A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: Starting at the Falling Cloud Sect
凡人：从落云宗开始
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- Fantasy Cultivation
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The introduction is childish! You can traverse various continents and secret realms, yet you can't escape the control of the demonic sect? The basic logic is flawed.
What I disliked most about this book was its hypocrisy.
I don't understand what the author was thinking. Yuan Yao has been through so many life-and-death situations with the protagonist, always firmly on his side, yet she's never given a title or any cultivation resources. Then she's constantly wavering, having ambiguous relationships with Zi Ling and Mei Ning. Is the author trying to manipulate the female characters in a fantasy novel? It's quite something that a female character in a mortal's mortal world fanfiction would be written like this.
I've seen many readers debating whether this book should feature a single female lead or multiple female leads, so I'd like to share my personal opinion.
The worldview of *A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality* is more suited to a single female protagonist or a young female protagonist; that's the logic, and I agree with that. However, from a three-dimensional perspective, after reading a bunch of *A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality* fanfiction, it seems that regardless of their success, they all feature harems, with almost…
Song Yu
Starting with the Falling Cloud Sect is quite innovative.
Personally, I think this book is clearly the kind that unfolds in detail, without deliberately focusing on how characters advance through levels like Foundation Establishment and Core Formation. Instead, it progresses through adventures, quests, and dungeons, making it a rare fanfiction that doesn't strictly follow Han Li's original path or steal his opportunities.
The premise is a bit unsettling.
In Chapter Two, the protagonist is only at the Qi Refining stage, yet his primordial spirit is already being divided and sealed. I want to ask, do people at the Qi Refining stage even have a primordial spirit? Even if they do, wouldn't having their primordial spirit divided at this level instantly turn them into idiots? 🤤
What about the Nascent Soul? Cheng Tiankun is dead, so what happened to the protagonist's Nascent Soul?
First, the protagonist's triple identity as a spy is something that most readers can disregard. Second, the protagonist's cultivation progresses slowly, while the protagonist in the neighboring novel "Grandmaster of Demonic Cultivation" reaches the Nascent Soul stage in just over a hundred chapters, which can be temporarily overlooked.
Most people who read *A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality* fanfiction are veteran readers, and veteran readers tend to prefer more fast-paced, action-packed stories with romantic subplots (and often, older readers are quite lecherous). Author, your writing is good, the plot is tight, the logic is clear, and the characters are well-developed.
I've read it several times, but I can't get through it. The first few chapters are really ridiculous—the idea of the protagonist being bound by a demonic split soul, and Song Yu telling the protagonist that he's an undercover agent right after they meet is just absurd.
No, do you even know you're writing fan fiction? What are you thinking? It's just Foundation Establishment, why have you been dragging this out for so long? What are you dawdling about?