There Are Ghosts

As the title says, comparing the mysterious recovery and my strange life, when writing this book, the author obviously no longer followed the dungeon mode. Instead, it was more like a fairy tale of fighting monsters and upgrading along the way. Seeing that there is too much content in the Yin Mine at present, I originally thought that I would just deal with Li Qi. Even my original expectation was that I would not be able to defeat Li Qi at all. After all, how high his level was in the early stage and how strong he was during his lifetime. I was prepared for a desperate story in which the entire White River fell, leaving a wave of elites to go to other mining areas to struggle for survival. As a result, you told me that the protagonist's strength soon surpassed that of Taoist ghost Li Qi. The boss became bigger and bigger. The two people with the same destiny thought they were so powerful. In the end, they were defeated dogs. After defeating these two, they merged into a new one. There was also the Emperor of Life and Death to fight later. These hundreds of thousands of words are a bit too compact. The protagonist is pushed along by the plot throughout the whole process. I can hardly feel that there has been a period of peace. This is not to say that the author's writing is not good. The rhythm is too tight and the world view is still not fully spread out. This makes me feel a bit pessimistic. The author has laid out such a large world view, and I am worried about whether I can control it. Talking back to the story itself, because the author keeps throwing out new settings, the Spring Hospital was not explored at the beginning and went to Yaming Country in Yuanjiang County. I think this part is very bad because you destroyed all the foreshadowing at the beginning. This is equivalent to everything before. Entering the spirit investigation bureau, investigating time, encountering unintentional ghosts, investigating curse letters, etc., Everything has lost its original plot significance. The result is to enhance the protagonist's strength and does not serve the plot. It is equivalent to the protagonist's strength driving the plot. This is what I think is quite fragmented so far. Is the author consciously avoiding copy structure? According to the dungeon mode, the plot development is as follows: the ghost incident - the cursed letter incident - the dungeon of Xu Xiangfei's Ghost Tower - the dungeon of Guimen Pass - the Spring Hospital - the dungeon of Yaming Country in Yuanjiang County - the dungeon of Huai Village - the dungeon of confronting the Emperor of Life and Death - the end. But obviously the author didn't write it like this. Not only did the big bosses not die, but they all colluded together. Zhou Yan, the Taoist ghost Li Qi, the great emperor of life and death, the suspected Wuxingui, the village elder, and the unknown mastermind also appeared in the latest chapter. Did the author need to write it so complicated? It is obvious that you can solve the problems one by one and improve your strength step by step. In the end, it will not be so complicated. Not only will the story be much clearer, but it will also be more comfortable for the audience to watch. The last step is to predict how the author wants to write this book. It can be seen that the author does not want to portray a saint Su Wu like the previous book, but it is obvious that the final ending must be that the world is in a big crisis and someone is urgently needed to save the world. But if the author doesn't want one person, that is, the protagonist Zhou Chang, to come out to save the world, then humans can only save themselves. Otherwise, the protagonist has to shoulder the responsibility. Apart from the different personalities, what is the difference with this book? Of course, the possibility of human beings saving themselves is not ruled out. The author also gives a solution in the book, which is the practice of soul puzzle. But, author, since you have written like this, why don't you write more supporting characters to solve the incident. The Zhou Chang family is still the only one, and I don't see any hope for human beings to save themselves. Several directors who were very good in the early stage are so weak after the expansion of Crow Ming Kingdom. How can they fight against the supernatural? According to this idea, if the author wanted to write a self-rescue plan for mankind, he would not have made the Spiritual Adjustment Bureau so fragile from the beginning, unable to catch even a ghost. Okay, I think the author's story hasn't even started yet. The soul puzzle is just a kind of fire that will be useful later. But this is 1 million words and it's still not finished. The whole process is still the protagonist's stage. I really doubt whether it will be the protagonist's routine to save the world in the end. The root cause is that the mine is too long! The ideal ending should be to write the first Yin Mine in a relatively short space. In my opinion, the only meaning of going to the Yin Mine for the first time is to get the soul puzzle practice method. Later, the perspective can be transferred to the old world. Baijiang City has fallen overall. The protagonist can only escort a small number of members of the Spiritual Adjustment Bureau to other Yin Mines to save fire. This can also have some linkage for the next Yin Mine. The author can completely write that in order to maintain his identity in the new world, all the powers of the old world cannot be used, but some things in the new world can play a huge role in the old world. They are really here to "mining". Isn't it good to use the new world as a carrier of pure supernatural themes? Other ghosts and gods cannot come in, but they can get a glimpse of their true colors for some time. Such a large-scale invasion is really terrible. Can humans really hold on? Hey, maybe the expectations for the author are too high, or maybe the policy is too restrictive on supernatural themes, which prevents the author from giving full play to his talents. I think this book is really a pity. Maybe we should admit that supernatural themes have no good results, whether in terms of policy or performance. The reason may be that the author's positioning of this book is "a refreshing article with supernatural elements". My speech may be obscure and difficult to understand, and I won't want people to read it. Just think of it as talking to myself😳

