Longevity: My Cheat Only Unlocked After I Successfully Built My Foundation

The protagonist, Lei Linggen, can refine alchemy and draw talismans, and has a golden finger to ripen the spirit mansion. He started as a casual cultivator in the city and eventually succeeded in ascending to the throne step by step.

The author's writing style is a bit lacking. It reads dryly. He just pushed forward line by line like an outline, without adding in the details.

I feel like the author has been free recently and has finally taken care of this novel. Please keep writing.

Reading this book makes me feel dazzling and depressing. Some women can be picked up or not. Author, if you don't have the writing power, you should write less. If you write, you won't pick up, and you can't get up or down. Then why do you always describe how beautiful the figures of female cannon fodder and enemy women are? Do you make us jealous? I'm really convinced.

Don't like the main character's character. Always like to make trouble secretly, without considering the consequences. After telling Ancestor Meng that a war was coming, which resulted in the change of ownership of Yuelan City and the death of Master Yuelan, the protagonist just lamented that he did not expect this to happen, and really wanted to cause some trouble and some green tea. And the protagonist's foundation building should owe a debt of gratitude to Master Yue Lan. Master Yue Lan established the city of casual cultivators and provided an environment for casual cultivators to build foundations. The article says that people from other areas come here to build foundations, and it can be seen that the foundation building environment is good. Master Yuelan was indecisive and asked his subordinates to fight for the spiritual land and not kill anyone. It can be seen that the surrounding environment is quite safe. Now that Yuelan City has changed its owner, the sect is in charge. Although it is not written, it is definitely not as good for casual cultivators as before. Foundation building must give priority to sect monks. The protagonist is equivalent to building a foundation and going ashore, then tearing down the bridge. If you don't have a strategy that is superior to others, don't go around secretly and causing trouble to benefit yourself at the expense of others.

Building the foundation of the three spiritual roots is a blessing, but there is no hope for anything else? Are you kidding me? Dark cultivator again? , Then isn't the fifth spiritual root all about practicing qi? The two spiritual roots are expected to reach the later stage of foundation building. Only one spiritual root can break through to the next level? What the hell is this setting?

I suggest changing the support method of the Tongzhou Association. Cultivation of immortality is about breaking off the relationship. It is better to change it to building the foundation and then paying back the foundation-building elixir and borrowing the spirit stone. It is not a nanny. It is not convenient to keep breaking off.

If the author doesn't know how to write emotional scenes, then don't write about how many women there are. Stallion stories are not popular anymore.

What is the right way and not the right way? Pig's feet lived to be forty years old. Is he so naive? In the world of immortality, strength is respected and profit is the top priority. We are not in the same camp, so why can't we stop you from forming a pill? Don't you understand pig's feet?

The author doesn't want to be a young man. He's obviously very good at writing, but suddenly he touches himself, which makes him a little disgusting.

The previous article talked about the boat club established by the protagonist 18 years ago. The early stage of Qi training is 10/year, the mid-term is 20/year, and the late stage is 30/year Estimated spiritual stone contribution of each person in the 18 years is as follows: Zhang Tie: Contribution is 18 years, based on the mid-term average of 18*20=360. Gu Musheng: His contribution is less than 18 years, and he is currently in the middle stage of Qi training, estimated to be 18*15=270. Cheng Yao: Estimated contribution is 250. Qi Hanmo: I was only 8 years old eighteen years ago, and now I have just reached the fourth level of Qi training. I estimate that my contribution will be 9 years and my contribution will be 100. Teng Feng: He was only 5 years old eighteen years ago, and he is only at the fourth level of qi training now. It is estimated that his contribution years are less than 9 years, and his contribution is 80%. Bai Qing: He was only 1 year old eighteen years ago. He is now at the third level of Qi training. He joined the alliance at the age of 13 or 4 and contributed 50 spiritual stones. A total of 360+270+250+100+80+50=1110. The protagonist returns 300 per year. Until Bai Qing built the foundation. But Bai Qing only paid 50. 666, I have never seen such a good Madonna protagonist. I don't know how the plot is designed. There is also a pile for the author to wash. After writing so many chapters, the lack of comments in the comment section speaks for itself.

The biggest problem with this book is that she likes to be a nanny, and everyone who has a relationship with the protagonist gets a lot of benefits from the protagonist. In recent chapters, things have started to get messy again, and the protagonist is Buzi, a powerful figure in the upper world, which is the same old style.

If you don't have a daughter, you can get thousands of orders. If you have a single woman, you can get thousands of orders. If you have many women, you can get hundreds of thousands of orders. If you have a group of wives and concubines, you can get platinum. The author should think more about it.

