Daily Rewards: Starting Cultivation as a Servant

Author, look at your profile: you've been a menial laborer for ten years and you're only fifteen years old.

However, you've gone a bit too far. The immortal rules are too strict, and the rule that one's lifelong achievements are determined by absorbing Qi is even stricter than the immortal rules. You said in the comments that it can be defended, but judging from your tone, it's probably just a perfunctory statement. The price must be extremely high and the difficulty is extremely high.

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Dude, are you stupid? Your writing style is okay, but the pacing and the lack of engaging moments are just a problem. Just revise it, and you won't have to worry about traffic. Build up some basics before you write anything else.

It's well-written, refreshing, and doesn't feel too similar to other novels in the same genre, nor does it stray too far from the mark. A very good book.

I don't understand what the synopsis is trying to say. It's so long, and after reading it, I found a lot of it to be irrelevant; these points should have been stated in the original text.

This is much better than the more popular Xianxia novels on the platform. It's free of sarcasm and melodrama, and not too toxic; you can keep reading. However, there are some factual errors. For example, the wingspan of the two-person bird in the latest chapter is only 2 meters, which is too small. The author clearly doesn't have a good grasp of numbers.

With the popularity of "Ordinary People" right now, you could easily make a living writing something, even if you just wrote something casually. Your writing isn't bad; it's just that you didn't write a good opening. You kept trying to write your own stuff, and then the battle scenes were poorly written.

I came from the previous book, so I'd like to share my thoughts. The author's writing style and thought process are good, but the writing tends to veer off course or deviate from the initial tone. It gives the impression of trying too hard to hide something. You can set boundaries while writing so that you don't go astray and end up in a dead end.

The new book is much better than the author's previous book so far. The characters are very distinct and the writing style has been developed. Keep persisting in the last book and I will write better and better. Come on, I'll read other books to support you. 🙂🙂