It's not even a sensitivity issue, it's just poorly written. Just like "The Dragon", the forced addition of political elements affects the original plot conflict tension. Like secret realms or political plots in ancient times, everyone is not familiar with them anyway and will not be able to substitute them, and they can be magically modified by combining strange factors, so there is not much sense of violation when reading them. The further the timeline goes toward modern times, the more inconsistent the feeling becomes. During the late Qing Dynasty and the Republic of China, the historical conflict itself was very tense. If one wants to tell the story of human social conflict, then supernatural power undercuts the weight of bloodshed and sacrifice in the struggle against exploitation and oppression. The previous book was quite clear on this point, eliminating the weird is the primary goal. Cross Tribulation and other forces are still weird incarnations in nature. But this book uses extraordinary power to shout "Don't kneel", which is very strange to read. I don't know if there are still readers who like this kind of plot. Finally, in modern times, it doesn't involve so many valuable things, it's just about surviving against the weird, but it's not so inconsistent.

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you watch the third watch, the humble praise begins to sound, and the number of dead harvests begins to decrease. When you update at the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the great Confucian scholars' debates on scriptures are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both inside and outside. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in a long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updating may not solve all difficulties, but more than 90% of the problems come from insufficient updates. It's too uncomfortable to update once a day.

How can a mature book club not have idiom solitaire? I'll go first!

I subscribed to the helmsman last time, so let's talk about my early experience in this one. The writing style of this book is undoubtedly improved compared to Su Wu's book, which is worthy of praise 👍, but it does have more poisonous points than Su Wu's, especially in the front part (in addition, the author writes slowly, and the plot that is not originally poisonous turns out to be difficult for new readers to turn around 😂). The main character in this book helps this group of people before he develops his strength. To me, he is not lovable (but not poisonous either). Maybe I still like Su Wu's kind-heartedness that helps the world after he has the ability, rather than putting his own safety aside. In short, this book is a good one. The writing style is better than the previous one and there are more poisonous points. It can be read to pass the time.

This book has the same advantages and disadvantages as the previous one 1. There is almost no daily use, and the time to download the copy is too fast. In just half a month, it is "invincible". 2. There is still no division of realms. It does not necessarily mean that there must be a clear Qi-building foundation pill or something, but the division of the enemy's terror level and the resistance ability of the protagonist group. Why can Shi Zongtou compete with the three monks? Has the degree of terror between the two been clearly described? For example, Jin Yong's martial arts has no level, but the overall level of strength is very obvious. I don't know who is better between Guo Jing and Xiao Feng, but Guo Jing must be better than Jiumozhi, right? The clearer the level of combat power, the more attractive it is to readers! You are like Gu Long in this aspect, you can plug and play in terms of combat power and so on. The description is wonderful but it is difficult to get out of the circle (in my humble opinion) The advantage is also very simple: I will finish reading

The finale is coming? In the first copy, I went to the capital without rescuing my grandfather when I was full and had nothing to do. Then I opened a restaurant in the capital and took in disciples to meddle in my own business. Finally, I beat the son who had his head shaved. I stopped reading it after that. Anyway, this book is very fascinating. I will write it as soon as I think about it.

