Cultivating Longevity in Seclusion at the Talisman Academy

A novel about cultivating immortals also uses so many plots on the affairs of men and women? It's like a female romance novel

Just post female videos? Why are you posting a male video?

There are too many irrelevant plots to write There is no need to write some trashy male and female characters at all, including dialogues and so on. Overall, it seems to be very dull, and the plot is very dull. After dozens of chapters, it is about slowly improving your proficiency and cultivation. In Chapter 70, it's okay to just practice Qi at the fifth level. The plot is all about trivial matters. Let's go and look at what other people have written. The foundation is established in Chapter 60, the pace is fast and the details are appropriate. What are you writing? Do you want to drink water slowly and daily? There is no need to write about so many interpersonal interactions. In the early stage, a small character needs to write about any interpersonal interactions? Write it directly like below. Three years have passed by. The protagonist has been practicing hard every day, and this day he finally succeeded in making a low-grade talisman. To put it bluntly, one sentence omits many passerby characters that the protagonist encounters in the early stage. You said that the writings written by these passers-by are not outstanding and are bland.

The parents behind are all naughty. Are you infected with Siheyuan? Cao Yang failed to build a foundation for the first time, Cao Yang failed to build a foundation for the second time, Cao Yang this, Cao Yang that, you care whether Cao Yang can build a foundation, does it have anything to do with the protagonist?

It should be renamed the Love Cultivation World, add a longevity plug-in and a proficiency panel, and still have a relationship with several women who are unclear about it, which is also unnatural

This book should be renamed "My Romance from an Ordinary Worker to a Technical Executive in an Electronics Factory in the 1960s"

Can you tell me why all of these must start with the main character Dio, Qingmei is awesome? Is this a template? If not, it wouldn't be written on it, right?

Stallion article, forget about stallion, it also wrote down the two women that I wrote about in a large space in the early stage. It is not recommended for consumption.

It left me speechless. My cultivation depends entirely on taking drugs, and my understanding depends entirely on plug-ins. The plot was set ten years ago, so I only wanted to test the emperor's uncle to attract people 😐

It can be seen that the author is treating the protagonist like a dog. Either he encounters someone who wants to steal the protagonist's woman, or he doesn't like the protagonist. He also uses all kinds of conspiracies and tricks to get revenge on the protagonist. However, the protagonist cannot take revenge, which makes him laugh to death.