Longevity: My Cheat Only Unlocked After I Successfully Built My Foundation

This book is so depressing! Some of the female characters are left untouched. If you don't have the writing skills, then write less of them. You write them but don't stop, leaving them in the middle. Why do you keep describing how great the female cannon fodder and enemy women are? Are you trying to make us envious? I'm truly speechless.

I don't like the main character's personality. He always likes to stir up trouble secretly, without considering the consequences. He tells the Meng Clan Ancestor that a great war is imminent, which leads to the change of the Moon Mist City Lord and the death of Moon Mist Master. The protagonist just sighs that he didn't expect things to turn out this way and really wants to add some trouble.

Achieving Foundation Establishment with three spiritual roots is already a stroke of luck, and there's no hope for anything else? Are you kidding me? Another dark cultivation story? Then wouldn't a fifth spiritual root mean only Qi Refining cultivators? Two spiritual roots might have a chance at late Foundation Establishment, while only a single spiritual root can break through to the next realm? What kind of absurd setting is this?

I suggest changing the assistance method of the Fellowship. Cultivation emphasizes severing ties, so it would be better to change it to allow borrowing after the Foundation Establishment Pill is repaid. It's not like being a babysitter; hesitation is inconvenient.

If the author can't write romance, then don't write about multiple women. Harem novels aren't popular anymore.

What's this talk of right and wrong? The protagonist is forty years old, is he really that naive? In the cultivation world, strength and profit reign supreme. We're not even on the same side, so why can't we stop you from forming your core? Doesn't the protagonist understand this?

The author shouldn't be so pretentious. The writing is perfectly good, but then suddenly there's this self-indulgent sentimentality; it's utterly disgusting.

The previous text mentioned the Tongzhou Society established by the protagonist 18 years ago. Early Qi Refining stage: 10 spirit stones/year; Mid-stage: 20 spirit stones/year; Late-stage: 30 spirit stones/year. Estimated spirit stone contributions from each person over 18 years are as follows: Zhang Tie: Contributed for 18 years, average 18*20=360 spirit stones (mid-stage).

The overall plot is good, but the author is somewhat presumptuous, trying to write some supposedly reasonable settings, but it's a poor imitation, like the story of Dong Shi imitating Xi Shi and the man from Handan who tried to walk like someone from Handan.

It's really baffling. He's clearly cheating, and a pretty big one at that, yet they're relentlessly suppressing his combat power and writing about uncontrollable events, always getting saved by others. He reaches Nascent Soul stage in over 500 chapters, then there's this ridiculous Heavenly Tribulation, and he's saved again by some other ridiculous character.