Beast Taming in the Immortal Mansion

Seeing that the beast tamer is a panda is a bit off-putting.

Up to the latest chapter, it's been very good, even exceeding my expectations; it doesn't feel like something a newcomer would write. Within the framework of a sect led by a sect leader, it uses the typical mortal cultivation path, yet manages to create its own unique style. With this level of skill, the fact that it's made it to the book's release speaks volumes; I wouldn't call it a masterpiece, but its success is definitely not bad.

The biggest problem with this novel is that it feels like a mismatch between advertised and actual content. Your synopsis mentions farming, a stable life, and even a cheat-like ability with a spatial dimension, but what about the actual content? Sp;                & nbsp;                 You didn't explicitly state that this is a fanfiction about the sect leader.

Why do modern beast-taming stories always feature pandas? To put it bluntly, pandas are a species that is about to be eliminated from Earth's ecosystem.

The highlight of this book is its "stability," which the author clearly fails to achieve. Furthermore, the protagonist's thoughts change too easily. When the situation is unfavorable and his cultivation is low, he immediately thinks about cultivating more; when things are going well, he's thinking about making more money.

The later parts weren't well-written; the protagonist's cultivation level had reached that point, but the author's hadn't... Therefore, in some situations, a Nascent Soul cultivator is actually inferior to a Golden Core cultivator! Here's a suggestion: the characters described earlier, like the old lion and the coral, were very distinctive.

Look at your own 168 chapters, how amazing your innate talent was, but how come your discussion of alchemy is so terrible? The discussion of alchemy has nothing to do with your own talent? Did you forget about your talent when you wrote about it later? Did you just keep arguing with the Queen Bee's Voice of All Things?

In this volume, nothing goes smoothly for the protagonist. Everything he tries to do fails, and it would have been better not to do anything at all. Staying put and cultivating is worse than going out and messing around. These chapters show the protagonist suffering endless setbacks, perfectly avoiding any potentially satisfying moments. They're just making another big promise to Xiong Feng.

Let me share some personal opinions. I've read about fifty or sixty chapters, and it feels like there's no main storyline, just side stories. The utilization rate of the cheat code is too low. If you don't have a cheat system, fine, but since you do have one, why not use it? Instead, you keep digressing, creating endless side storylines, unexpected events, and dungeons... That feeling...

The beginning was good, with some ideas, depicting cultivation and business with caution. However, after the senior sister appeared, the plot seemed to plummet, and the development of Yuanling Mountain had nothing to do with the protagonist. Why couldn't he spend his time cultivating at the mountain gate and engaging in business? The writing was terrible, feeling like it was written by two different people.