A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: From the Point-Rising Cloud Sword to the Green Bamboo Cloud-Swarm Sword

The protagonist was very frustrated when getting along with Han Li. It was fair game for the protagonist to have any disputes with Han Li throughout the whole process. However, when he was about to teleport and saved Nangong Wan, Han Li immediately asked Nangong Wan to kill the protagonist, but then he was seriously injured without agreeing. From this point of view, it is understandable that Han Li wanted to protect himself, but what he did seemed disgusting, and Nangong Wan was also disgusting. The protagonist, a time traveler, actually believed that Han Li was a demonic golden elixir that attacked him. Apart from anything else, it would have been impossible for Nangong Wan to reach peak combat power immediately by absorbing Han Li just after being seriously injured, and it was even more impossible for him to beat away the elixir-forming monks in an instant. As long as the protagonist has a brain, he will know that Han Li asked Nangong Wan to take action (ps: Are there any other readers here who feel the same way?). The first thing the protagonist should do after the teleportation is to forcefully kill Han Li at the risk of serious injury to take revenge, and grab the small green bottle by the way. If they were still so-called "harmful friends" before, at least Nangong Wan and Han Li were enemies to death when they attacked the protagonist together. The same is true for the author. He beat a Foundation Establishment monk until all his orifices were bleeding. Given the fragility of the human body, it was impossible to fully heal him no matter how much he nursed him. The author treated him as an ordinary injury and slowly nursed him back to health. Force the protagonist to ignore this matter? If you say that you designed the plot specifically for the follow-up, then obviously you have not grasped the scale well, because not only did you write a random thing here, but you also seriously reduced the protagonist's intelligence.

Dealing with the relationship with Han seems poisonous Writing fan fiction either treats the original protagonist as a passerby, or builds a good relationship. The most poisonous thing is to treat the original protagonist as an opponent. The protagonist has the advantage but cannot kill the original protagonist, or is plotted by the original protagonist and can only comfort himself. He dare not kill, and the licking is not in place. This kind of watching is the most frustrating

What a mess, the protagonist is a dog licker, Han Li's dog licker, the protagonist of the chapter "Jie Ying Zhang" personally admits that the world of immortality is meaningless without Han Li as an immortal cultivator. After returning to Tiannan, he found out that Han Li plotted against the protagonist and caused him to be seriously injured. He said that he didn't care about it anymore. Hahahahaha, the more I read, the more crazy I become.

Nangong Wan almost beat the protagonist to death, but the protagonist Yuanying returned and politely said it was not intentional and you can forgive him 😅

Others are playing at the 11th and 12th levels in the Immortal Ascension Conference. If you play at 9 levels, I can't imagine winning at 9 levels.

I don't think the hook is big enough. Is it interesting for Han Li to be sweet every day? You want to be your own protagonist. This is a fanfic. You can't even defeat Han Li in practice.

Old turtle! ! ! It looks like he is not licking, but if you think about it carefully, the licking is powerful and the licking is hidden.

Either don't accept it or don't write the plot about Han Li's underground palace and Nangong Wan, and then the protagonist goes to join in the fun I don't know what the bad taste is.

Many people are debating whether to have a heroine or not and whether to have a harem. There are a lot of brats. Of course I don't want a heroine. Just have a woman. Why? Do I have to be responsible for sleeping? What kind of child psychology? I am a demonic monk, a bunch of virgin children.

1. The writing is not good 2. The protagonist's character is not good 3. It's not exciting 4. Can't the plot advance without Han Li? Giving opportunities to Han Li in various ways 5. If you don't accept the purple spirit when you enter the Miaoyin Gate, why go in there?