From a Small-Town Qi-Refining Drudge to an Immortal Sect Dao Lord

What a piece of shit. You were given a golden finger to practice so quickly, and then you have to struggle not to expose your true state. If you can't expose it, forget about it. You will cause endless trouble for the protagonist every day. Even if the protagonist eats at home, the trouble will be solved. If you can't write novels, just find a factory to work.

The progress is too slow, chapter 230, no foundation building, and then there is the golden finger of development, and there is always a lot of things, being threatened, being fucked,,, it has been in a depressed state for more than two hundred chapters, nothing exciting, and according to this golden finger, does it matter if it is one year earlier or one year later? It has to be involved in so many things, and there is not much profit. It could have developed well, but it has to be brainless. Even if the author wrote a lot of reasons, in my opinion, they are completely invalid reasons. They are just reasons for messing around after being full and having nothing to do. I can eat it. I am full and can't wait to read your novel until chapter 230, but I find it difficult to accept the protagonist continuing to talk nonsense. You must know that the protagonist's golden finger is a developmental golden finger. As a result, your life is in danger every day, which completely violates the tone of the beginning. It's very annoying to watch. There are endless things and endless dangers to life. The whole rhythm is completely broken.

I know why it's bad. The first chapter gave me the impression that modern literature has been transformed into a fairy tale.

Twenty-year-old Shennong has completed the appraisal and it is currently non-toxic. Food and grass++

I feel that there are several problems: 1. The plot is too routine and has no content at all 2. The numerical values ​​are filled in a bit randomly, including but not limited to money and combat power, especially money, and the context often does not match up. One moment he casually handed ten yuan to the concierge, and the next moment he said it only cost two yuan and felt very heartbroken. One moment it was said that the protagonist's monthly salary was 150 and later it rose to 300+. The next moment he was shocked when he saw someone taking out 150 to buy something in the black market, thinking that it must be a kid from our family. 3. The protagonist seems to be very cute, but he is not doing anything serious. The main plot now should be how to clean up his cultivation. After all, it is unrealistic for the protagonist to change his appearance and start over with his family. But I said I found a recipe, but there was no movement in dozens of chapters. I didn't write about how to obtain the materials, and I didn't write about how to use this excuse to really win people's trust. After all, you couldn't find a way for more than ten years before, and you still made meritorious deeds. So why did you get the means to change your qualifications now? Even the elixirs given by others were delayed. 4. Before he could clear up his cultivation, he tried every means to make money in exchange for spiritual stones, but in order to earn a profit of more than ten yuan, he attracted covetous people. 5. Can you be targeted if you sell goods for more than ten yuan? In the end, the fight was endless and 20 people were killed? It was purely because there was no plot and a battle plot was added without considering the rationality. The protagonist's combat power was also exaggerated. One hundred talismans were inspired to be scattered, so if I collected a thousand or ten thousand talismans, wouldn't I be invincible? How could I use them all at once? Shoot Speed ♾️ belongs to 6. The hang-up is too big and starts to force the protagonist. First, it has been procrastinating and not allowing the protagonist to improve his cultivation level on the surface. Second, it has imposed various restrictions on the protagonist's means of making money. He has crafts but is restricted from selling them anywhere. He has to go to the black market, and he cannot sell them at a high price. 7. I like to add various settings that cannot be reflected in the later text or even contradict them. For example, there are male and female defenses, etc. 8. The description of cultivating immortals is too empty. What has the protagonist achieved through cultivation? At present, it is known that the fourth level of Qi training has spiritual consciousness, and the seventh level has a protective shield that can prevent rain. But their presence is also very low. However, other parts of cultivation civilization are also well written, including various production and life-related talismans. Of course, there are many advantages in other places. I hope the author can fix these points.

The level of Goldfinger is too low and unattractive (Goldfinger can start to have restrictions and be weaker, but you cannot be too low level) Goldfinger in the Golden Core stage, what is the difference between you, Goldfinger, the protagonist, and the immortal cultivator who has received an opportunity in the world of immortality? Well, there is still a difference. It is weaker. In the novel about cultivating immortals, at least you can get the resources of a Nascent Soul. If it is better, you can transform into gods and overcome tribulations, and even get immortal relics.

Why do so many people always target the protagonist? Why does the protagonist always have so much shit?

Cultivation of immortality is about being self-centered and going against the will of nature. A single husband among single husbands will set up a wife and children when he comes out, and take care of his family to cultivate immortality. He does not "move forward with a heavy burden" and does not create some uncomfortable responsibilities. It does not conform to the logic of cultivating immortality and deviates from the current mainstream aesthetics.

You kill people when you tell them to. After you kill them, you don't dare to touch the body for fear of being discovered. After you touch it, you don't dare to keep the storage bag. This is a fantasy world. How useful is it if you destroy the physical evidence? Either don't do it, or just do it to the end. There are so many clues left, and it's up to you to make any assumptions. Is there any physical evidence? Is it important to the fantasy world? Don't substitute real world settings

Through the author's description in the first chapter, the image of the pig-footed villain emerges vividly on the page.