A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: From the Start, I Became the Disciple of Adept Qing Yi

I saw the latest chapter in Ciao, and I really don't think it's the author. No matter how poor Qingyi is, he is still a Yuanying monk. You are so poor that you pee blood. You feel so sorry for the Qingming Needle Talisman Bao, and the protagonist is moved to tears. After seeing so many fans, you are the poorest Yuanying. It feels like you have to wear a pair of underpants for hundreds of years.

I wonder if the author started writing the novel after reading a few fanfics? Not only is there a problem with the plot, but it seems that the author doesn't know much about mortals in this novel. For example, a fake elixir monk by a passerby can reach the early stage of elixir formation with all his strength, and the elixir formation at the age of 6 or 70 can barely be regarded as a genius in the chaotic sea of ​​stars. Therefore, Wen Tianren, Song Yu, and others who are nearly a hundred years old and have elixir formation are basically useless. There are also many things that are outrageous, so I won't go into details.

Scribing, take it for granted, the fake elixir is to build the foundation. When you get a fake elixir, you can explode the strength of the elixir, 666

I've finished watching it, I spent a lot of money, and the plot is pretty good! It's just that the writing style is really not that good, 2.5 Million words is about 500,000 pieces of nonsense. I hope the author can read it and revise it after finishing it. After all, 500,000 words of nonsense only costs a meal of braised chicken and rice! Right

Three years into the foundation building period, the same shop sold a small hundred thousand spiritual stones. He called himself Li Feiyu and kept stressing that he was cautious, which made him laugh.

They all have the resources to practice, but their cultivation level is low and they like to be lazy. They call it "looking for things to do to seize opportunities", fight and talk nonsense, and act like a child. They are brainless and change their settings.

Author, you actually made a Nascent Soul monk feel so poor that he urinates blood. A cricket or a Qingming needle talisman feels like cutting flesh. There are also resources below pill formation. People don't say how much you want. Also catch a lot. After all, casual cultivators can become Nascent Souls. You can't imagine how many bones there are under your hands. How can you be poor? I really think he is a good man and a faithful woman. He casually killed a few monsters in the open sea. Loot a wave of golden elixir monks. Grab a few small sects and small business alliances. You can earn millions of resources. Otherwise, how do you think Qing Yi Lao Mo got his reputation? These Yuanying old ghosts have no shortage of mid- to low-level resources. What is lacking are high-level resources above the late stage of pill formation. Not to mention that such resources are scarce. It's also something that even money can't buy. Or in the secret realms of major forbidden places🔨🔨

When the spirit beast advanced to the eighth level, he neither placed any restrictions nor spared any means, so he was asked to swear an oath to protect the sect for a thousand years Look at the losses suffered by the old devil in the original work. Basically, the spirit beasts and spirit insects updated their restraint means every time they advanced, and they all suffered a big loss. After the spirit beast advanced, the protagonist also took the initiative to call each other Taoist friends, which was too ridiculous. What if she rebels in the future? What is the solution to setting the spirit beast as a female? Everyone knows in their hearts that women don't care and just trust a foreign race without leaving any room for themselves. I won't watch it again if I don't change this. It's too poisonous.

To be honest, it's normal for mortals to accept girls. I didn't expect you to write an original girl. If nothing else, Fan Zuozhi is better than you writing an original heroine. There are many other things that are not clearly written or explained clearly. What you wrote is more rubbish than a tomato. How did you want to have a meal at the starting point?

Is the author licking Han Li? What does a virtual character have to lick? In the name of licking Han Li, he is trying to lick Wangyu's dermatitis.