Name: Dai Jianxiu Hate Level: High Deeds: Trap the protagonist in a place where everyone is betrayed and separated from their relatives; put the protagonist in the conflict of golden elixirs and may die at any time; prevent the protagonist from meeting the master, leading the way for the last time; taking away the spiritual veins of the martial arts that the protagonist should have obtained, and having the hatred to block the way Recommended treatment: Yi tribe Exterminate the family, slaughter all the relatives and friends; extract the soul and light the lamp, blowing the evil wind to the gods Name: Wang Laozu Hate level: low Deeds: defrauding the protagonist of a hundred spirit stones Recommended treatment: only kill the culprit, and let the other tribesmen be exterminated and not hunt down (Book friends can add it by themselves)

I saw about a hundred chapters. The protagonist established his foundation in the first chapter. Then, almost a hundred chapters later, there was no mention of the protagonist practicing seriously once, including the progress of his practice. It was all about trivial things, such as improving talismans here and refining elixirs there. Changing the skills and practicing the secret method, and then there are too many supporting roles. Cultivation of immortality. You must be cultivating. It's so damn foundation-building. After writing a hundred chapters, it stopped at the early stage of foundation-building and the progress bar didn't even move. I don't know if this progress will continue in the future, but I just can't help but complain about it.

These days, the more versatile you are, the faster you can pounce. Readers are tired of seeing protagonists who can do everything

So far, there are no poisonous points. You can see that the current problem is about Qinglong Mountain. Now it is clear that Dai basically uses the protagonist's life to lure out the mastermind behind her apprentice. If the protagonist does nothing in the future, or even licks it, I can only say that it will not be long.

To be honest, the author, I have read some of your last book, True God in Blood Clothes, and subscribed to some. In your book on cultivating immortals, you have to establish the character of the protagonist, who is both stubborn and adventurous. Especially these two recent psychological descriptions of the protagonist are too embarrassing 😒

Why did the author have to write a beautiful character like Cheng Yao like this?

The setting is too difficult. It may take hundreds of years for a talented person to achieve something, but it is impossible to develop it. How can you, a casual cultivator, have such great skills? Even fools know there is a problem. It only takes 200 years to build the foundation, double the golden elixir, and only 800 years for the Nascent Soul. This is what the author said is doubled. Hundreds of years are wasted to study skills. Maybe the author writes casually to reflect the difficulty, without thinking about whether the basic logic is smooth.

After becoming a foundation builder, there is obviously no shortage of resources, so why haven't I practiced? The Que family is a hundred arts, but the premise is to serve the cultivation base. If there are so many resources, not to exchange them for cultivation resources, it is putting the cart before the horse.

I feel that cultivating immortals is too easy. All the brothers and sisters of the protagonist have established foundations. There is no difficulty and no surprises. All the protagonists are

The most exciting moments in many fantasy fairy novels are before and after foundation building

I deliberately spent money to get an initial subscription, just to say a few words. The protagonist Goldfinger's second spiritual island can speed up time. In one day outside, a thousand years have passed in the spiritual island. I remember correctly. One day is 1,000 years, 10 days is 10,000 years, 100 days is 100,000 years Then the star tree only needs 100 days to meet the protagonist's requirements. How long has the protagonist been forming the pill?

So far it seems to be more to my liking. This book follows the path of mortals. The protagonist has not experienced Dr. Mo, so he is not only born and gifted as a mortal, but his mentality is closer to that of a mortal. At the same time, as a recent work, the author does not deliberately maintain the atmosphere of cultivating immortals. Occasionally there are modern jokes, but it has a different kind of mortal atmosphere. Not only the protagonist in the book is mortal, but the supporting characters are also mortal, adding many opportunities and dilemmas that ordinary people will encounter, and adding stereotyped characters with love, hate and hatred similar to those in the martial arts genre. Traditional descriptions of immortal characters are very extreme, with the main character aiming for full marks, and other supporting characters being labeled as passing 60 points. However, the character creation in this book is neither high nor low, and instead enriches the category of immortality.

I've read Chapter 537 and won't read the rest.

Hey, the more uncomfortable thing is that your skill is obviously the kind of skill that others don't want, but the various magical powers you have shown, in my opinion, its shortcomings can be completely ignored, especially the ability to save dead people. To put it bluntly, as for the protagonist's skill, you can practice it for people who can barely break through the foundation. It is quite useful. First of all, it is super strong. His healing ability can cure poisons that even second-grade street doctors cannot cure, and he can also save the dead eggs of third-order monsters. I can only say that this makes me feel uncomfortable. It is considered a big poison. As long as you say that this technique is an inherited technique obtained or an awesome technique obtained from a secret realm, I can accept it, but yours is the kind of rubbish technique that others look down upon.

It's quite palatable, human thinking, and human bottom line. The plot is not retarded, and the occasional flaws are smoothed over with jokes or slightly reasonable explanations. The emotional scenes are a bit sloppy, but it's good not to be sentimental. The climax is a little short. Isn't it too early to enter a stable plot with 1.4 Million words? Or maybe it's because you update too little😒 Don't mess around, keep it up!

No baby has been born yet. You must be too slow. Many people watching have run away.

I gave you all my monthly tickets, so you must not stop updating like that green-haired turtle!