I Spread Behelit in the Modern World

A world without hope is boring to look at, and the writing of redemption in the later stage will definitely lead to a thunderstorm, because the fear setting foreshadowed in the previous article has set up a structure, which is quite a strong character for the protagonist, but it is also very contradictory. The purpose of the protagonist's coming to the world is to become a human again, but by the time he arrives, the world has long been catastrophic by his own manipulation and has become an apocalyptic disaster. It is no different from the ghost world. What are you trying to do? This is an extremely contradictory setting. It is foreseeable that I would like to continue to recommend the plot. The description of salvation is inevitable, but it conflicts with the core setting of the full text (relying on equivalent exchange of negative emotions to come to the world). If you write the full text, it will collapse. If you don't write it, it will be a black article. Subscriptions will also be dropped.

Author, you are very stubborn, how dare you touch this subject. This subject matter must not be suppressed, it must be logical. , Although there is a risk of being lost at any time. After you write one book and become famous, readers will follow you if you continue to write the second book under your trumpet. If you force the protagonist to make some illogical plots, you will lose your money and reputation. Even if you are blocked and you continue to open a book, there will be no readers to follow the previous book. It will be a cycle of (open an account → write a book → rush to the market → open an account).

After reading it in one night, I thought about it and gave the author some ideas. The author's writing style is a bit green. The details of the scenes and the depiction of characters and actions need to be improved, but it is enough. The author has chosen the subject matter very well and the process is quite interesting. Among them, I call the Jesus chapter wonderful. However, it is a bit anticlimactic. After Jesus turned black, he stopped so easily? Even the way he stopped was persuaded by the God of the Abyss in a few words? This makes people feel that Jesus' blackening has no weight. The only thing that can be said about this paragraph is deus ex machina. I think it can be described in detail here, describing how Jesus' destruction was prevented by humans, and the sacrifices humans made. The shining points of humanity in it finally moved Jesus and made him willing to give humans another chance, instead of being persuaded in a few words, which seemed that Jesus' despair and anger were so cheap. Finally, I would like to give you an opinion. Su Yuan is too strong and is no longer suitable for description from the main perspective. His appearance will only give people a sense of mechanical deity. I suggest that more descriptions be given to those who are desperate after getting Behelite and those who are willing to fight against evil.

To be honest, the author intended Lu Ji to become the fourth Hand of God, but after reading his information and deeds, it was really inappropriate. His influence on the world was too low. The predecessors of Hand of God are all representatives of an era. They can be the most popular culture, the most mainstream beliefs, and the most influential ideas. But Lu Ji Far from meeting these conditions, he is not as tragic and famous as Che Guevara, nor is he as symbolic as the Palestinian thrower. It can even be said that in terms of influence, the number one male gunner in the Japanese server is above him Lu Ji's popularity, thoughts, and influence are far from enough to become a representative of an era.

This psychological profiling of yours is simply cheating and you can't even act it out. Don't you think it's strange to yourself?

I have read Sword Wind and Great Sword, and the author should not attack me with this. I can only say that this book is a pity. The underlying setting of the dark flow of the Abyss and the mixture of chainsaw man and demon are very interesting, but the core logic is very contradictory. The protagonist does not have any Abyss God character, and the Leziman attributes are not much, as if the author is urging He seems to do this, especially the religious content. It is even more obvious that the author has not carefully read the Old Testament or the Jewish Bible and the New Testament. The description and understanding of this aspect can be said to be very one-sided. The fabricated personality can only be said to be a copy of Father Anderson in the Royal Knights of Hell, and the crazy character of Dracula. He has not been shaped. He can only be said to be a good tailor. The works he sews have clear main colors, but the author wants to sew them all together. The result is that they are not alike. The clues have already been revealed when writing about the bloody battle in Europe. The image of Gawain as a revealer is also inconsistent. The author wants to write about his gradual and firm character. The process of establishing a belief, the result is that the concept is instilled after a few fights, the depressing setting itself is not pleasing, and the writing is often incomprehensible. A lot of content actually has no meaning and function. It could have been written better. The writing style is OK, but the rhythm of the story, the story context and the climax interpretation are not so good.

He wanted to copy Jianfeng and sew up Chainsaw Man, but the author was incompetent and ended up with four different images.

It's a bit like the golden three chapters. At the end of the fourth chapter, the protagonist suddenly pinches a panel and pulls it out. It's a bit unsettling, and the B grid suddenly falls 😅

It collapsed as I wrote it. . . . Plot after release. Highlight a fight between the left and right brains

This book is quite good when written about modern times, but becomes a bit humorous when written about ancient times.