Beast Taming in the Immortal Mansion

I was a little dissuaded when I saw that the imperial beast was a panda again.

Until the latest chapter, it was very good, even beyond my imagination, not like a newbie at all. On the basis of the leader's basic sect framework, use normal mortal flow to cultivate the realm of immortality. I wrote a little bit of my own characteristics. At this level, if it can persist until it is put on the shelves, I dare not say it is a high-quality product, but the results will definitely not be bad.

The biggest problem with this novel is that it gives people the impression that it is not the right version. You see, your introduction is solid, stable and has room for cheating, but the content is different. You didn't explicitly state that you are the leader of the fanfic, you can't assume that everyone else knows about the Great Zhou Academy, the Land Reclamation Order, the Monsters, and the Wild Beasts. You wrote about a hammer in the east and a stick in the west. It is estimated that many people still don't understand the world view. Many readers are still asking why the Beast Control Sect does not have the unique skills of the Beast Control Sect. It is difficult to have more than one leader's power system. It's best that you don't learn from the leader's power system. Your writing style is not as good as his, and others won't be able to write. , The world view has already been put on the shelf and cannot be changed. Please improve it slowly. It is best to return to your profile. It is okay to play around and enjoy it. It is also okay to farm steadily. It is so busy as written. It is full of bitterness and hatred. I am very busy but I don't know what I am busy with.

Why do we always have pandas in today's beast-controlling novels? To put it bluntly, it is a species that will be eliminated by the earth's ecology.

The highlight of this book is "stability". It is obvious that the author can't do it, and the protagonist's ideas change too easily. If the situation is unfavorable and his cultivation is not good, he thinks about practicing more in the future, and in peacetime, he thinks about making more money. If you want to be stubborn, why do you let the protagonist get involved in those unpleasant things when he is weak? I saw in the chapter review that this book is a fan? That's easy to explain. If the plot can't be written of its own, it's basically fixed. It's not surprising that the protagonist's character conflicts with the plot.

The writing at the end is not good, the pig's foot level is reached, but the author's level is not. . . . Therefore, under certain circumstances, Nascent Soul is not as good as Golden elixir! ! A suggestion: some of the transformed gods described above are very distinctive, such as the old lion, coral, etc. There are also some characters that are very featureless and do not deserve the word "transformed god". They are just bigger ants, such as that rabbit! Its ability has no characteristics and is not worthy of becoming a god. If a rabbit could eat herbs and extract elixirs, that would be awesome! Pig's feet can be creative in the way of transforming into gods! If you want to make a breakthrough later in this book, you need to make a conceptual breakthrough. Combined with the previous article, the most suitable place may be the pig's feet's innovation on his own path to becoming a god! ! ! Transforming into a god, transforming into a god should not just be an improvement in realm, strength, appearance, total mana, and other data, it should be the starting point of qualitative change! ! To put it simply, they are not human beings and should gradually break away from the concept of human beings! ! You cannot use ordinary people's logic to simply explain the transformation of gods! In fact, it is supported by the huge aura of the Immortal Mansion, and uses the spiritual power network to extend to the outside world, develop various supermodel spells or conceptual abilities, and derive a variety of buffs to serve all living beings on the Internet! It is a very good direction So: the scope of the spiritual power network is the scope of the main field, and then information = ability, formula = strength, and cross-border material exchange with Xianfu as the center = weapons! So: With Yunyun Zongsheng as the fulcrum and information calculation and processing as the casting process, you can perform ultra-long-range spirit gathering, spirit-taking, amplification, weakening, extension of spiritual consciousness, attack transmission (ultra-long-range strike), information blocking (making the target unable to communicate normally), pseudo-infinite energy (spiritual power transmission), etc.! It doesn't need to be completely logical, just your imagination! When describing, it's best to be like the old lion's firefly consciousness, abstract things into concrete things, and concrete things into abstractions. Don't describe it comprehensively, but only describe the specific characteristics of a certain aspect of your ability! ! No need to write about principles, just write about actual combat! Readers will be entertained! I remember that in the wizard's journey of "A Line of Egrets Climb to the Blue Sky", we conducted macro-dimensional research and formed a "million-dollar starting coin" high-dimensional strike, which directly determines the result and ignores the process! ! I was shocked for a moment! The research on alienation has formed the alienation field. One's own body can be alienated under control. Body organs such as arms, legs, head, etc. Are injured and reorganized to survive. The enemy fights on its own and conflicts with itself! Wait! The writing of this book is a bit sluggish right now, and only conceptual innovation can break through!

Look at the 168 chapters you wrote. You wrote so much about your natural talent. How come you are so weak in the alchemy theory? The alchemy theory is not linked to your own talent at all? Did you forget about your talent that was written later? Have you always been at odds with the queen bee?

