The Primordial Law

What he said in the ending of the last book was very courageous! Even if he is reincarnated for eternity, he will still have to walk his own path in the future. His future achievements will be huge at first glance

Twenty floors, fifty likes, casual knot, upper limit of silver (Six thousand five hundred floors have been tied, three hundred likes)

Chi Kongle

My eyebrows are raised to the mountains and rivers, and my eyes are focused on the sun and the moon. The red lips lightly move the universe, and the phoenix dances in the sky and crowns Yingzhou.

From eternity to now. Objectively speaking, the original intention of writing this book has changed, maybe I have changed. The author has written more than 500 chapters now, which is not very short. I have the following biggest feelings: 1. The author updates two chapters (six to seven thousand words) every day, no matter the quality, no matter whether it is good or not, no matter how broken the chapter is, it will end when the number of words is reached. 2. Each chapter contains a large number of descriptions of scenery. In fact, there is not much difference between writing and not writing. Want to show off your writing skills? I don't think this is any kind of writing. 3. In the early stages of cultivation, there was a phenomenon of fighting in the later stages of eternity. Inheritors, young emperors, ordinary chiefs, true successors, top chiefs, and half-step immortals all had to be explained a lot every time. I don't know if the author himself understood it. Anyway, I was a little confused. Maybe it would be better to have less explanations. 4. Up to now, the latest chapter has been crazy about suppressing the protagonist's combat power, and a lot of words have been written about insignificant characters. There are very few descriptions of characters destined to accompany the protagonist's growth, such as Guanwu, Wanzhou, Hongting Jiangning, etc. 5. Up to now, I haven't seen the personality charm of the protagonist who is a sports student. I only know that she is very talented, has a strong background, and has a very good guardian wife. She cherishes her life every time she fights or undergoes training. She is also good at hiding her clumsiness, greedy for money and lust (now the heroine is worthy of no less than seven or eight), and the protagonist has been practicing for several years. Has he never thought about the purpose of cultivating immortality? What's the motivation? I didn't see this kind of deep-seated thing. There were a lot of dialogues between characters every day. The protagonist practiced for the sake of cultivation, and practiced for the sake of experience. He was like a machine waiting for immortality to be picked up and taken to the next map. He didn't think about the mystery of his life experience, nor his brothers and classmates, nor whether his parents were still alive. 6. If there is a very good guardian wife setting, should I always follow the invincible style in the early stage? Imagine that the protagonist really encounters a life and death crisis. Will the protective wife refuse to save him? After all, life is closely related, but this always feels like a lack of challenge and momentum. Anyway, the smell is very strong. Writing to the end, procrastinating the update, and daily routine in the underworld, I will not talk about it, but people with a discerning eye can see that sometimes the late update is not a problem of thinking, not that the typing is too slow, but that you are too perfunctory to the readers. Unlike the previous book, which can be read for free on other platforms, this book costs money. Please respect the efforts of others, and at the same time respect the fruits of your own labor! Don't think about how to get six or seven thousand words to fool readers every day. I don't know whether your original intention has changed or my taste has changed. The content I write now makes it impossible to continue reading (including the new book written by the otaku that I have been chasing for more than ten years). Next, there will be a group of filial sons who will say whether to leave or not. I thank you. I know that the author has no time and will not read the readers' feedback. I deeply regret that I have not been able to reach the end of the law for all eternity. Goodbye!

Trash, but he will not let go of any woman. What is the difference between him and a stallion? He engages in ambiguous affairs every day, and he is a scumbag. Except for the protagonist, all the other men have to be stabbed (Cang Li is stupid, Ying Jiu relies on his sister to betray his lust, there is also a eunuch, and there is a man named Tang who only deserves a glance from his sister, but the sister is forced by the author to have an affair with the male protagonist, Yao Qian is even more disgusting), as long as a female can be washed, a male will be thinned all the way ~ la. Anyway, it's all about the women's nannies, worshiping the male protagonist, and the men's various attractions. It's shit, it only deserves one or two stars. Look at how newspapers are being sold, look at how people are doing it, this is shit. Creating a character is all about dressing up. You have to look down on the male protagonist and support the male protagonist. You can decorate the female protagonist with lots of nbs, and then you can worship the male protagonist. Look at Wei Yuan, Uncle President, and Young Master Fu, which one is not yours for the rest of your life.

Those people in the last book went out to explore, the water outside is very deep, and it can drown people if they are not sure Emperor Wa 98 did not dare to make a high profile outside. It will be written later in this book that the Great Master and Ming Ancestor will be seriously injured and on the verge of death Especially for a reckless man like Ming Anzu, who also wants to use the creatures outside as a medicine field, she is the first unlucky person 🤓

Why would Yao Qingxuan spend so much time writing about the heroine? Moreover, it was so warm in the early stage, and he was still a big demon's dog-licker. Isn't this just pure cuckoldry? If you die early, I won't order it if there's a plot like this.

People who read his novels mainly go there for the multiple female protagonists. If it is not a female protagonist, there is no need to spend so much time describing it. It is too late to make up for it. This time can be said to be a screening of readers 🤭

Jiang Ning