Nowadays, the rules of the book review area are corrupt and traitors are everywhere. This is due to the lack of updates. If the author diligently updates Ten Thousand Yus every day, then the traitors will be afraid and retreat, and the moral gentlemen will rejoice. This is a feat worthy of praise by Yao and Shun! I have heard that calves born in sheep pens do not behave like sheep when they grow up. You are at the starting point and your computer keyboard is often used, but you have lost interest in updating it. Is this reasonable? The reason why Qidian is strong is that we have inherited the etiquette and skills of our ancestors. Stop bursting, the pressure has nowhere to release, and instead you become tired. Isn't this the same as abandoning the roots of the tree and pursuing the treetops? If this continues, great disaster will surely happen! The reason why Bai Jin can earn tens of thousands of royalties and not be harmed by villains is precisely because they are willing to listen to what upright gentlemen have to say. However, they are unable to earn royalties and are even looked down upon by their girlfriends. This is because they are close to evil villains. I hope you can think carefully about the difference. There is one thing for which the author can cry bitterly, and six things for which the author can sigh. Since ancient times, when performing actions, the words are often very passionate. If they are not passionate, they will not be able to move the actor's heart. Harsh words are akin to slander. Author, you should think carefully about whether such a thing is right or wrong. Those authors who update less, delay updates, or are late to update have no time to feel sad about themselves, so they are drowned in the torrent of works, leaving only later authors to feel sad about them; later authors feel sad and do not learn from it, and future authors feel sad about it.

For readers who are basically fully subscribed, the beginning is very exciting, the plot in Yizhuang against the monks is very good, the first silver mine confrontation with Li Qi is also good, but later the Qing Dynasty was too inconsistent. It is very strange to object to the Qing Dynasty borrowing and writing. Don't get involved in this kind of political behavior. It doesn't make any sense. The author's description of the Manchu Qing Dynasty is too deliberate. The Qing Dynasty is indeed corrupt. Is the decline of the Chinese nation really all blamed on the Qing Dynasty? So it's really awkward when I look at it

The writing style of this work is undoubtedly better than the previous one, but I personally feel that there are several problems: 1. The pace is not as smooth as the previous one. There are about 400 chapters so far, and there are still many big chapters, but the advancement of the plot is a bit slow. After reading the latest chapter, I feel like I am taking one step here and there, not knowing what I am going to do. It is said that when I finish the dungeon, I will first investigate the second general to save my grandfather, and in the middle, I will prepare to save the world. This early goal has not made much progress, and I don't know if this should be postponed to one of the big goals in the later stage.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 posted the original text here: But now that this incident happened, he felt a little itchy. He wanted to see if there was any powerful person's plan hidden behind this chaotic situation. "Because this time, he felt a little itchy. He had already written a hundred chapters outside the main plot, and expected to write about another hundred chapters. He didn't quite understand the reason for writing this branch for so long. It might end up with the Treasure King plot.          2.，，，，     3.， The main thing is that except for more skills, there is no obvious difference between the early and late stages of fighting. When the protagonist fights in the first dungeon, it sounds very advanced, but there is not much difference from the subsequent fights. The pleasure of the protagonist becoming stronger after acquiring a new ability is relatively weak. This part is not as exciting as the previous one, probably because the protagonist has too many and too complex abilities in the early stages. It's been a long time since I've commented. There are some places where the words don't convey what I mean, so I'll leave it at that. Finally, I hope the author will keep his own ideas. The writing is indeed very attractive. 😍 I also hope that everyone can discuss more, because in some places what I mean is not so precise 🤭