In this volume, nothing goes well for the protagonist. Everything he wants to do is not accomplished. It is even better not to do it. It is better to just practice than to go out and do it. The protagonist in these chapters is extremely frustrated, perfectly avoiding the fun points that can be written. Another big picture for Xiong Feng. The person surnamed Ji in the new chapter is a disgusting thing at first glance. Either the protagonist's enemy will be increased by one, or he will continue to suffer the loss; I can't even think of how to kill Chunyu. With his identity, he is a fool who comes out to duel. The protagonist will do some favors in the early stage, but now there are enemies everywhere and no one can deal with them. The one with the surname Tu is a trading relationship, and Lechuan even tricked the protagonist. The only reliable elder is still a monster, but the relationship has also become tense. It's better to just surrender to Black Wind Valley and be a dog. The success of several things in the early stage depends on the backers of the Beast Control Sect at all levels. After the golden elixir is promoted, the backers cannot keep up with the level, and the protagonist will achieve nothing. If you don't want to be a dog, it's better to rely on the Immortal Mansion to cultivate for tens of thousands of years. Don't live a rough life. The more you live, the better you will be.

Tell me your personal opinion. After reading more than 50 or 60 chapters, I feel that there is no main line, but all branch lines. The utilization rate of Goldfinger is too low. Forget it if you don't have a cheat, but if you have a cheat but don't use it, you will always talk about things, spend crazy money on plot lines, all kinds of accidents, and all kinds of copies. . . Then this feeling. . . That's very bad. My personal opinion is that cheats should be used more often. Especially in the early stage, when there is nothing, I wish I could use one spiritual stone as if it were a hundred. What's the result? All authors, well, to be precise, 70% or even more than 80% of authors have golden fingers but don't use them, crazily suppressing them. It's okay to press, but it can't be done without thinking. Pressing with a little bit of logic is okay. With such a golden finger, it doesn't matter whether the author writes about business, planting or breeding, it will work. But you can't give up just because it's hard to take action. The most important thing to do is to find new techniques, escape spells, earth escape, water escape, wood escape, etc., As well as escape magic weapons. This is the normal way of thinking, rather than being afraid of this and that. If you really want to hold on, then really hold on. Otherwise, you have to do whatever you want, you can't help yourself, you have to force yourself to do it, and then you have no choice but to take risks. This is the first point. Second point, the setting that monk corpses can enhance spiritual roots is not good, so get rid of it. Tell me why. First, if this setting does not change, then the most important thing the protagonist should do is to arrange for some mortals to go to the post-war battlefield to 'clean' the battlefield, transport the corpses to certain places or designated places, 'bury' them, and then in the dead of night or when it is sure that no one is around, Earth Escape and use golden fingers to collect the corpses frantically. Instead of some bullshit ferrying, running business, or doing sect tasks, or various helpless forced conquests, etc. Improving qualifications is the first priority. Wherever there is a battlefield, there should be mortals arranged by the protagonist to clean up the battlefield after the war, or to go to mass graves, mass graves, etc. Are one hundred monk corpses enough? Can the Five Elements Spiritual Roots be fully upgraded to mid-grade spiritual roots? What about two hundred? Then can a thousand or ten thousand corpses be upgraded to a high-grade spiritual root? Next, what kind of earthly or heavenly thing or what kind of Taoist body or holy body, are one hundred thousand or one million enough? What about 100 million? If you want to suppress it, the earth-level and heaven-level settings are set to the corpses of monks in the foundation-building stage, or the corpses in the golden elixir stage. Then there is a problem, what about the monsters? Can all kinds of monsters improve their spiritual root qualifications? Also, since spiritual soil and spiritual wood can be improved, what about water, such as seas or rivers, which have spiritual substances, right? Also, can volcanic lava enhance fire and earth spiritual roots? So, what about thunder and lightning? What about hurricanes? What about icebergs? Or, what about the attributes of light and darkness or yin and yang? Is it easier to practice now that you have spiritual roots? So, the author, I hope you will think carefully about strengthening your spiritual roots and make a patch after thinking about it. Third, whether it is the five-element spiritual object that improves its spiritual roots or the corpse of a monk that improves, after the improvement is completed, or after it has improved a lot, quickly arrange for the protagonist to run away. Don't treat people as fools. The protagonist's cultivation speed and the spiritual root cultivation speed represented by the spiritual root value in the entry test are not consistent at all. Either people think you are having an adventure, but you are shivering, and the amount of spiritual stones you spend and earn does not match your cultivation speed. What is that adventure? If it's not a spiritual stone, it can only be a spiritual elixir or a treasure of heaven and earth. Very simple logic. Then author Jun, do you think these cultivators are fools? Would they have thought of this? Have you thought about taking action? So, above, the protagonist in the author's works is so cautious and walking on thin ice. Do you think the author would have thought of this? (Hahahaha, if the characters could talk, do you think these protagonists would criticize the author?) I have been verbose for a long time, and I don't know if the author will read it. I especially hope that the author of every book I read can become a god or ancestor and make a lot of money. Coding is very hard, come on, author, platinum is not a dream! I hope the more I write, the better.

It started well, with ideas, practicing immortality and doing business, and being very cautious. Until the senior sister came out, she kept losing her wits and developed Yuanling Mountain. She has a relationship with the protagonist. She is practicing at the mountain gate and has time to do business. The writing is like shit. I feel like it was written by two people.