannon on my Chu Guang airship?

After skipping through some chapters, you might think the comic adaptation would be more popular. Every time there is a big scene, full fire or something, to be honest, it doesn't feel very satisfying. It would be better if there were specific pictures. I can't get the picture you describe by text. Contact others to make comic changes. Or you can try it yourself and combine the pictures, equipment effects, big scenes, etc. You have conceived. It may become popular. Come on.

Is it updated once a day now?

The author describes the nuclear-based particles in the book as equivalent to universal particles, but a down jacket requires more than metal. Since your world view is that silicon-based life is also afraid of cannonballs, then respect the law of conservation of mass. This is a huge bug. The more I look at it, the more awkward it becomes.

The writing is awesome, first write a few thousand chapters

It's too short. When will it be developed into a spaceship?

Now is the end of the world, there are some weird things, zombies, and even alien invasions. There is no blood cross written on it

The same mechanical ability, railroad tracks change tires. Tiangong Consortium = Crimson World?